[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 13: Love is Love
Aww so the 'business guy' she met at her job previous chapters who was driving a Bentley was her uncle the whole time and they ain't even know it. Wow! But I'm happy that they found each other and are willing to form a relationship. Plus, he offered her and Honor to come live with him in L.A.
That's a big ass offer that I would love to see her willingly take but what about Mike? I love to see them together and allat. I would hate to see them have to be separated. But I mean, there could be another way too. James could offer to send them money and make visits to them so that way she doesn't have to leave her home where she feels more comfortable.
I just don't want her and Mike to not be together. It's obvious that Michael doesn't want her to leave either and he cares for Her So much.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 12: Love After War
Lord, I figured Jules wasn't gonna keep sane for long. I figured moment they got outside that him, Patrick and Michael were gonna get loose.
For a moment I thought they was gonna break up. I was like nooooo! :(
Oooooh snap.now! They finally made love and Kai finally lost her virginity.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 11: Oh BROTHER!
Michael and Kai relationship is just ugh!!!! They are so effing cute together and I hope it remains that way.
And oh brother is right!!!! Their mom has a brother!?!?!?!? Shut up and shoot me.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 10: Lord Be A Fence
I just feel so sorry for Kira now. She's kicked out of her house by her mom because she's preggers with Jules baby. Poor girl. But Kai is willing to help her through it unlike some people who should be doing it the most (Kira's mom).
And Michael is trying to get to the poon. Poor boy can't even wait much longer but is fighting the will until Kai is ready. He is such a good boyfriend.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 9: Trust me
Kai is so nosy but hell, who wouldn't when you see an unfamiliar girl standing in front of your man's house. And it's Michaela ex. Wow!!!
And Kira is pregnant...........by Jules.
Oh shit!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder how pat is gonna take the news cause it's clear that they were seeing each other. But Jules Kira????
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 8: Honor
Oh Lord. What he'll has gotten into Honor???? I u understand he is growing up, but I think it's something much deeper than that cause homeboy is saying bitch and catching attitudes with folks.
And now the office called Kai cause of Honor. I hope he's okay.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 7: Doesn't Really Matter At All
Lawd, Jesus, Michael got arrested and was probably set up. Smdh!!! But I'm glad he is finally out.
I felt played when I found out she was only dreaming, lol. You got me there ;)
And wtf crawled up Jules ass and bit him? Girl when I say I was about to jump on this story and tag team that nigga with mike, I was gonna beat me some ass today. He had no business slapping Kai. Well, I guess Mr. Nice guy wasn't so nice after all and was coming off as being possessive and shit.
So her dream has finally come into a reality. Mike wants her to be his girl. Can I cry now?? The ending was just too sweet.
Author's Response:
Haha her daydreaming got us all, I tried to be truly creative with that. Thanks for reading! I've read and like your story too! It's good girl keep it up!
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 6: Windows of OF My Eyes
Jules is so sweet. Awww!!!! And I see Honor catching attitudes, being protective of his big sis.
Now, Michael done killed someone and whatnot and all he'll seems like it's about to break loose.
So whoever these people were, were waiting for him at Walmart??? Good thing they didn't go.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 5: Fools Gold?
So she finally decked to go the party with Trey. Too bad Kira couldn't go.
And did she just give Jules a chance to go on a date with him?!?!?!? Wow. I think he's serious about her.
And wtf Michael??? One day you care and now you dont?? I think someone is jealous now.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sorry You're Not My Kind Of Girl
Lawd, they shooting, they shooting!!!!!! I hope whoever this G dude is notice that those bullets he fired could have been the end of someone's life on that store. And let's not forget, the southern twang dude who was shot in the leg by him. And Michael is involved in that mess???? :/ smh.
And it left poor Kai having flashbacks of her mother's death and baby boy Honor in horror.
Now, I kinda like the bad/good guy Michael in this story. Like he speak some real stuff here. I'm surprised he was opened to Kai and she to him.
Imo, think Michael should cuff her up. A good girl like Kai could help him become better and possibly choose the right path. He'll just have to want it for himself in order for Her to help and guide and support him.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3: The Boy Next Door
I knew Jules was gonna ask Ma I out to homecoming but I think he would ask her out on a casual date either. Hmmm. I think she should give him a chance at least. It's her body and whether or not if she wants to give up the lo in. He can't just take it only unless he has some other agenda to get it. But I wouldn't say he was like that. But she should at least consider it. People can change if they want that certain someone.
Now, Michael's flirting is going a lil overboard. Talking about he would just fuck her, he would make love to her. Oh snap!!!!';)
Lastly, I'm very glad that she and Kira settled that little brief problem between them. It wasn't worth not talking to each other and Kira is right. Michael is not he man she just strongly likes him which I can understand.
Loving this :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 11:34 am Title: Chapter 2: It's Just The Little Game We Play
SSo Michael moved in next door to her. Hmmm. He's gonna be bugging the hell out of her now. Lol.
And this Jules guy...he seem to be feeling Kai but she's not really feeling the same. I think he probably wants to ask her to homecoming.
And Michael was flirting with Kai in front of Kira and now Kira is upset. But she can't be upset at Kai because it's not her fault Michael's flirting with her. she'll come around. Hopefully.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is
Just now reading this story and I must say, I'm enjoying it thus far. It's great!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2015 12:51 am Title: Chapter 16: Woah
Aw crap! I hope Michael won't try to blame that on Kai. Yikes! This story is very entertaining.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Stay tuned! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2015 12:29 am Title: Chapter 15: You're worth The Trouble
Yay for Kira...but poor Michael. I wonder what's going on with him. I hope he'll be okay.