Date: Sep 08, 2012 04:49 pm Title: Introduction
Good story so far!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!!!!
Date: Sep 02, 2012 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 12: Surprise
he clearly has the hots for her
Author's Response:
Clearly girl! We'll see what happens as time progresses.
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2012 08:25 am Title: Chapter 12: Surprise
lol Mike is so childish. He knows that it didn't take all out that. But I guess that's his way of letting her know that he likes her since a lot of guys well boys (in Michael's case, a man) does to show their feelings. But poor Raine lol that child can't get a break. That was how he was staring at her across the street too. Anyway, great chapter.
Author's Response:
You know Mike is all shy and what not...that could explain why he's acting that way with her. Pure child at heart. :) Yeah...staring at her was creepy as ever though. Like damn forreal, you just gonna stare lol. Stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2012 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 11: Water
Awww you're back.
Michael is such a jerk now smh Raine is cool people I like her and Dunk together and Katie is AWESOME!!
Author's Response:
Yea...I'm back temporarily. I'll be popping in at random.
I agree! Michael is being a huge jerk right now. I don't know what was going through his head when he did that. Not cool. Katie is soooooo badass!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2012 10:14 am Title: Chapter 11: Water
Mrs. J was gangsta with the water gun situation! Michael's really being overtly mean. I know what they did was dirty, but if you know that they hate your girlfriend, then stop bringing her around! Wonderful as always
Author's Response:
Yes, Mrs. J is a boss! Michael is definitely being mean. Hopefully it won't go much further otherwise I'm sure Raine will have a few things up her sleeves! Stay tuned!
Date: Aug 19, 2012 03:25 am Title: Chapter 11: Water
You made me waitin on this girl...good update tho :) like it!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!!! I'll update again soon!
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2012 11:48 am Title: Chapter 10: I Don't Need Your Help
They are so tifflin' ! I would be pissed HAHAHA
Author's Response:
LMAO Who wouldn't be pissed! I mean worms in ur food......disgusting. Hahaha Stay Tuned! There will be another update soon!
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 10: I Don't Need Your Help
Wow. She really pissed Michael off. That was really childish, but she's only 13. These things happen and I hope he gets over it soon.
Author's Response:
Yes, childish indeed. We'll see if he gets over. More to come soon! Thanks so much for reviewing. :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2012 08:55 am Title: Chapter 10: I Don't Need Your Help
Continue please. I'm attached to this :)))) *over loaded smiles*
Author's Response:
I'll be updating soon :D
Date: Jun 28, 2012 01:48 am Title: Chapter 10: I Don't Need Your Help
I just started reading this story and I'm already loving it. And dang! Michael sure can curse alot. I hope you update soon because this story is really good. 1 to 10. I give you story a 10. :) :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2012 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 10: I Don't Need Your Help
Dang Raine got told lol She should know that he didn't mean what he said though. He was just speaking out of anger. But they were pretty childish for putting worms in her food. That's just sick.
Author's Response:
But worms are harmless lol. I guess it was childish but hey, she wanted her gone. Let's hope what he said truly was out of anger.
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2012 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 10: I Don't Need Your Help
Ooh!!! Michael is so blind!! and tatum is not fine so he can hit that and quit it!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah he definitely is blind. You would think he'd trust his sister at least! But noooo....guess he has to learn on his own.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2012 09:00 am Title: Chapter 9: Tatum
Lol "Little Miss fake ass smile" hahaha do I detect a hint of jealousy, Miss Raine Fall Waits? She's so cute. But if Janet doesn't like her & we already know that Raine doesn't like her then I know that something's gonna go down. Raine was a boss for throwing her food at the dude he started the commotion with her & Jack though. It wasn't fair that she had to get detention for something she didn't start though. Great chapter, twin.
Author's Response:
Oh you know something is definitely going down. Let's see what Raine has up her sleeve
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2012 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 7: Family Day (Part I)
Oh shit└(^o^)┘
Author's Response:
hehe! Stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2012 03:27 am Title: Chapter 8: Family Day (Part II)
Yay, an update ! I see the tension / friendship growing between Michael and Raine...there is a silent understanding between her an Michael which needs no words.. i love the long chap !
Author's Response:
There definitely is an understanding between the two that the others don't realize or know about.....or do they? Stay tuned.