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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Make A Big Impression

I also think it isn't fair that Erin has been single for most of this time. She needs a boyfriend and NOT Michael. It's his turn to suffer in silence.



Author's Response: Another great idea!! Thanks!

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Make A Big Impression

That's right Erin. You show him who's in control. Lol. Can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response: Thanks! There will me more!

Author's Response: Thanks! There will me more!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2014 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Gotta Make A Big Impression

This is a crazy story idea. I didn't read the prequel but based on what I've read so far, I don't see how Erin could ever forgive Michael. I mean they could stay friends, sure, but if it were me in her place that's all we'd ever be at this point. He made his choice. It was the wrong one, sure, but that's his problem. 

I am not one to usually hold grudges but there are some things that are unforgiveable. I don't see how she couldn't help but always feel like sloppy seconds if she were to get with him now. Actions speak louder than words. And fifteen years have passed. FIFTEEN!!! Surely he's had plenty of time to change his mind, but as long his marriage was working out no skin off his back, right? 

Plus there are family boundaries that should never get crossed and this is one of them. You should never betray your sister for a man, especially one who is so obviously not worth your time. 

Anyways, I'm interested to see if my feelings change as I keep reading. Gotta say that I don't see it happening. But you've definitely caught my interest! Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response: You're right! It is a bit crazy. I didn't intend to write a sequel but the readers insisted so hey, why not? I'm going to try and make this story work out the way people want it to without it being far-fetched and unrealistic but it will be hard considering the family boundaries in all. But thanks so much for reading and thanks for the review! It will really give me something to consider.

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