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Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 5

Look who was going to hit his first...I like this story, cause it's not that heavy. This story is soo refreshing :)

Author's Response: Yea I'm kinda tired of writing about depressed, dark stories lol I wanted to make something that was sort of playful. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 5

would I run out, screaming like a little girl.

lol! That made me laugh ^-^

Pleeeease, go on :) <3



Author's Response: Lol I will

Reviewer: Dreamer102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 09:47 am Title: Chapter 5

Michaels got this down xD The only thing in his way are the girls and their... flirtyness. I don't think he's ready to go in there just yet... It's only his first day and he's still sweating bullets just by the girl walking up to him. She'll tell if he's nervous and maybe she'll go blather about it to her friends. That won't fit into his disguise. He needs to avoid that room... Also I wonder what Marlons thoughts are. Since he is with the popular kids will he see Michael soon? 



Author's Response: Keep reading! I will be updating soon!

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 08:28 am Title: Chapter 5

lol he aint gonna know how to act. but if he dont do it....he'll blow his cover. cant wait to see how this plays out.



Author's Response: You will just have to see what happens now won't you?

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2012 01:41 am Title: Chapter 4

This story is super cool and different! update soon.



Author's Response: I will!

Reviewer: Dreamer102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2012 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 4

Omg!! Michael... Ok. You can have an attitude and all. But don't let it affect your home life. And don't get an STD. And don't get beat up. And don't let your grades fall. .... And... That's all for now but there will be more. Oh and ask the teacher to move. Or at least switch with Kenny... 

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2012 04:48 am Title: Chapter 4

well looks like im gonna become a vampire. i need a new purse so maybe i can charm some random guy at the mall lol. sorry i have been away. im not dead lol. ill tell you ALLL about it soon, best believe, its gonna sond like some crap out of a movie lol. great chapter by the way.

Reviewer: meeechveee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2012 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oooooohhhh!!! He has to decide whether be wants it or not? Lmao. He is working it well. I would've been swooning and giggling too. The fact that he's so nervous but finds a way to over come it is great. Loved this chapter! Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2012 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

Kenny seems chill lol. Brittney sounds like hoe, only reason is I'm sayin that is cause my ex used to have an ex named Brittney and she hated me just cause I was goin out with him. But fuck him now, I'm still in love with him, he wants me to move on, so that's a big FUCK YOU to him. Lol

Continue by the way. 



Author's Response: Wow lol well I guess you wouldn't like his ex because yea....but you still hating his ex goes to show that you still love him eh? I think you should try to work it out. Depending on the reasons for breaking up ofcourse.

Reviewer: meeechveee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

AHHHH!!! I love it!! Please continue. Love sarcastic Mike. He was so smooth though. Glad he didnt fumble. His fam is funny tho lol. Bottle concept is cool but not water though. Vamps dont drink water bruh. Maybe a flask or a red container, something with a bit of mystery, but not water mayne. His lameness will be showing if he keeps to that.

 

UPDATE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: meeechveee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

lol I really like it so far and am so happy itll be nothing like Twilight. Its all about Team Jacob even though Bellas overly bland ass deserved no one. I just felt like jumping through the screen for a sec and setting all those mofos straight for harrassing and beating up my Michael. he and his sister are funny though lol. 

Reviewer: meeechveee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2012 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

LMAO! What? lol What a nerd. Why do you keep playing with my emotions. Here I thought I was gonna read about him being a sexy seductive vampire and its the complete opposite. I will admit its a pleasant shock. He better pull this off smoothly lol. SMH



Author's Response: He will pull this off!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love this, update :)



Author's Response: I will! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

To be honest..I thought that he was gonna get bit by a vampire ! x)

lmao! Go on, please!



Author's Response: Hahahahaha well maybe if he can find one

Reviewer: Dreamer102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2012 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooohh poor Michael *sad face* I sure do hope that this new beginning turns out the way he wants it to be. I dont know if too many places will take kindly to a vampire but *shrug* could work? As long as it doesnt wind up like his old school, I think he'll be ok...



Author's Response: I do too. Thanks for reviewing I surely do appreciate it

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