Date: Dec 02, 2015 02:00 pm Title: Ch.15
well I didn’t expect to see you both on the floor like that! You two were going at it weren’t ya? Ya nasties” <- lmao that's a good one
Glad Michael and Amber are friends again :) was about time lol
Marlon is great friend and it's nice of him to not date his lil brothers friend because he knows about his feelings, glad Amber could still be friends with him :)
Author's Response:
lmao! that line cracked me up too~
yes i know two stubborn headed idiots taking their damn time pfft and i agree too would have been even messier if he had liked her back! thanks for commenting hun <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2015 01:42 pm Title: Ch.15
Now all they need to do is get together. Please continue soon!!!!
Author's Response:
yes indeed they need to it Louie, now for them to realise their 'unknown' feelings knowing them that will take time *facepalms* lol. thanks for commenting hun <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2015 01:27 pm Title: Ch.14
That's what she gets for liking Marlon over Michael. (I'm sorry. I love all the Jacksons, but to me, Marlon wasn't very attractive at all.)
Author's Response:
That is so mean Louie damn lool! aw you didn't find him attractive? such a shame who did you prefer XD, thanks for commenting hun <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2015 12:57 am Title: Ch.13
MY REACTION WHEN OL' MIKEY BOY DIDNT ACCEPT HER APOLOGY EVEN THOUGH HE KNOW HE MISSES HER LOL!!!
AS FOR THIS CHRIS FELLOW AND THE WAY HE CONSTANTLY DROPPED THE BITCH BOMB...
LOL IT WAS NOT THAT SERIOUS!! CANT' WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!
Author's Response:
Lmaooo!!!! This comment made me laugh so much! Oh my word! Lol Chris does need to chill I agree dont worry the next chapter will be out tomorrow or over the week~ tthanks for this amazing funny comment! XD
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2015 03:16 pm Title: Ch.13
OMFG HE DON'T GIVA A FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK. POOR AMBER. POOR MICHAEL: (:(:(:(:((
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2015 03:12 pm Title: Ch.13
OMFG HE DON'T GIVA A FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK. POOR AMBER. POOR MICHAEL: (:(:(:(:((
Author's Response:
Ikr? Amber really will need try harder to get mj back and they really need to reconnect again too much sadness..thanks for reading <3
Author's Response:
Ikr? Amber really will need try harder to get mj back and they really need to reconnect again too much sadness..thanks for reading <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2015 11:38 am Title: Ch.13
She was sincere but it wasn't good enough for him. She really hurt him so it may take a minute for him to come around.
I'm glad Chris gave Amber a reality check but he didn't have to keep calling her out of her name like that. But I can see why he was so upset with her.
Nice set of drama in this chapter. Thanks for the update Lorry!
Author's Response:
exactly you said it right Ebony can't blame him at all for not accepting her apology! and who else but Chris to do so? well that's the kind of name he will call her until he maybe gets more warmth with her or not until she makes up with mj and you are welcome glad you liked it lol~
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2015 10:18 am Title: Ch.13
Fuck. Now Michael's the one being a douche. Although, I don't blame him. I just hope Amber stops hanging out with Marlon and really starts trying to show Michael how much she cares. They've been friends for too long. Michael also needs to listen to her apology and take it into consideration. I hope they work this out because they are in love with each other and don't even know it. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
the roles have changed now eh? lol and yes she might or marlon maybe join the group? who knows for now and yea they can't throw that sort of friendship for so long and yes he does need to and indeed they are my stubborn darlings all will be revealed soon! thanks for commenting hun <3
Date: Nov 29, 2015 09:58 am Title: Ch.13
She should try better tho and i understand Michaels anger towards her since he seen her hang out with his older brother who's in the business
Author's Response:
Exactly it still hasn't gone though her head clearly at what she did was wrong lool and michael was pissed off..did i smell jealousy hinted there? lol and yea true on she hanging out with his bro. thanks for commenting hun ~
[Report This]Date: Nov 29, 2015 09:07 am Title: Ch.12
My babies are mad at each other;(;(;(;(;(:(:(:?:(:(
Author's Response:
ikr? it's so sad i know they will make up soon hun! thanks for commenting <3
Date: Nov 27, 2015 12:11 am Title: Ch.12
Three weeks already? Wow that must have been the longest they're apart
Did she forget Marlon is also family?
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
that explains it all and yes it's been to darn long my stubborn teens let's hope they make up soon XD
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2015 09:32 pm Title: Ch.12
Amber really needs to stop being so stubborn and childish.
She already knew that the secret Michael was keeping was big. So why is she so mad when he finally tells her. If anything, I understand her shock but I think she should also feel relieved that he finally came clean and she be more curious to hear him out. Yeah, Amber isn't being a good friend right now so Im glad Michael has Chris by his side until she does.
But a real friend will always come back around in due time. So we'll be patient.
Nice chapter. Amber's stubbornness was so real to me. Made me feel some type of way. Lol
Author's Response:
yes she does, lol everyone is pissed off with her so far...let's hope she can put her stubborness aside and apologize and hurray for chris being there! and i got you to feel her stubborness another point to me! let's hope she can put herself in a better light somewhat and yes be patient it won't be too long lma, thanks for reviewing hun <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2015 03:46 pm Title: Ch.12
Ok. She doesn't deserve Michael. Michael told her his FAMILY was in the mafia, but the bitch is still hanging out with Marlon?! Bitch DIE. Busy getting jealous. Bitch, ditch Marlon's no good dumb ass and apologize to Michael!!! Damn. It's not rocket science.
Author's Response:
Lmao! this comment got me cracking up again!, yes unfortunaley she is hanging out with marlon which is not fair at all on poor mj and if she dies lol won't that hurt mj? lol and yes she needs to, her damn stubborness needs to be put on a high shelf and do it! i agree with ya~
thanks for the great comment <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2015 03:38 pm Title: Ch.11
I'm so glad Michael has Chris to cheer him up until Amber comes around. And once she does, I think Chris will enjoy her company too.
Everything will work out in due time😁
Another sweet chapter. It made me smile.
Author's Response:
Yea that's he is there for lol and maybe chris who knows? Aww It made you smile? I must have done something right! thanks Ebony <3
Date: Nov 25, 2015 02:36 pm Title: Ch.11
Lol love Chris he's so funny :)
Can't wait for more;) :)
Author's Response:
lol i know you do, that guy is crazy XD
thanks again hun <3