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Reviewer: mjtheking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2012 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 WHEN WE FIRST MET

omg you have 2 put up another chapter...that was amazuing and yet sad:( but..it was stilll great <3



Author's Response:

Sure I'm gonna put up another chapter, as soon as possible :) Thank you so much for the compliments <3 Made me sooo hapy

I read some of your stories and I love them, great work :) Would love to hear again from you <3

Reviewer: mjloverforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2012 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1 WHEN WE FIRST MET

lol now in depressed



Author's Response:

;) dont be

       just read the ( soon ) following chapters and PERHAPS ;) something will change

                thank you so much and stay tuned

Reviewer: mjloverforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 33 WORLD EXCLUSIVE

WOW!!



Author's Response:

WOW!! yess :) big surprise - thank you for reviewing I'm happy I could make you wowing :P

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2012 08:21 am Title: Chapter 33 WORLD EXCLUSIVE

I'm just speechless...

I felt that Siedah was attracted by him and tried to make him split with Susan...But this?!!

Now I really want an update lol!!!



Author's Response:

The updates comming, thank you so much "jacksonfan"

Yeah, Siedah really spurprised EVERYONE :) u2

<3

Reviewer: Ethereal Petrichor Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2012 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 4 MY NEW BEST FRIEND

Wow... I cant believe how instantly he trusted Susan! That girl must be really something to grab his attention... I'm currently reading this chapter during Interval of my class lol! and my friend is also reading. Much Love :P



Author's Response:

Yep Susan really grabs his attention, she just REALLY cares for him :)

Cool that you and your friend enjoyed the chapter ;)

Reviewer: Ethereal Petrichor Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2012 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 I SHOULDN'T HAVE SEEN THAT

Lisa better keep her damn hands off of Michael! Poor Mike... I'm so glad Michael saw Susan watching and Tay is really adorable and he should really have some nerve to do that to King Of Pop lol.. Much Love :P



Author's Response:

Yes, this time Susan really helped him out :) Tay's a cutie you're right, just a pure child like michael loves them ... I whish my brother were like him :D Michael had big trouble with Lisa and youll see that even when Susan helps him...Lisa finds her way... but how long ? SO much to say 'til now ;) Thank you very much <3

Reviewer: Ethereal Petrichor Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2012 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 2 I FORGOT HER

Ugh! Lisa is so annoying isnt she?  Good Chapter Lisa :) You're a good sweet Lisa and she's a bitch Lisa lol! Much Love :P



Author's Response:

Hahah, yep THIS Lisa is a big bitch, but I'm not ;) Thank you so much for all the reviews I was so happy as I saw that I have now 45 !!!!! so cool I'm so thankful to have you as reader <3

Reviewer: Ethereal Petrichor Lover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2012 06:58 am Title: Chapter 1 WHEN WE FIRST MET

Wow! Nice Logical start Lisa! I really like it :) Susan is so crazy lol! Love it, I'll read next :) Much Love :P



Author's Response:

Yei I'm so excited to have a new reader <3 thank you soooo much :) and WOW you said you'll review on every chapter 0.0

Thats sooooo nice !!! Thanx a lot <3 Then I'll have so many reviews wohooo :) Totally happy right now :) You made my day, no my week ! :D

Cool you're living in California LIKE MICHAEL !!!

Thank you a lot !! Really means much to me ;)

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2012 09:06 am Title: Chapter 32 EVERYTHING FOR LUST

Ooooh I hate Siedah...I like her in the real life but here...No lol

What is she doing?...I guess she has an interest on Michael...Some things are maybe true in what she said, but how could she know it only with what she said?

I hope that Michael won't believe her but I have the impression that he did...



Author's Response:

Siedah Garret is an amazing singer and I also like her in real life of course ;)

And herein the story she thinks like she would know about everything happening between Susan and Michael, or is it just fake ? Your could be right with your thoughts ... you'll see soon <3

 

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2012 01:51 am Title: Chapter 31 ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE WORLD ...

It was a great chapter...I really liked it...

The decision about having kids will be very hard and will bring troubles in their couple.

The end is surprising...Do Michael think about Siedah as a surrogate mother?...Or does he have some feelings for her unconsciously?

Can't wait the next update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, your right having kids is a difficult thing, most off al because Susan dont wants already but Michael wants to.

The next chapter will come about in ..... a week ? no probably earlyer. You'll see soon whats behind Michaels dream about Siedah.

<3 thanks for reviewing hunny

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 11:38 am Title: Chapter 30 TRIPLETS

It was a great chapter...

I liked when Michael asked her to be the mother of his kids...It's quite logical, being now engaged, but I thought it was cute for him to ask.

I was really happy to see that Michael finally made the first step to make love to Susan...And one hour and 3 times!! What a night!!!

But I'm quite disappointed about Susan's attitude...To take her pills in secret like this...I think she had to tell Michael, she was not ready yet...He could better understand this rather than this kind of betrayal...

 



Author's Response:

Yeah... Susan taking the pills and not telling Michael is a fault.

She's just not ready but she could tell him,anyway she dont really wants to make him sad...even if that is not a real solution your right ...

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 08:38 am Title: Chapter 1 WHEN WE FIRST MET

I was reading your story for a while but things became harder for me to understand and it's because we are from different places which is totally understandable. People seem to love this story and you should definitely keep going! Kudos. 

                                           <3 Mrs. Maraj-Jackson



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing :D I hope you understand anyways ;) As I started to write this story I wasnt that good in english, so I hope I'm a little better now. I really try to ^^

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2012 02:50 am Title: Chapter 29

They're engaged!!! Yeesss!!

I'm really happy...It was a really romantic proposal...And the firework at the end...Really great....

I'm in a hurry to see what we'll happen next for the two of them!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) Yepp I think its right like that that they are engaged now when Mike goes on tour ...

Youll see what happens next chapter is coming early :D

 

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2012 10:05 am Title: Chapter 28 CHRISTMAS

Finally an update, great!

I was a little afraid of Joana at the beginning...I was afraid that being closer to Michael, she could find who he was.

It was a great and happy Christmas for his first one.

I think I have a little idea of Michael's gift to Susan...But maybe, I have a too naughty mind lol...Forgive me!



Author's Response:

Yesssss, finaly I updated, I'm sorry again. You're right, about to have thoughts about Joanna, but... you'll see :)

And Michaels gift to Susan :) I just say ---> next chapter :)

<3 thanx for reviewing

- whatmorecanigive

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2012 05:15 am Title: Chapter 27 SOLUTION

Oh I'm so happy they finally spent Christmas together.

It was a good idea to disguise Michael...

The end was funny...I hope Michael will be able to hide who he is during their stay.

And Happy New Year sweety!! Love you girl!!



Author's Response:

Heyyy, I wish you also a happy and peaceful new year !!!!

Sorry, school just started and I have not much time at the moment so I'm really late with update.

just have a little patience :D

<33

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