Date: Mar 12, 2015 07:29 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow Michael just wow.... Suicide is for the weak you're stronger than that! I respect Diane a little bit more for her protectiveness over Casey and the fact that when she saw Michael Jackson she didn't just immediately drop to her knees and beg him for money. Poor little Casey.
I dont know that Michael was stronger than that... he just had life's responsibilities....
Date: Feb 01, 2015 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
Woah. This was a dark one. Somehow you managed to take some dark shit and crank it up even more.
Okay, well starting from the beginning, I've got to say that your characterization of Elizabeth was just spot on. Nice job!
The suicidal toughts/cutting was very jarring for me, but I guess non too surprising given the context. I can't ever imagine Michael doing something like that though...ugh, how horribly sad...more than sad, really. More than words.
The crying in the meeting? Dang.
You got this. Keep it coming.
Date: Jan 31, 2015 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
What a heavy chapter. So I guess there is some good that came out of Casey & Diane's presence. At the same time, I would have hoped that someone else would have stepped in. Putting all of one's faith in life into two people is....a lot of two people to hold. The isolation......
I haven't forgotten about the uncertainty of a Malania/Michael romance. :heh:
Thank you for another great chapter