Date: Jan 17, 2016 07:14 am Title: Ch.24
That's one way of shutting someone up lol
Author's Response:
Lmao indeed it is! Only mj will use it for his own advantage π
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2016 07:09 pm Title: Ch. 23
The brotherly interaction was pretty funny. You can't help but love Marlon lol.
So glad Angelina is officially out of the picture. Now, we can see what next adventure/obstacle awaits our favorite couple. π
Update soon Lorry!
Author's Response:
Yes indeed you can't help but love even if he is annoying as hell π, and I'm happy she's gone too Lool and I'll update sometime soon, thanks Ebony π
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2016 02:43 pm Title: Ch. 23
Marlon Marlon Marlon...he know he be givin some crazy ass adviceπ π ππ
Author's Response:
*sighs* yes Marlon only he would give that kind of advice and put mj in the dog house with Amber π thanks as always π
Date: Jan 10, 2016 10:48 am Title: Ch. 23
Lmao gotta love Marlon
Author's Response:
who else would do it but him? lmao~
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2016 08:09 am Title: Ch. 23
Aw Mike and Marlon. Love this story. Please update this one and Liberian Girl soon!!!
Author's Response:
aww thanks Louie, your comments make me smile <3
Don't worry i'll be updating them both soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2016 04:36 pm Title: Ch. 22
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueπππππππππππππππππππππi think Angelina is gonna lie to Chris about amber Michael and Marlon
Author's Response:
Thanks again for your support as always hun! Who knows you might be right or wrong? Lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2016 11:08 pm Title: Ch. 22
Wow! Well I can honestly say that I don't think Angelina is going to be a problem anymore but I am a little about her welfare. She needs to be locked away somewhere, definitely.
But I'm glad MJ finally took a stand.
I didn't really like how he and Marlon kept referring to Amber as their property though. Makes her sound like an object that belongs to them. But I know they meant well. Perhaps they could have use a less demeaning term.
But overall, this was a very entertaining chapter, Lorry! Great job.
Author's Response:
you stil care for her even after the crap she's done? you have a heart ebony don't worry they don't roughen her up too much, lol and yes I am as well on mj doing it at last and yea they could have used more of a less demeaning term for her but it was maybe just to get their point across to Angelina in that moment to back off for good? and thanks as always Ebony glad you enjoyed it <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2016 05:20 pm Title: Ch. 22
Damn, mafia Michael is HOT. The only thing that could make him sexier is tattoos. Lord. Please continue soon!!!!
Author's Response:
I agree well not on the tattoos part lol and yes there is more to come Louie thanks as always <3
Date: Jan 04, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Ch. 22
Love this side of Michael, he fights for who he loves
If she's smart she stays away from them for good
Author's Response:
yes the badass mj we all have been waiting for at last, and yes if she truly is smart she would but we shall see eh? lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2016 11:51 pm Title: Ch. 21
Michael really needs to hurry up and handle Angelina properly. Come on and man up, Michael and stop being a pushover!
Can't wait to read what happens next.
And happy new year to you too, Lorry!
Author's Response:
He really needs to cause this chick is pissing me off too gosh!, Lool and same to you darling <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2016 11:19 pm Title: Ch. 21
Ooooh I got wow mad when Angelina kissed Michael's cheek. I'll punch that hoe outππππππc6;c6;c6;c6;c4;c4;c4;
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueππππππππππππ
Author's Response:
lmao, you and me both hun! don't worry you can punch her later~
aw thanks hun as always thanks for your comment <3
Date: Jan 01, 2016 10:15 am Title: Ch. 21
Lol . at the apple juice part, poor Michael having to drive them home
Someone's gotta do something about Angelina and fast lol
Author's Response:
I couldn't help but do it..mj can't be the only one to get drunk lmao~
and yes something has to be done about this chick she needs to GO~
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2015 01:39 pm Title: Ch.20 - Christmas Parti II
Time for pati number 2! Let's hope MJ doesn't get drunk this time.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh let's hope not if Amber doesn't get dragged away for something else lmao..and we all know mj can't hold his drinks in! poor thing hehe..thanks for the review darling! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2015 01:31 pm Title: Ch.19 - Christmas Parti
Such a nice Christmas episode. And it was so refreshing NOT to see crazy Angelina trying to ruin things.
Chris really needs to learn how to get Amber's name straight.
Author's Response:
lmao I don't think he ever will unless he wants something...and thanks I made sure that crazy chick wasn't around to ruin anything like she always do with her madness..she needs to go to church lool.
Date: Dec 26, 2015 03:58 am Title: Ch.20 - Christmas Parti II
Poor Michael lol
Lol at Marlon
Love the chapter :)
Author's Response:
Lool Ikr? Thanks again π