[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 10:09 am Title: Kisses in the dark
Nicely done. I'm glad they worked it out. I can easily see Mike saying yes to Tina for the mere reason of being too nice and not wanting to hurt her feelings. Lol he's just good like that, which for Jay that can be really annoying.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2015 09:20 am Title: A night above the skies
Whoa! Now things are really going to get awkward. They seriously need to talk about where they both stand.
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 08:38 pm Title: Simply Jayden and Michael?
Things are most likely going to get even more awkward between them as both their feelings begin to evolve into something more. Oh, boy. This might be a bumpy road.
Author's Response:
Hang on in there. The story will be better once you get over the next 5 chapters. I rushed the beginning a little (a lot) since it is not what is important in this story.
Date: Jun 03, 2015 08:30 pm Title: The meaning of a true family
Poor thing. The Jackson's are her only family.
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 08:23 pm Title: Moving to California
Another cute chapter. I think it's cute that Jay and Mike share a bed. For now, I understand that it's all in innocence. Being next to Michael is the only place Jay feels safe and comfortable. And Michael just loves to always have her near to him. It makes perfect sense. Nice work here.
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 08:14 pm Title: The beginning
Awww. This intro was extremely adorable. I love how they just hit it off instantly.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 07:47 pm Title: Leaving it all behind
Sad but probably for the best right now. Jayden needs to find herself. She's had too much trauma too young, and is emotionally stunted as a result.
And as for Michael, well sometimes you don't appreciate what you have until it is gone. I feel sad for him too but he hasn't exactly been treating her great lately. She didn't actually cheat on him. I think she was just feeling neglected.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2015 02:13 pm Title: Leaving it all behind
I am crying....i swear....god this is sad
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2015 01:18 pm Title: Leaving it all behind
Ive got tears falling this was so sad.
I hope Jayden can get herself together and she and Michael can find the way back together.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 10:48 am Title: Sisters in need
Well she didn't actually sleep with the other guy, so yes he should forgive her. But she needs to tell him. If he won't talk then scream it at him, just don't let it continue as is.
It would be good forJayden to move out and get a career and purpose of her own. She is not in a healthy place, because she is someone who if given too much time to sit around will dwell on the negative. Also if she had a life she wouldn't be so clingy and dependent on the presence of a man to be happy. Michael is always going to be busy with work, she needs to accept it or move on.
Gotta say, if I was a dude I wouldn't want to be in a relationship with her. Way too needy and she's always depressed.
Author's Response:
You're completely right. Jayden needs to get herself together. She's depressed all the time and living with Michael isn't helping her. She never really grew up and she's way too independant. She's just getting to the point where she can talk about Ally without crying. I too think it would be good for her to move out and get herself a life.
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 09:28 am Title: Sisters in need
I think jayden should give Michael the space and
time that he needs then hopefully they can work it out. Moving out may be tough for her but Yeah she should really start working on her and getting her life together. Thanks for updating I love this story btw. �😃
Author's Response:
You're definitely on to something. I will update soon but right now I'm getting ready to go to Munich with my schoolclass. Thank you for commenting! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2015 08:34 am Title: Betrayal
Wait I'm so confused right now when did she cheat? Did I miss something? �
Author's Response:
No, I was going to continue part 2 but then I accidentally deleted something. It doesn't really matter, because I was so bored with it I probably wouldn't have posted it. So I decided to skip a couple of boring chapters and jump right to part 3. Hope you enjoy. An explaining will come soon.
Date: Mar 04, 2015 04:03 pm Title: The beginning
Just so you know, I have not forgotten about this story! I got excited once I saw the update. Will catch up soon on reading..just wanted to let you know.
Author's Response:
No problem. I'm glad you're reading :))
[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2015 12:10 pm Title: At least we have each other
Really glad to see this, one of my favorites can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I just posted it! :))
Date: Feb 01, 2015 05:23 pm Title: Boiling feelings
Her aunt is a bitch!!!! Poor Jayden. I think her and Michael should talk about this. Hopefully they'll get the chance to without her aunt bringing her down.
Author's Response:
Her aunt is a bitch... I hope you'll stick around. I love your story! <3