Date: Oct 17, 2016 01:53 pm Title: Ch. 1
Just started reading this story and I'm loving it! Very cute :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story..see you in the sequel! Γ°ΕΈΛβ
Date: Aug 28, 2016 02:45 pm Title: Ch. 28
Can't wait to see what happens when Mike gets a hold of him.
Date: Aug 28, 2016 02:44 pm Title: Ch. 28
Can't wait to see what happens when Mike gets a hold of him.
Author's Response:
loooool in the end marlon gets his butt by overprotective mj smh lol.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 05:48 pm Title: Ch. 27
Surprise! Lol I'm back finally. Wow, Michael and Amber running away? I don't see her foing for it unless something really scary happens.
Author's Response:
welcome back! thanks for the suprise lmao well mj can be persavuive when he wants to be~
Date: Jul 10, 2016 01:30 pm Title: Ch.7
I love this story! I know Amber is digging on Michael but I wouldn't blame her if she got caught up in Marlon. He's cute & charming. A lethal combination.
Author's Response:
Oh hello! Thank for your reading I do agree with you about her digging two of them that can be a terrible combination. She needs to be careful but you'll read on and see what happens! Enjoy the rest π
Date: Jun 26, 2016 05:04 pm Title: Ch. 1
Awww this is cute. This is my first time reading any of your work. Pretty good. I don't know which one I want to read first. This or Liberian Girl! Good job
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to, there is plenty more for you to read lol. I can't help you with deciding but there is enough for you to enjoy for awhile π. Enjoy the rest!
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 04:57 pm Title: The End.
This review well overdue lol!
Excellent chapter! It's been awhile since I read a PG story!
Amber and Michael made a great couple, especially going through all the trial and tribulations. At one point, I did not like how messy Amber was being lol! Her hooking up Marlon, which I believe to make him jealous and his personality had her swoon and vacillating back and forward. Michael not knowing what to do with himself when he fell madly in love with her. I'm glad he had Chris to add comic relief!
In the end, I'm glad they found it in their hearts that they love each other and going to run off towards! I'm also glad they picked a time where Mean Papa Joe wouldn't catch him!
Great story, Lorry! It was so good I nominated it for the site's Mj fanfiction awards. I hope I can tell you that! If not, oops lol! Anyways, off to read the sequel!
Author's Response:
It has been long over due but we here at last! Lmao. Yes Amber is seriously messy I agree putting Mj though all the emotional turmoils with Marlon and then Chris's crazy cousin involved smh but they stood it all no matter what! Yea the runway they chose a time when Joseph wouldn't find em which was a blessing in disguise and there's more in the sequel to be read lol. Aww thank you so much for the nomination! Never thought one of my stories would be nominated <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:58 pm Title: Ch. 1
I wanted to read this before reading your most recent additon to your series...I have a feeling I'm going to like this :-)
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much for taking the time to read my stories I hope you enjoy this and the sequel because there is certainly going to more drama and so forth into the future π.
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:54 pm Title: Ch.9
Great chapter again, hun! I'm just going to read the rest of the chapters, and make a big review at the very end! I don't want to look too messy, giving a review to each chapter. Hope that's okay with you!
Author's Response:
Heyo darling! It's no biggie I'll be waiting for your long review π
Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:52 pm Title: Ch.8
Marlon needs his ass whoop for that! He knows Joe's only aim
Author's Response:
Smh Ikr but Marlon sometimes only does it to keep his own ass out of line with Joe's view which isn't fair on Michael who only trusted him but we shall see π
Date: Apr 29, 2016 05:50 pm Title: Ch.7
Man I was hoping Amber wouldnt fall for Marlon's charm and wittiness! This could be just a farce,a and she could be doing this to make Michael jealous. Creating sibling rivalry!
Author's Response:
Well who wouldn't fall for Marlon's charms but Amber she won't for long and we'll she might be doing it to make mj jealous or not who knows you'll just have to read on to find out π
Date: Apr 29, 2016 02:09 pm Title: Ch. 6
Marlon is a trip. He reminds of the Marlon in the old story, Love Behind This smh with his teasing and wit! It was so cute how Michael got jealous. A jealous Michael is very attractive! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
his teasing it only gets worse as the story goes on, pissing off Michael with his flirtaicous mannor *rolls eyes* smh I'm surpised michael hasn't beat his butt yet lmao! yes a jealous michael is attractive I agree, thanks Kara <3.
Date: Apr 29, 2016 02:07 pm Title: Ch.5
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! happy you enjoyed it :D
Date: Apr 29, 2016 02:04 pm Title: Ch.4
Lovers always start off as friends--well most of them. It's cute how these argue and fight then make up!
Author's Response:
yep your right lol, they are just too cute for words sometimes~
Date: Apr 22, 2016 07:26 pm Title: Ch.3
A temper just like mine. I'm glad I am to relate to Michael's character. Having a bad temper can really cause major destruction. I hope he hasn't ruined the friendship.
Author's Response:
Indeed the temper can destroy a wonderful friendship, let's hope it doesnt ruin their friendship!~