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Reviewer: Lovergirl95 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 09:43 am Title: Prologue

Perfect chapter! I feel every single emotion! You're doing great! Keep updating!  :) 

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 08:55 am Title: Chapter 11

That doctor's an asshole, not sure why it took me until just now to realize it. The relationship Michael and Jamie have is great, even in their situation they've managed to find happiness and peace. Amazing chapter, as always.

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2012 07:20 am Title: Chapter 11

really good update!!!

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Date: Nov 22, 2012 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

This was such a beautiful chapter, they are wonderful together. So glad she's finally going to sleep, because she wants too. Hopefully Michael will fall asleep as well. Great chapter, can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2012 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

Awww im happy that Jamie finally fell asleep in the safty of Michael's arms. Im glad Jamie & Michael are together. And when Michael said he was lonely during his Bad & Dangerous Tour i started to cry. I hope the Doctors dont break up Michael & Jamie. I can honestly say that this is my one of my favorite chapter and i can give you a million reasons why but i dont have enough space to type them out. Keep up the good work. #TeamMichaelAndJamieForEver!!!!!! Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E

Reviewer: Lovergirl95 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2012 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

I came home from a horrible day at work. This cheered me up! I love this chapter!! Michael is so sweet!

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2012 10:17 am Title: Prologue

Im Happy One Of Them Finally Made The First Move . . .

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

That last bit was intense! It's about time, I was wondering who was gonna make the 1st move. Happy to see it was Michael.

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 9

OMG They kissed Jamie & Michael finally kissed each other im so happy. And i love Peter Pan its one of my many favorite Disney movie. And when Jamie said that people need to stop hurting Michael she is right Michael never ever in a million years deserved to get hurt!!! And the last part of this chapter touched me like the whole chapter did and i loved it. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

I can't wait 4 them 2 become a couple. They can really help eachother a lot. Can't wait 4 more.

Reviewer: Lovergirl95 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 9


This is heating up! I love it! :) 

Reviewer: MJrulzBiebersuxs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2012 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 8

Aww this was such a touching chapter. I didnt like the beging but when it got to Jamie's pov i loved it,sorry but thats how i feel.I dont want anything bad to ever happen to Jamie ever and i dont want that evil man hurting her and destroying the relationship and trust she formed with Michael. I know that Michael will protect Jamie with every fiber in his bones because he Loves her and i know Jamie will do the same for Michael. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

Aww I see the connection growing between them. I loved this chapter & continue soon.

Reviewer: Lovergirl95 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2012 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 8

This is my favortie chapter so far! This is the BEST birthday present! Thank you for being so talented in writing! 

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2012 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 7

I see love is in the air 4 those two soon ;) can't wait 4 more.

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