[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 3: Overwhelmed
Aww poor paris dude :/ this is a lot to deal with
Author's Response:
It is ):
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 3: Overwhelmed
Aww poor paris dude :/ this is a lot to deal with
Author's Response:
It sure is :/ thank you for reading and reviewing!! Xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: You Are Not Alone
This made me cry so much, god this is very touching. After knowing that I don't have that type of relationship with my father, and wishing that I did. But more, I wished that Michael was my father, but we don't pick our parents, right?
If Michael was my father..or at least a friend. I would talk to him for hours and hours and hours, about my problems. And he'd understand.
I mean, my father is like Joe. I basically had half of my childhood taken away because I had begun dancing at the age of 2 and I was a model. Until I was 12 I had stopped modeling. And continued to dance, I am never going to stop the love for dancing. I love it.
My childhood was taken away from me like Michael's. I fool around a lot, I'm like a kid. Even though I'm already becoming a woman next year, age 15, signifies us Hispanic women that we are becoming a women.
But to be honest, I don't wanna grow up, I may not have any freedom now and before, but if become older and go onto young adulthood, I may have that freedom.
Then again, it will all be occupied by performing. I belong on stage, I truly believe so. 12 years of dancing, means I may belong on the spotlight.
On the other hand,I'm going to love all the countries, like Brazil, Germany, India, China, Italy etc. Ever since I was a little girl I have always wanted to go to where Michael went, when he toured or traveled. And I know I might get the opportunity. Most of all also, is to the see the wonderful children of the world. I love children. Love them dearly. And also I get to meet the adorning fans whom have not lost faith in Michael, and who are still strong even though he is not with us. He is with us in our hearts, together, all of us. we are one.
But.it isn't, and wont be easy, being Michael Jackson.
Author's Response:
Aww girl, don't cry ): I'm flattered to know I was able to touch you guys' hearts through my writing. That is a big compliment, so thank you (:
I don't have that exact relationship with my father either, but I fortunately know I can count on him for whatever I need. We really love each other, just like I know your dad loves you. Maybe he doesn't know how to express himself in a way you might find proper, but I'm sure he loves and cares about you more than anything in this world. You're his princess hehe!
And why don't you try and build a relationship like that with him? Y'know, you could invite him to go out just the two of you. Have some father-daughter time, I'm sure you'd both have fun. Also, you could talk to him, and tell him everything you'd like him to know. Maybe you could bond a little, right?
I'm sorry you feel that way, like your childhood has been taken away from you. However, it's never too late to be a child at heart, just like Mike was. Don't fear adulthood, though. I'm your age, but I slowly prepare myself for it. Therefore, enter this new, important phase of your life with your right foot (;
If there's any talent I wish I had, it has to be dancing. The only thing I can do well is the moonwalk, but that's all lol. I'm a clutz! Thank God I found myself in singing, that's my passion. It's singing that I feel I should do on stage, it's my favorite thing to do ever.
Oh, and I'm really excited for your tour. I'm sure everything will work out beautifully, and I can't wait to be there to see it. You'll do great! You'll love Brazil, honey! You'll fall in love with this place, I can almost guarantee. Maybe we could meet when you came here (: You and the MJ Fam are my second family, and I truly love and respect you all. I mean, we share a huge love for Michael, don't we?
You don't have to be Michael Jackson though, as awesome as he is. Be yourself. Be Carolina Herrera. That's good enough!
Anyway, thank you again for reading and reviewing, it means a lot (: Much love, girl <3
Date: Dec 06, 2012 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 10: You Are Not Alone
Aww! This was a very sad chapter!! but I'm glad Michael knows now. It's normal for him to react the way he did but I know that he'll support Paris. With a father like Michael you're never alone.
I love it!!! Please, keep on writing!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was ): I agree, it's better that he knows now than later on. That's right. Oh well, thank you so much for everything, sweetie! Much love <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 10: You Are Not Alone
:OOO poor paris :( update. This chap made me feel depressed
Author's Response:
Aww, I hope that's not a bad thing lol (: thank you, honey! Much love
Date: Dec 06, 2012 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 10: You Are Not Alone
Omg his reaction!! I didn't know he was going to react that way. But good thing janet was there with them. Can't wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response:
Haha!! I didn't know also. Actually, when I planned the story, Michael would react differently. He wouldn't explode nor would he yell at her. However, I'm reading Frank Cascio's book, "My Friend Michael", and I confess I'm seeing a whole other side of our idol. That made me think twice before writing this chapter, and made me make my final decision as to what his reaction would be. I hope I did well (: Anyways, thank you so much! xoxo
Date: Dec 06, 2012 11:55 am Title: Chapter 10: You Are Not Alone
I'm crying... this was extremely touching. Such a delicate subject, and to read about Paris and Michael going through something like this is terrible.
My compliments go to you for the way you managed to recreate the scene. It was great and real. Good job. *sobs*
Author's Response:
Oh wow, thank you! I cried too while writing it. I don't know, the scene and the circumstances were just forming perfectly in my head, so it made me cry. I hope I was able to make you, lovely readers, have the scene created inside of your heads. Thank you so much once again, sweetie! Xoxo <3
Date: Dec 06, 2012 11:04 am Title: Chapter 10: You Are Not Alone
Finally he knows it...his reaction...wow :o
I never knew that he could be like that...but I can understand it...
wonderful, that he wants to be there for her <3
please go on (:
Author's Response:
Haha yeah. Thank you so much for everything!! Much love (:
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon
BAHAHAHA!!! If they tell Michael together I can just imagine what Michael would do. His head would snap towards Drew then he would blow up with anger and yell n stuff. Drew would probably piss his pants! AHAHAHAHAHA!! Oh my gersh! Dats some funny shit... Lol
Anyway! Loved it, can't wait for more :D
Author's Response:
Hahahahah!! That'd be insane! But thank you so much, it means a lot (: xoxo
Date: Dec 03, 2012 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: It Happened Much Too Soon
Love this... <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much (:
Date: Dec 02, 2012 09:53 am Title: Chapter 9: Will You Be There
Aww, I'm glad that Drew is supportive of Paris. Now she really has to let Michael know and I know he will be supportive also. One more chapter!!! I really love this story!! I'll always encourage you to continue!
Author's Response:
Yes! Hahah one more chapter!!!! So excited to write Chapter 10, but it will probably take longer, I'm not sure lol. Oh, thank you so much!! Love you, and your support really means a lot (: much love <3
Date: Dec 02, 2012 07:07 am Title: Chapter 9: Will You Be There
So excited for more.
Author's Response:
More is coming your way in a few days (; thanks for reading and reviewing! Much love
Date: Dec 02, 2012 06:48 am Title: Chapter 9: Will You Be There
Cuute Chapter! (: Now Drew's there for Paris. Will both tell Michael? I'm excited, how he'll react.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned, sweetie! Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot (: much love
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2012 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 9: Will You Be There
She needs to tell Michael! update soon x :)
Author's Response:
Stay tuned 'cause things are about to get MORE interesting then, lol! Thank you so much!! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2012 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 9: Will You Be There
Finally Paris gets more support, especially from Drew <3
Author's Response:
Yes!! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! <3