[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2015 03:44 pm Title: Ch.10
I'm glad you brought Chris into the story. I've always thought he and Michael had a great friendship.
But I sure hope Amber comes around soon. Very sweet chapter 😁
Author's Response:
yeah i thought why not chris and at the right time when he needs a friend? and i hope so but we shall see, Thanks for reading <33
Date: Nov 22, 2015 09:58 am Title: Ch.10
Poor Michael, i just wanted to hug him
Lol Chris is just what he needs right now to feel good again
Hopefully he and Amber can be friends again tho
Author's Response:
Oh i know what ya mean, i wanna hug him soo badly too! and yes Chris is just what he needs (the antidote to keep him upbeat for now)~ gosh i hope so i don't like splitting em apart yet i like it at the same time..hoho..thanks again hun <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2015 08:34 am Title: Ch.9
awwwwwww mikey :(:(:(:(:(:(:(
Author's Response:
ikr? poor thing, i feel so bad for him :(
don't worry it will get better soon :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2015 06:02 am Title: Ch.9
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
oh my a new reader~
aww thank you so much hun, I'm glad you like it!, the next update will be up soon <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2015 03:42 pm Title: Ch.9
Wow! Amber should have at least heard him out. She's definitely going to regret doing that. At least he told her finally. That should definitely count for something. I hope they get through it!
Another intense but also very good chapter, Lorry! a86;
Author's Response:
ikr? her anger was justifised too but she will regret it now and the secret's out at last but i hope they do as well Ebony! thanks for reading as always <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2015 02:25 pm Title: Ch.9
She's being a bitch. Like, let Michael explain. Damn. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
oh my a new reader!!, yes i agree with you ( i was laughing so much when you callied her a bitch) she does need to let poor michael explain but she ain't letting that happen right now, let's hope she will in the next chapter~
thanks so much for reading <3
Date: Nov 18, 2015 01:53 pm Title: Ch.9
Oh men those two can't end their friendship like that
Hope they can still be friends
Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
i know i feel so bad yet sad at the same time!, lmao and don't worry they will (hopefully) be friends again ~
thanks again hun <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Ch.8
Yikes! Things got really deep and intense here. Great job! That Joseph is creul, as are the rest of Michael's brothers. And Marlon was sooo wrong for what he did.
Something tells me that this situation is going to put a big strain on his relationship with Amber.
Nice chapter Lorry!
Author's Response:
yes they indeed are, marlon was just wrong for doin that poor michael! and your hunch might be right
and thanks for reading as always darling <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 02:10 pm Title: Ch.8
I think Michael's family business being in a Mafia. OHHHHHH I'M SO ON EDGE WITH THIS PLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE:):):):):):):):):)
Author's Response:
Date: Nov 16, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Ch.8
Oh men some dirty business Joseph does, yes if was Michael I'd also want to escape from that
Oh can't wait what he's going to say to Amber
Author's Response:
yes some dirty business indeed, what could it be tho?, and don't blame him i would too~
we will just have to just wait and see what he says eh?
thanks for reading hun <3
Date: Nov 14, 2015 01:18 am Title: Ch.7
Not fair to stop now lol
Hmm Amber And Marlon? .poor Michael is heartbroken
Can't wait to see what he's going to answer
Author's Response:
i'm not sorry for leaving it there, hoho and yes maybe marlon/amber? who knows and don't remind me michael is heartbroken as it is..poor thing and yes my wondeful friend i wonder what he will say too~ 3
thanks for reading hun <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Ch.7
Wow! Things are getting deep now. Michael is being all mysterious. What's up with that?! And Amber does seem to be crushing on Marlon a bit. However, Michael shouldn't have anything to worry about if he hurry up and come clean to her about his feeling.
Very nice chapter, Lorry!
I'm so proud of your improvements 😁
Author's Response:
yes indeed things are getting deep indeed, i wonder what he could be hiding? and i don't even know ebony it's too much of a mystery lol and yea she is, poor michael he should hurry up time's a wasting, tut tut, and aww thanks hun i try my best <3
Date: Nov 05, 2015 04:27 am Title: Ch. 6
Lol this is funny, Amber sleeping in history class, glad Michael was there to safe her
Aww Michael so cute being Jelouse of Marlon lol
Hmm i wonder why he doesn't tell her about his family
Author's Response:
Can't blame her and luckily if mj wasn't there she would have been in trouble. And yes his jealousy was adorable lool. Who knows ? Maybe mj's stubborn? We shall see his reason eventually ~
Author's Response:
Can't blame her and luckily if mj wasn't there she would have been in trouble. And yes his jealousy was adorable lool. Who knows ? Maybe mj's stubborn? We shall see his reason eventually ~
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2015 03:22 pm Title: Ch. 6
Michael getting jealous was extremely adorable! And Marlon was such a teaser! This was a very cute scene and I hope it won't be long before Michael comes clean about his family, as well as his romantic feelings for Amber.
Very sweet chapter.
Author's Response:
aw ikr? mj's like a little puppy with his jealousy lol and yes Marlon is a tease, and let's hope he wont keep it bottled up for too long and yes that too, thanks for reading Darling <3
Date: Oct 29, 2015 08:28 pm Title: Ch. 1
Glad to see these two friends again. And how cute is it for her to wake up with Michael and her mother chatting away. I would love to wake up and find him in my kitchen..lol
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Imao I agree who wouldn't mj in their kitchen? And yeah I wanted mj to be cool with her mama, makes the experience more hilarous. Aw thanks hun I'll try my best :)