Date: Oct 03, 2017 08:16 am Title: Chapter 9- A Shake in Relationships Pt. I
Why is it that the Janet situation is so believable?! We all have those friends, or we were those friends who hooked up with the wrong kind of person and dragged our real friends down with us. Maybe I'm being extra, but in the south the older siblings have the authority to beat your butt if you need it. Janet needs it. Let that boy go. You are Janet Jackson! Oh and Michael needs to handle some business with that little boy.
Author's Response:
Gril, because either we've all been there or we know someone like Janet as you've said. I think that's all over. If you're older and your parents put you in charge of your siblings then you have the option to beat them if they misbehave, but I think that only benefits the child if they're younger. Janet and Simone are 14 and 12 respectively, so beating them would be pointless. They're getting to the age where they're starting to do what they want... regardless of the repercussions.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 01:45 am Title: Chapter 9- A Shake in Relationships Pt. I
Ooooh Janet. Once Mrs Kat find out.......
And as for Nicole....She needs to suddenly come up missing. Drown her in a community pool, throw her off a 4 story building, or throw her in a cage with a rabid pitbull. You know, something small.
Author's Response:
I'm weak, girl. Everyone wants Nicole to come up missing, lol. You may or may not get your wish... stay tuned.
Date: Sep 27, 2017 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 8- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. II
And I think her initial reaction to finding out about what happened with Nicole and Michael was very fitting for her character. How she didn’t want to hear him say it at first so that she wouldn’t be so hurt was innocent and honestly that’s what her character represents to me. I love it, you’re such a good writer! â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Her reaction was very innocent wasn't it?
Aww thank you girl! I try to keep my writing up to par and the fact that you think it's good makes me happy.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2017 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 8- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. II
YES MICHAEL LET HA KNOW! Semaj is so stubborn, I was gonna be so sad if the chapter ended on her telling Michael stop being “overbearing” but I’m glad Michael told her about herself. He’s really starting to get in touch with his feelings and I love it. Her and Michael are so different I can’t believe they really clicked like this and are out here being #GOALZ .. yassssss
loved this chapter boo!
Author's Response:
SUSSSS you be geeking my head up with your reviews! Lol. Yes good. I'm glad that Michael's character development is still noticable within the story. They say opposites attract and in his case I guess they really do.
As always I live to see your review as well and I appreciate you supporting me!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2017 06:13 am Title: Chapter 8- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. II
I love them together. They are my favorite MJFiction couple. Don't ever break them up. I dont think they are good apart. Although, I am worried about semaj. That dude ain't done with her yet. He shot her on purpose...no way is he done. He knows semaj is Michael's world so he is gonna continue to play this game. And I'm so dumb, because I just found out that samej is James spelled backwards lol.
Author's Response:
Aw thanks michaelfan90! I'm always happy to see your reviews! Break them up? Me? What? lmao.
Girl you love when traumatic shit pops off don't you? Lol. We'll deal with the Marco situation eventually for it is inevitable.
Lol can I let you in on a secret? I didn't know that either! I just looked up girl names and I liked Semaj for this story so that's why I chose it. I didn't even know it was James backwards until another one of my reviewers posted it on Gangsta Lovin'.
As always thanks for your review and support!
Date: Sep 22, 2017 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I
I think Semaj will appreciate his honesty but it will still hurt her. She become a little distant.
Michael did nothing wrong. He did not lead Nicole on. But he should have cut ties with her after and told Semaj earlier.
Nicole was also not wrong bc she didnt know he had someone but she was wrong for how she acted after finding out
Author's Response:
You make an excellent point! He should've cut ties with her, but you're also right about Nicole not being in the wrong because she didn't know.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I
Okay I read this the other night and was shook then I forgot to review! Lmaooo but Nicole needs to SIT! Like I mean take a LONG SEAT AND DO NOT GET UP! She’s over here trying to bring imagined scenorios to life and pin it on Michael, girl bye! But the good thing is Semaj is mature so I think she will take it well and even respect Michael all the more because he told her instead of her finding out the wrong way. Michael isn’t wrong because he couldn’t really control it but I wish he would’ve told Sey Sey WHEN it happened instead of waiting but oh well he’s gonna tell her now so it’s whatever. And girl NICOLE WAS WAY OUT OF LINE, she’s on her way to catching these hands.
oh and girl you know I love the littlest things that happen between Sey and Michael so Igotta throw in that I love this part!:
“You good?”
I wasn’t good, but I wasn’t going to tell him that.
I nodded my head, “I’m fine,” I whispered and he caressed my thigh underneath the table.
“So we lying now?” He chuckled in my ear which made me smile.
I was smiling not because I had got caught in a small white lie, but because Michael knew me like the back of his hand. I don’t know why I continued to hide my true feelings from him sometimes.
They’re so sweet man, almost makes me wanna fall in love with a hood nigga lmfaooooo lemme stop playing 😂😂😂 Don’t keep me waiting long for this update I’m missin my babies already!
Author's Response:
That was my best thing to write that whole chapter so I'm glad you like it. And I'm dead lol. I think we all want to fall in love with a hood nigga when reading this story, but then we come to reality and realized ain't no average hood nigga gon be this good to us lmao. A girl can dream though.
I agree with your review though too. Nicole was out of line, but Michael should've fessed up when it fist happened. Let's hope she takes it well.
Thanks for riding with me Suz!
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2017 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I
I am livid right now. This Nicole girl needs to go find somebody to thirdt trap and get off Mike's dick. This just goes to tell you that hoes would lie to see another unhappy. And that aint flying with me. Semaj is my homegirl and if must "Semaj beat her narrow thot ass!" The good thing is, Michael is going to tell her cause he loves her a lot as we all know. I hope it all works out but then again i wanna see Semaj mad at him and Michael begging for her lol. Silly me🙄🤣
Author's Response:
Zendaya! It's nice to see that you actually liked this story. I'm happy to have you as a part of the Michael and Semaj family.
On to your review I definitely agree. Some women will go to the depths to see another unhappy. Lol I think everyone wanted Semaj to throw some punches. He didn't do too much begging... maybe another time lol
Date: Sep 21, 2017 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I
Well i hope she takes it well because he is telling her and not just letting it go. No I dnt think that he is in the wrong because she came on to him but he pushed her off and bounced. It's also a good thing that he is telling her cause from the way Nichole was explaining it was the opposite to what happened. But I love it can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response:
I definitely agree. Michael did push her off, but don't you think he should've told Nicole he had a girl? Nicole was being an ass about it though because she was mixing details. Thanks so much for your review!
Date: Sep 20, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 7- The Truth May Set U Free Pt. I
Hell to the NO! I'm gonna jump in this story and beat the hell out of Nicole! Nothing negative better happen to Semaj and Michael. They deserve some nice lovin', not fighting about some hoe. To answer your questions:
- Semaj is mature for her age so I think she's gonna listen to Michael and believe him. If anything, I'm hoping she'll beat the hell out of Nicole.
- I don't think Michael was in the wrong with Nicole cuz shit like that happens especially when bitches are thirsty but he did push her off which is what matters.
- And hell yes Nicole was out of line! Dumb bitch.
Any way...can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Lol I'm weak asf. They have been through a lot so they deserve a night to themselves. I hope you enjoy the new chapter and as always let me know what you thought!
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2017 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 6- You Know I Love You, Right?
Now you know these my babies 😠one chapter is never enoughhhhh and I'm already itching like a crackhead for the next update 😩
oh and I have an announcement to make. *clears throat* *picks up bullhorn* SEMAJ IS PREGNANT AF! *drops bullhorn and walks away*
Author's Response:
Well for you I got another chapter up right noooowww!
And uh un Susie. Don't wish that on Semaj lmao.
Date: Sep 19, 2017 06:36 am Title: Chapter 6- You Know I Love You, Right?
Yay you're back!
Author's Response:
I'm back!
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 06:04 am Title: Chapter 6- You Know I Love You, Right?
Keep it comin!!!!!
Author's Response:
Girl you love popping up out of no where, lol! Thanks for still reading!
Date: Sep 17, 2017 04:00 am Title: Chapter 6- You Know I Love You, Right?
Yesss I am here and loving this story please keep going!!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl!
Date: Sep 16, 2017 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 6- You Know I Love You, Right?
Still here! Love this story and glad to see that you're writing again! I missed Michael and Semaj very much. I'm very much interested and seeing where their relationship continues to go.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the new chapter.