Date: Oct 02, 2014 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad the brothers said sorry
Date: Oct 01, 2014 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Each one of your chapters make me smile. So many cute elements in every one.
Date: Oct 01, 2014 11:57 am Title: Chapter 17
Ohh that was pretty good
Date: Sep 30, 2014 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter!!!
Date: Sep 29, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
I actually read somewhere that the Jacksons did take separate flights when touring. Talk about your close-nit family. Lol. So Mike & Honey Bee have a whole jet to themselves, huh? My, my, what are they to do now? ;) Destiny is one lucky female.
Date: Sep 28, 2014 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love that nickname. I think your interpretation of Michael is pretty right on. He's so sweet and easy for anyone to befriend him. This is exactly how I always saw him in real life. Nice work.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2014 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Destiny. Seems like she's really been through it. She definitely needs someone innocent & caring like Michael in her life. The tour should be good for her.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2014 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great start. I love how descriptive you are. You really brought the scene to life. I will be reading more. By the way, I'm honored that you've listed me as your favorite author. This is a privilege I'm not taking for granted & hopefully I can maintain this title :) Thank you.
Author's Response:
You are so very welcome! You are also a very talented writer and I'm excited to see how your work develops. Keep up the incredible work!
Date: Sep 25, 2014 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ooh they we're gonna make love
Date: Sep 24, 2014 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
This is too cute
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2014 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Im excited to see whats gunna happen. Keep it up!
Date: Sep 14, 2014 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Good job
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2014 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Thats crazy, its like parents only want you back when you become rich or famous
Date: Sep 12, 2014 02:34 am Title: Chapter 11
Ooh this is great
[Report This]Date: Sep 09, 2014 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving this story thus far. Keep up the great work!