[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 12- Reunited and Isn't it Supposed to Feel Good?
Brandy girl you know I appreciate you giving us a filler chapter! This is just what I needed to catch my breath😂😂 Starting from the beginning: Michael is OVER IT with Nicole. What I will say is Michael is definitely a changed man because had he been who he was a few months back, Nicole would’ve gotten severely cursed out and insulted by now. We see ur change Michael, we’re proud of you boo! *claps* but I’m glad him and Semaj got to see each other, dead @ him dropping everything to get to her house 💀 and now on to my favorite part of the chapter: Move in with me. I’ve been waiting for those 4 words since the first book!!!! It doesn’t make sense that she’s still getting punished at 18 tbh. She’s an adult, her and Michael could def live together!!!the question is will she agree??? Let me not get my hopes up Because Semaj is stubborn when she wants to be and it’s a 50/50 chance she’ll say no. Girl, I’m struggling trying to figure out what this curveball is gonna be. It’s still fuzzy so I know you abt to give me heartache. Ima go stack up on tissues and Chunky Monkey ice cream while you write the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
You're very much welcomed, Susie! LOL you and your breathing girl. Yeah, Michael is pretty t-h-r-e-w with Nicole and when Semaj called then there was no going back girl, we all knew he was gon bounce then. I totally agree, boy has had a lot of progression because Nicole has been overdue a cursing out for the boundaries she has crossed since she entered the story. You know Semaj so well son, it makes me proud that my readers know how she is and what she would see. She doesn't give a straight answer as you will come to find out in the update, but who knows in the future that may... or may not... change. I can't say anything, but I'm not trying to downplay what I have planned, but I'm not trying to hype it up either... ugh anyway thanks for the support Susie! The next update is here.
Date: Oct 21, 2017 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 12- Reunited and Isn't it Supposed to Feel Good?
Omg! Say yes Semaj, say yes!! Finally glad that they reunited. Plus, I would prefer few days apart updates.
Author's Response:
You'll see her response in the new update! Thanks, continue to review and I'll always be around to update!
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 05:38 am Title: Chapter 12- Reunited and Isn't it Supposed to Feel Good?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! She better do it or I will. Ugh but knowing samej, she might not. But I really hope she do. This is more exciting than having Nicole killed. This way semaj can stop being controlled by her parents. She is an adult, and still getting grounded lol. She will have more freedom. I like the idea. Not only because my favorite couple can get they freak on freely, but it's better for semaj. she can be the adult she wants to be. I hate that they keep complainin about having a hold on each other too much. That is what love is. That is a fist step to marriage....semaj jackson.....yep. I knew Michael wasn't gonna like the idea of shawn. Oh and about that killing spree chapter....when shall I be expecting this said chapter? Let's make a deal, when Nicole or Shawn die or move or disappear, i will update heist.
Author's Response:
Broooo that is so unfair! LOL, Ima see what I can do. I gotta go check my outline to see what I had planned lol.
You know Semaj very well, so you know she didn't give a straight answer just yet. Whoa, whoa, Semaj is only eighteen so i don't see marriage for her and Michael yet. She still has the promise ring, so possibly in the future it could turn into marriage lol. You were right on Michael not liking Shawn, but when has Michael ever liked new (or old) guys around her? LOL
I hope you like the new update and thanks for your support!
Date: Oct 21, 2017 01:44 am Title: Chapter 12- Reunited and Isn't it Supposed to Feel Good?
I would love if they were as close together as possible because I love this story and I hate waiting it you make it worth it. Can’t wait for the next one. I swear when I was reading the I live under my parents roof part I was like just move in together 😂
Author's Response:
At least I make it worth it? Lol. I hope to see you review more often, I love reading what you think! I think everyone was saying that while they were talking lol. I hope you enjoy the new update and thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
Okay first off I want to state: I’m slow. I didn’t realize that Shawn is Jay Z until the last reviewer said it 💀
Now on to this (because I’ve finally caught my breath): I’m tired of Nicole. I’m tired. She’s slick and I’m not here for it. I was scared about Michael cheating on Semaj until somebody else mentioned that his mind is on her 24/7 (btw, boy is whipped, he’s over here having withdrawals and trying to get 3 second glances 💀💀💀) .... so I guess that’s comforting but at the same time, all it takes is that one moment of weakness and I’m just hoping that Michael doesn’t have that, I would hate to have to fight him. On to Semaj. Her dad gets on my nerves. I tried not to hate him so much in this story but he makes that so hard. He knows exactly what he’s doing having Shawn mysteriously come into the picture when she can’t see Michael. And when he was introducing him to her my heart was beating so fast (hence all the heavy breathing on my last review). I’m so scared right now, like I can sense a curve ball coming up and the fact that I can’t put my finger on what exactly it’s going to be is making me so nervous. I never want these chapters to end 😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩
Author's Response:
No, no, no, no LOL. I think Rhythm was saying she wasn't a fan of Jay-Z and that the name Shawn reminds her of him. But i do not depict Shawn as Jay-Z.
You were hyperventilating for a couple of hours there, did you go and consult a doctor? lmao, anyway... You know Michael loves his Sey Sey and has become so emotionally and physically attatched that being apart has caused him to feel like he's having withdrawls. Michael has been a strong guy when it came to temptation since he's been with Semaj mostly because of what happened with Lonnie, but also because he's big on loyalty. Girl I got curve balls, speed balls, anything coming at y'all. Hopefully it's not anticlamatic or anything, but WE'LL SEEEE! Trust me girl sometimes these chapters be 9000+ so I cut them because sometimes it's a lot of material for one chapter and I don't want y'all to feel like y'all drowning lol.
Date: Oct 18, 2017 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
Im expecting, or hoping rather, for Shawn to over step while on tour and Michael to completely beat the snot out of him. As you can tell, im not a big Jay Z fan. I predict him to be one of those rich kids who thinks the own the world and everyone in it, that includes Semaj.
I just hope, but I dont think, Semaj's parents will have her back.Im ready for this story.So ready.
BTW I hope Janet is done with that little punk she had.
Author's Response:
Dang y'all. Shawn was practically just introduced and either y'all want him to get beat up or die I cannot LOL. Ohh, I see. Well, he doesn't look like Jay-Z try to think of someone else while reading about him. When I describe his features you might get a different picture. That's a nice little prediciton you made there about Shawn's personality, but we'll soon find out what he's all about.
As for Janet we'll see.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
Ok so i don't like Shawn nor Nicole. They are potential home wreckers and I want them dead. I was actually surprised that James actually agreed to let Michael come over. Michael did save his life at one point and had shown nothing but respect since then. I believe Shawn and Marco are somehow plotting together. They are trying to break up semaj and Michael..... no. They shall die.....DIE!!!!!! And I'm a side note, i hated Tucker in the first story, but him being with lina is kinda making me change my mind. He still need to prove hinself. I don't trust him. As for Janet and simmone...Janet needs to get off her high horse and realise that simmone was just trying to be a good friend and not let her be alone. But it's whatever, it's janets loss.
Author's Response:
Girl, I might just write a chapter for you have a killing spree for every damn body you don't like LOL. You really want to see some blood spilt lol. Shawn and Marco conspiracing together? That's a big stretch, but a good prediciton! You might come to like Tucker a little more in this story. He won't be as annoying as he was in the last one, but let's hope something good comes from him as the story progresses. We'll figure out Janet and Simone's mess soon!
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 09:23 am Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
Well i know one thing for sure... Michael is about to lose it when he finds this shit out 😂
Author's Response:
Abso-freaking-lutely. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 07:58 am Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
Mike should have mentioned to Nicole sooner that he had a girlfriend but at the same time, bitch please. Get over yourself he didn't tell you because you aint important. Plus his relationship status doess not make one iota of difference to that thot. She is not fooling anyone with her invasive questions, she still looking to find an "in" and undermine his relationship. Mike handled her quite well here, he needs to continue to meet her in highly public places and then avoid her completelyy once hiss project is done. She just wants to get into his pants.
I don't see Mike ever actually cheating on Semaj. I mean, his inner thoughts are basically "Semaj Semaj Semaj Semaj semaj Semaj" all the time. The dude seriously loves his girl. I laughed at his description of Semaj cravings and how he wants to show up just to catch a glimpse of her. He's got it bad.
Now onto this dude her Dad is trying to set her up with. Semajs parents are seriousbfucktards. If they are trying to prevent her from getting pregnant, the way to do this is not send her off alone with some dude she doesn't know at all who for all they know could be a rapist. I havee a bad feeling about him, hopefully nothing bad happens and she has time to explain the situation to Michael. I can just see the guy coming onto her and Michael getting the wrong idea. I just hope he is mature enough to realize Semaj would never cheat on him. Knowingg his overprotectivee ass he will insist on being there when she shows him around.
I smell drama brewing. Please don't break my heart and have these two break up.
eeeeeeeelllllmmmmmmmmmmmmmememememe
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 07:58 am Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
Mike should have mentioned to Nicole sooner that he had a girlfriend but at the same time, bitch please. Get over yourself he didn't tell you because you aint important. Plus his relationship status doess not make one iota of difference to that thot. She is not fooling anyone with her invasive questions, she still looking to find an "in" and undermine his relationship. Mike handled her quite well here, he needs to continue to meet her in highly public places and then avoid her completelyy once hiss project is done. She just wants to get into his pants.
I don't see Mike ever actually cheating on Semaj. I mean, his inner thoughts are basically "Semaj Semaj Semaj Semaj semaj Semaj" all the time. The dude seriously loves his girl. I laughed at his description of Semaj cravings and how he wants to show up just to catch a glimpse of her. He's got it bad.
Now onto this dude her Dad is trying to set her up with. Semajs parents are seriousbfucktards. If they are trying to prevent her from getting pregnant, the way to do this is not send her off alone with some dude she doesn't know at all who for all they know could be a rapist. I havee a bad feeling about him, hopefully nothing bad happens and she has time to explain the situation to Michael. I can just see the guy coming onto her and Michael getting the wrong idea. I just hope he is mature enough to realize Semaj would never cheat on him. Knowingg his overprotectivee ass he will insist on being there when she shows him around.
I smell drama brewing. Please don't break my heart and have these two break up.
eeeeeeeelllllmmmmmmmmmmmmmememememe
Author's Response:
Good to see you're back and enjoying part two of Semaj and Michael's story! I hope you've been enjoying it so far.
Okay you're one reviewer who's saying that the likelihood of Michael cheating is slim to none. His thoughts practically do surround her don't that? LOL, boy is sprung.
I agree they'll never receive the parents of the year award, but let's just hope that Jame's little plan doesn't interfere with Semaj's and Michael's relationship. Also let's hope that Michael keeps a level head about all of this.
Please don't break my heart and have these two break up. The statement majority, if not all, of my reviewers have told me within the last two or three chapters. I can't say much without putting my foot in my mouth, but I hope you stick around to find out for yourself!
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 11- Let's Make a Deal
*heavy heavy heavy heavy HEAVY breathing*
BRANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH
I’m gonna come back and review because I’m tooooooo shook , I know you up to something and my heart already can’t take it!!!!!! My official review will be prepared in a few, for right now, I’m bout to go get my breathing straightened!
Author's Response:
LOL I cannot deal with you man! What had you hyperventilating?
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2017 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 10- A Shake in Relationships Pt. II
Okay first and foremost: what you up to Brandy? What’s the slight change? If Semaj finds out she’s pregnant ima flip! She ain’t readyyyyy! And if Michael cheats? I’m reaching through my phone screen and fighting *shrugs* its only right! Now on to the rest. I think Simone and Janet will end up making up. Hopefully Janet will get that nappy headed lil boy out the picture though. I’m tired of him already.As far as Kearston goes, I’m ready to fight her. She’s getting Semaj in trouble and the last thing I need right now is Semaj on pushishment while Nicole’s slick self is still around. Brandy don’t hurt me too bad!!! If Nicole tries something and Michael goes with it these hands will fly and these tears will flow!!
Author's Response:
Up to no good like I always am lmao! LOL for your sake of flipping the hell out she may or may not be pregnant... jk she won't be. She nor Michael is about that life... yet.
Michael cheating?
Hopefully Janet and Simone do make up and maybe she'll get rid of Drake... only time will tell.
LOL Nicole may or may not stand a chance, but that's why you'll have to read to find out... how exactly does she play a part in all this?
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2017 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 10- A Shake in Relationships Pt. II
Oh snap, what's about to happen? They better not break up.....I will eat ice cream and watch lifetime movies. I will treat it like a real break up....you wouldn't do me like that would you?
Author's Response:
Everybody jumps to me separating Semaj and Michael that's so funny...
No, but forreal as for them breaking up you'll have to read and see if it happens or not. You're a faithful reader of this couple michaelfan90... I'd never do you like that... intentionally.
As always thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 9- A Shake in Relationships Pt. I
Janet Damita Jo is about to catch these hands! Shes needs NAWT to get Simone involved with her foolishness because we know the only reason Simone went with her and her little nappy head boyfriend in the first place was because she cared about her. Semaj and Simone’s parents are going to have a fit. I’m not sure how Katherine is gonna react and Michael’s short tempered self is going to go off. Fix it all, Jesus. And Nicole .. I hope somebody beats her up, or maybe while she’s leaving the library she’ll step in front of a car too fast or something, idk maybe a bad storm will hit and she’ll get struck by lightning. God works in mysterious way, praise God *whitney houston voice* All I Know is I don’t need her coming between Semaj and Michael
Author's Response:
Exactly, Simone was trying to be a friend, but Simone should've also been smart enough not to succumb to peer preasure. But of course we do stupid things for our best friends whether it's smart or not. We'll highlight Katherine's response in the next chapter, because if I would've put it in this chapter the word count would've been well over 10,000 lol. Everybody wants Nicole dead... y'all some vicious readers! Lol sidenote I love watching Whitney laugh or say the world God in her interviews, it's hilarious. As for her coming between Semaj and Michael strictly depends on them as a couple and their bond, but I think they have a pretty solid relationship... but what do I know?
Date: Oct 03, 2017 08:17 am Title: Chapter 9- A Shake in Relationships Pt. I
Why is it that the Janet situation is so believable?! We all have those friends, or we were those friends who hooked up with the wrong kind of person and dragged our real friends down with us. Maybe I'm being extra, but in the south the older siblings have the authority to beat your butt if you need it. Janet needs it. Let that boy go. You are Janet Jackson! Oh and Michael needs to handle some business with that little boy.