Reviewer: downwitmike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2013 07:19 am Title: Chapter 30

Good chapter. "Her sighs is my oxygen". Great line. Very expressive.

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2013 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

Excellent! Muy excellente!!!! I'm guessing Jamie experienced some extremely traumatic event in which she possibly knew someone who was abusive towards her and threatened her life if she told. That's my guess, lol. Can't wait to see if its right though. Great chapter!:-)())

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 08:23 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh snap! This makes me wodner, what's up with Jamie? Why can't see sleep? And ehy must she push away our sweet darling Mikey? SO MANY QUESTIONZ!! XDXD Excellent chapter though hun! :-)))

Author's Response:

You'll have to read on and find out :)

Reviewer: downwitmike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2013 09:22 pm Title: EDIT TO NOT A CHAPTER

Just wanted you to know that I think your story is good. Keep writing, but only if it is something that makes you happy and gives you an outlet. I don't usually write reviews because I'm a pretty strict critic and most stories on here are so unrealistic or crazy or badly written with horrible grammar.....but I digress. We as readers appreciate the effort the good authors make we don't want to lose them. Keep writing if it makes you happy and not for feedback. Think about the reader who is using your story as an escape from this crazy world. The reader like me who misses MJ so much and love reading stories that are true to his personality. Stay encouraged and keep at it.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2013 01:57 pm Title: EDIT TO NOT A CHAPTER

NO YOU CAN"T LEAVE you're one of my favorite authors on here. You're not allowed to stop posting and that's final LOL!

I understand how frustrating it is to work hard on a chapter, post it, and then get NO feedback. I only have one story going since I don't have time for any more, so I can imagine with multiple stories that the frustration builds exponentially. At the same time as a reader with a busy schedule there isn't time to comment on every chapter of every story. I try and comment/review as often as I can but sometimes life just gets in the way. I haven't commented in over 2 weeks simply due to work/travel. But I always read all of your stories. I'll try to be more aware of this in the future.

 

Reviewer: sammisweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2013 04:10 pm Title: Prologue

I'm a new reader from New Zealand, and I have just spent the whole morning reading your story. I adore the way you portray Michael, the reality of situations in his life that he had to deal with and his vulnerability that we all knew he had. The last few chapters have definitely made me tear up, it brings back memories and I'm so outraged that his kind nature to heal the world was rewarded with disgusting allegations that had no evidence whatsoever. The world ruined the most beautiful human being that ever lived. I may only be 18 but I still feel the hurt and pain, he should have never had to suffer and I only wish that I could turn back time for his innocent mind to be restored - they tainted his beautiful soul. Your writing is incredible, if you're not professionally writing outside of this site then you should be. Please continue on with your story, reading these fictions keep me calm and help me get away from reality sometimes, so I just want to thank you. Love Sammi xoxo 

Reviewer: Dri Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2013 07:18 am Title: EDIT TO NOT A CHAPTER

Thanks, Femalien! I'll try to do what you said ... I deleted my comment because I do not want everyone to be aware of what is happening in my life ...It's private.

Thank you so much!And please,please dont leave us!!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2013 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Awwww!! That was so cute ad sweet!!! Mikey and Jamie's first meeting and its already love at first sight!! Great chapter!!!!