[Report This]Date: May 09, 2012 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: Family Day (Part II)
Well that went well. I'm glad that Raine wasn't mad at Michael. And that fireworks show as so beast. I see some things about to go down in the future now that Raine's mother has a night shift job. lol Good chapter twin, update soon.
Author's Response:
If it went another way, she would've been in the wrong. At least in my opinion. Things will definitely go down in the future though. I can't wait for everything unfolds.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2012 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 8: Family Day (Part II)
Yay! You updated! I'm so excited to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
I know it's been far too long. I already a have another chapter written for the next update....just trying to figure out when to update again haha.
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2012 07:00 pm Title: Introduction
I love this story! I miss it so please update soon. I can't wait!
Author's Response:
I'll be updating soon! :)
Thank you so much for reading
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2012 08:14 am Title: Chapter 7: Family Day (Part I)
ohhh shoot!!! i can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Next Update is Friday! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2012 06:32 am Title: Chapter 6: The Looney
Your writing style is good, it´s very fluently written. The setting and the characters around Michael Jackson are portrayed thoroughly and authentic and it looks like everything is taken from reality... that makes your stories always so mature and unique. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing, i´m enjoying this so much !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Lizzie! I'm glad you're enjoying it. It makes me get on my stuff and write more!
Stay tuned! And don't forget, I still have your suggestion in my head! :)
Date: Apr 02, 2012 04:29 am Title: Chapter 7: Family Day (Part I)
Continue this ! Asap lol
Author's Response:
I definitely will!
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2012 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Looney
Lmfao that womans crazy XD
Author's Response:
Crazy ain't the right word for her! Haha
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2012 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Looney
Loved it! I'm glad she finally figured out who he was. And that psycho girl smh those darn groupies
Author's Response:
Thanks dude. But remember he doesn't know that she does. You know how the groupies be. I remember reading LaToya's first book....Smh she talked about a groupie who got into the house. The things she said! Geez. Crazy!
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2012 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 5: Lesson I
Ohhhhh I like it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you do.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2012 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 5: Lesson I
I wonder how long iti's gonna take before she finds out that Janet is famous and that Michael's her brother lol
Author's Response:
Soon!
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2012 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Encounter
wtf? her momma has gone fool lol and i thought Raine was a little older...
Author's Response:
LoL yes she has and nope...she's 13 alright.
Date: Feb 21, 2012 05:47 am Title: Chapter 5: Lesson I
I love it ! Keep it going, please !
Author's Response:
Thank you. They'll be another update today...or tomorrow. Be on the look out.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2012 05:22 am Title: Chapter 5: Lesson I
this is going very very good, i love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: Feb 18, 2012 10:57 am Title: Chapter 4: Jake
Raine has no idea who is Michael or Janet. That's cool, it'll be funny when she finds out ....
Author's Response:
It will definitely be funny! Haha she might find out soon!
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2012 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 4: Jake
LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it thus far! Stay tuned for an update!