[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2013 07:18 am Title: Chapter 47: I Have This Dream
Haha girl you never fail to surprise me!!!
He hang up on her face XD I know it wasn't that easy to talk about their kiss, but Wendy could have managed it better, if she only had wanted! You know what ruined it all? The thought of their age and shit like that. Oh, c'mon, who cares? He might be a 33 years man old but he never looked like one! And besides, she's 18 - legally adult... really, this age thing pisses me off when it comes to Michael. He clearly was expecting her to say something... You know what, maybe Michael has understood better his own feelings when it came to that kiss. But who knows, I say something and you end up surprising me again and again in the other chapters :) <3
Really, I CAN'T WAIT to read the next chapter. I just hope that on the other line it won't be AUSTIN calling! lol I might get very angry if it is so u_u
Author's Response: Don't worry. I won't make it Austin. I'm not that cruel. The drama is just simmering up. It needs to explode at some point and I'm working for that. You won't be disappointed. I assure you that. Your reviews always make me come up with new ideas and additions to the plot. So I really value each and every word you write for a review. I'll upload a new chapter as soon as I get it done with. Until then, much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2013 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 47: I Have This Dream
Girl I would have hung up in your face too!!! Because he obviously was exposing himself to you when he kissed you and it's like you spit in his face!
Author's Response: Whoa there Southern_cutie! Now don't take it so personally! Remember, more tension there is, more explosive the climax is going to be! Tee hee hee. Thanks for being my 200th reviewer! Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2013 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 47: I Have This Dream
Hey are you going to update Sweet Deception I miss that story.
Author's Response: Now that you requested it, guess I'd upload a chapter soon. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 47: I Have This Dream
Oh God, what was that now?? And the phone rang again, Jesus, I'm hyperventilating here!! LOL!!
I hope you update soon, can't wait!!!!!!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahahahahaha!!!! Just hold on to your horses girl. I'll upload as soon as I can! Thank you so much for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Mar 28, 2013 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl
Omg yes FINALLY HAHAA!
I read This one twice! He just kissed her, but she shouldn't have ran away . :)
Thank you for your amazing story. It always lights up my day!
Author's Response: Vankes!!!!!! I missed you girl!!!!! And you read this twice??? Aw shucks girl! You made me so happy!!!! Your words fill my heart with joy! Thank you so much for such a beautiful review! Sending much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2013 07:11 am Title: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl
Wow Michael & Wendy kissed :). I'm just hoping Wendy talks to Michael about what had happen and about what he said to her. I have to say that I agree with Bill all the way. And Wendy your better than that to have an eating disorder but I understand that she feel guilty about what had happen between her and Michael. When Michael kissed Wendy I have to admit it that I was extreamly happy but I kinda knew what was going to happen after that. And let's just hope that Austin can help Wendy through this bump in her life and Michael will also help her. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: Hey sweety pie! I always look forward to your reviews. They help me how to proceed with the story next. So thank you so much for all your reviews! I truly alpreciate all of them. Yeah, eventually they'd talk about it. Just can't say how I'd want the conversation to go though! Mwahahahaha. I'll explore her eating disorder issues a bit more in the next chapters. I'll update as soon as I can. Sending much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2013 06:52 am Title: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl
Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
*takes a deep breath*
Okay, let's start from the begin. Calm down Maggie, calm down!!! :D
It isn't easy for me to analyze your characters... because I'm sure you know them better than me and you sure know way more than me in psychology... fortunately Bill came to help me :D haha, I think that all the things he said were true. For me, Michael likes attention and isn't used to be "ignored"... Wendy obviously doesn't do it intentionally, she's that way and that's all... They still have to know each other better, especially when it comes to things like this...
BUT GIRL....
WHEN HE KISSED HER...
HE KIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDD HEEEEEEEER DDDDD: I wasn't expecting that!!!!!
I was "WTF" and then I LITERALLY started doing the victory dance ahahahhahaha I was soooo happy mwahahhahah
Her first kiss! By Michael! Take that, Austin! :D lol okay... Cerine, forget it... ahhahahah I'm wayyy too excited, I'm probably talking nonsense *-*
Wendy...! Her reaction is understandable. Uh, actually I wonder how she didn't faint right then and there... XD
There's nothing wrong with her personality. Unfortunately she hasn't like, the best parents in the world, but I'm sure Michael didn't mean it that way. Heh, he can say what he wants... in the end, he will be always searching for Wendy :P
Now all that I hope is that when they talk to each other again or when they'll meet, Michael won't be like "Oh, the kiss? Forget about that, I was confused, really it doesn't mean anything..." because. I WON'T TOLERATE IT! U________________________U
I dunno how you're going to manage that...! Just don't make them go back to the start! This kiss was like a miracle, hehe... the perfect occasion for things to become more... romantic? Anyway!
Cerine, girl...! I love how you're so unpredictable. I never get bored while reading your stories.
Happy Birthday again... I love you very much! :')
Author's Response: Good Heavens Maggie!!!! Everytime I read a review of yours of this proportion, I'm at a complete loss as to how I shoud reply to you, living up what you have treated me with! Really, I mean it, I feel so much of L.O.V.E. when I read your words! As complex as the characters are, the last two chapter were actually the hardest two chapter to write! And through all their complexities and flaws I realized it was time to give you guys what you've been longing for so long. And gee.... victory dance??? Hahahahahaha! I really haven't decided yet how the conversation would go once they do talk to each other about the kiss. Emotions that come with this story are very spontaneous acts when it comes to my writing. And that's why I pray whenever I upload a new chapter that you guys would like the new update as much as the last! I get jitters every time! Thank you thank you so much for a wonderful review onc again and all that you've given me support with so far! You're the BEST Maggie! Sending much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2013 04:52 am Title: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl
OH. GOD. YEAHHHHHHH, HE KISSED HER!!!
OMG Wendy, just go back to him and STOP THINKING SOOOO MUCH!!!
Loved it, pleaseeeeeee continue soon!!!!!! <3
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, yeah he kissed her. I realized I kept you guys waiting for too long. Sorry about that. Thank you so much for the review. I'm so happy you guys liked this chapter. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2013 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl
YyyyYyyyeeeeaaahhh He kissed her!!!!!!!!!!!!! she should have gone back to him!!!!!!! ugh why overanalyze it?!?!?!!?!?!!!!?! great job!!!!
Author's Response: Hello Southern_cutie! Hee hee hee somebody sounds excited! And overanalyzing? That's just how Wendy is. I'll upload the next chalter as soon as I can. Thank you for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2013 09:30 am Title: Chapter 45: Wings Of My Love
Um, I think I'e already read this chapter, is this an accidental repeat?
Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry. I meant to upload the next chapter, but then I had to alter it so I deleted chapter 46. My bad.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2013 11:06 am Title: Chapter 45: Wings Of My Love
I love this story so much! This chapter was really good also but I have to make one complaint: It's moving incredibly sloooooooow. I read everytime you update though and I'm waiting as patiently as possible. Update soon!
Author's Response: I know this story is incredibly slow. But you see, Wendy and Michael have been together one on one only for some 5 or so meetings. You think a man would fall for a girl like Wendy that easily? I don't think so. I want to keep this as real as possible. But if you have any suggestions, please don't hesitate to share them with me. I want to know your expectations in to the story. Thank you for the review darling. I really appreciate it. Sending out much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2013 08:58 am Title: Chapter 45: Wings Of My Love
WENDY SAY SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grrr .....don't push away!!!!! And Michael stop pushing her away now!!! she is actually trying for the most part!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, thanks for the review Southern_cutie. I know it's nerve wrecking that I brought it to a point like this. But I promise I'd update real soon. If you've got suggestions for the story, please contact me at cerinekyrahsands@yahoo.com All ideas are welcome. Thanks again. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Mar 18, 2013 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 45: Wings Of My Love
I really can't wait for the new chapter. you are absolutely my favorite author. I'm sorry for not being around much, I forgot my password for my account. I really can't wait for the next chapter you'll update, love. x
Author's Response: Oh bubbles!!!!! It's been too long since I last saw you!!!! Yeah!!!! But that's okay. You are here now! Thanks for the review darling. I'm so glad you like the updates! And aw shucks... you flatter me! I'll upload the next chapter as soon as I can! Sending out much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2013 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 45: Wings Of My Love
Idk why no one reviewed your last chapter, so i'm going to do it: I love your description on sourroundings, feelings, and moments. I was in that feeling of nervousness with Wendy as she finally got see Michael. I just wish there wasn't a cliffhanger. :) Can't wait for the net chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you RhythmChild. I was feeling really upset because no one had reviewed this chapter. I was beginning to wonder if I was losing my edge. I can't thank you enough for giving back confidence to me. You give me hope to publish the next chapter. Sending much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours.
Date: Mar 12, 2013 11:29 am Title: Chapter 43: Walk Away
You did ?!
Sorry, I must have missed something haha! Let's get to reading then! :D
Author's Response: Hee hee hee, sure thing darling. Much L.O.V.E.