Date: Dec 25, 2015 02:04 am Title: Ch.19 - Christmas Parti
Lmao at the gif
Poor Michael
It's sweet of Amber And Chris to be friends for once and trow a party for Michael
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it lmao and Yea which is great but for how will. That last? Lol.
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2015 12:46 pm Title: Ch. 18
Now THAT was the definition of adorable. lmao. About time!!! I can honestly say that I didn't expect this to happen in the story for another ten chapters or so because both of them were too shy to make the first move. Looks like there's some good coming from this Angelina obsession after all. If it weren't for her, these two lovebirds would probably still be skipping around the bush, so to speak. I am so glad that you surprised us with this chapter. I think it went by rather sweetly. As writers, we are always our own worst critics but I really enjoyed it.
Can't wait to see Michael handle this Angelina problem like a real man lol.
Another great job, Lorry!
Author's Response:
really that long Ebony? seriously? 10 chapters! honestly imao, well them being together 'in secret' and ya'll are going 'finally' at me and true on that if it wasn't for then your assumption yes would be happening lol.
aww well i'll keep surpising you and i'm glad you enjoyed it my lovely friend, thanks again hehe even if it is late lol and yes i think that's all what we are waiting for~
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2015 12:32 pm Title: Ch.17
Angelina will get her reality check soon and I cannot wait to witness it. But I think Michael has to be the one to do it, not Amber. That will probably be the only way to reach out to her. Michael has to be the one to do something about this.
Another intriguing chapter. Sorry for the late review, by the way.
Author's Response:
hey ebony, yea been waiting for you tut tut but better late than ever!, yeah mj does need to sort this crazy chick out...we shall see, she's like a an insect that won't leave lol.
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2015 06:20 pm Title: Ch. 18
they are together...in secret...YAYAYAYAYAY!!!!
miss crazy is about to get FUCKED up by ME!!!!!
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue:):):):):):)
Author's Response:
Lmao save some for me too, and burray they are together at last but in secret lol. Thanks for reading hun <3
Date: Dec 21, 2015 11:36 am Title: Ch. 18
Finally lol
Author's Response:
oh hush!, lmao be glad they are together geez.
Date: Dec 21, 2015 11:30 am Title: Ch.17
Poor Amber
Author's Response:
ikr? my poor baby...angelina needs a lesson taught >_>
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2015 10:32 am Title: Ch. 18
About damn time. Smh
Author's Response:
Lmao ikr? At lassst thanks for commenting <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2015 04:02 am Title: Ch.16
HAD ALOT OF CATCHING UP TO DO!!! OOOOOOOHHHHH ITS ABOUT TO GET DRAMATIC
.. LOL WILL CHRIS AND Amber EVER get along???!?!?! lol and ummm miss angelina needs to have like several seats 
angelina!! lol she trying it already for me and she hasnt even started yet. Cant wait for your next update love your story!!
Author's Response:
your gifs kill me every time gurl! Lmaooo, to answer that question..chris and amber will never be friends by look of it but they have to tolerate each other somehow (for michael of course) lmao Angelina does need to sit her delusional ass down! thanks again for your wonderful comment also reading as well <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2015 03:43 am Title: Ch.16
Angelina is delusional...smd for trying to break their friendship Angelina...delusional bitch...what grade are they all in? What site did you go to to make your banner?
Author's Response:
lmao!! she is indeed delusional she needs to chill and back off..smh..they are both in junior year and almost going into senior year. I didn't use a website hun i used photoshop to create my banners :)
Date: Dec 18, 2015 02:19 am Title: Ch.16
Can Amber And Chris ever be friends? Lol
Some weird chick that Angelina lol
Author's Response:
Those two? Never in a million years ..and she is weird needs to step back real quick lol. thanks hun <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2015 05:10 pm Title: Ch.16
Angelina delusional as fuck. Amber and Michael need to just get together already. Geez. And Michael needs to listen to her and stay away from Angelina.
Author's Response:
Yes mj does need to stay away from this chick and he somehow sees the good in everyone which could be his downfall who knows?.and yes they need together don't worry they will eventually.. lol. thanks for reading <3
Author's Response:
Yes mj does need to stay away from this chick and he somehow sees the good in everyone which could be his downfall who knows?.and yes they need together don't worry they will eventually.. lol. thanks for reading <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2015 04:03 pm Title: Ch.16
This Angelina person is very delusional. I hate her already! And the funny thing about all this is that Michael is not even paying her any attention lol. He greeted her but that was it. No lingering stares, no flirtatious smiles, no nothing because he's all about Amber lol.
Claim your man, Amber! We can't surrender him over to the new girl on the block lol.
Good job Lorry!
Author's Response:
Lmao the hate is mutual, you noticed all his attention was focused on Amber good eye spotting ebony lol. yes she needs to claim her boy! Thanks Ebony <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2015 06:55 pm Title: Ch.15
awwwwwwwww chris and marlon are so sweet!! lol It's kind of sad though that it took them being locked in a room together to be friends again..lol..chis and his bitch bomb dropping 
..lol (this is how i picture him sayng it!!)
NOW HE HAS TO STOP CALLING HER THAT SINCE MIKE AND AMBER ARE FRIENDS AGAIN..LOL ..I DONT THINK HE WILL THO!! THANKS FOR THE DOUBLE UPDATE..
...(HITS TAYLOR SWIFT DANCE!!)LOL
Author's Response:
LMAO! I love your comments so much! and yes I don't think he will stop anytime that chris and that face is what i picture it his expressions to be. And yea it is sad but something had to be done about them and that dance ohmygosh! lmao glad you like the doubled updates! keep your funny coming hun i look foward to them XD
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2015 06:35 pm Title: Ch.14
My face exactly when Marlon shut her down 
Poor thing she put herself out there ... great story.. im loving it!
Author's Response:
Lool, Ikr? poor girl tried..at least she got rejected nicely~ aw thanks hun, glad you've been enjoying my story <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2015 02:38 pm Title: Ch.15
About time! I'm so glad they made up finally and that Amber listened to the whole story.
Now I know that these two can make it through anything.
I think I like Marlon a lot more now. And Chris is so funny, as usual.
Another sweet chapter 😊
Author's Response:
Ik! Finally after so long lol, ooh marlon winning more points? Awesome! Lol and chris is a clown as usual, glad you liked the chapter Ebony as always thanks for reading <3