Reviews For As We Lay
Reviewer: fvnaticbychoice Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2020 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: May 10, 2020 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
WOWWW HE AINT SHIT OMG
Reviewer: bahbahtintin Signed 
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Date: Dec 04, 2018 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2018 01:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Hoping for more scenes! Loved it!
Reviewer: ZharBee30 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2018 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Aug 17, 2018 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I... wow. Wow. Wow.
Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: Dec 25, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Wowwww so intense and beautifull
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2017 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: Dec 25, 2017 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay THIS was great. I neeeeeed more. I neeed backstories and drama. You just did something.
Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: Dec 20, 2017 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sister?! Holy smokes! I like the way it ended!
Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2017 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jesus Christmas! I truly enjoyed the story!. Looking forward to read more of you. You're exceptional.
Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2017 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nigga I’m still shook and I still would like to fight ajcjsjcjsj
Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2017 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Funny and swift ending for sure.
Reviewer: NeelzLovesMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I wasn't expecting that either, but it just came out. Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2017 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really good and wrapped up nicely. Wasn’t expecting that twist at the end!
Author's Response: I wasn't expecting that either, but it just came out. Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: ddstephens9 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2017 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your response! I was thinking about making this a three part one shot, but I wasn't sure. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2017 05:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I want more..this is getting good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your response! I was thinking about making this a three part one shot, but I wasn't sure. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!