[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2015 01:38 am Title: Chapter 21: Can't Take Away Happiness
Hopefully, everything can be drama free until they graduate. I also hope Michael will eventually accompany Kai when she leaves to go live with her uncle.
Date: Jul 18, 2015 01:18 am Title: Chapter 20: Breaking Point
God, please don't let that be Michael's baby!!! My heart can't take it! It just can't!
Date: Jul 18, 2015 12:48 am Title: Chapter 19: Hard Times Pt. II
Things are really developing with Kai and Michael. That Jules character really needs some help. I hope he never finds out Kira is having his child, but something tells me that he just might. 😬
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2015 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 21: Can't Take Away Happiness
I am so anxious to know who the hell got a damn hi on Mike. Is it Jules ass or what?? Damn.! Playing the guessing game isn't so fun. I'ma stop and just wait it out...if I can.
Now they are officially about to graduate and they just received their caps and gowns. I couldn't stop smiling. In a matter of months, that will be me too.
Anyway, I'm glad they are all making it to gather as friends and a family. Such an epic moment for them all.
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2015 02:03 am Title: Chapter 20: Breaking Point
I just feel bad for Mike right now. Jules ain't making it no better nor Lauren was either with this baby drama. Right now, anything is possible woth that damn baby but until then, I ain't gone say anything.
Now, who the actual hell got a hit on Mike????
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2015 01:45 am Title: Chapter 19: Hard Times Pt. II
This chapter was cute yet very sad. I know how much Michael loves his mama and he wants to help her so bad but she's just being complicated. But Pat is right. He needs to give it time. Getting clean just doesn't happen over night.
And now she has stomach cancer and could be possible dying because of it. Lord bless her.
And Jules still with the bullshit I see. He can never get the memo.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2015 11:56 am Title: Chapter 20: Breaking Point
Michael needs to move with Kai and Honor after he graduates. It's probably the only way he's gonna get away from the street life. I hope nothing bad happens. And I hope the guy Lauren was fucking before Michael is the dad. The condom could've broke. You never know! Please update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2015 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 19: Hard Times Pt. II
Oh my. No spacing and no italics. I think I love you.
What is up with Jules? He just won't stop. Poor Michael and his mother :(
re: the video. http://mjfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=2075&chapter=5 I wouldn't recommend putting a song on as it really slows down the loading of the page. Making song recommendations is always cool, though!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2015 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 18: Team MJ & Kai
Yayy no italics. My eyes thank you!
They are moving fast! I wonder what his surprise later on will be.
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2015 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 18: Team MJ & Kai
What the hell he want ten kids for? Boy trippin lol. This story is addicting! Keep writing 😄
Author's Response:
Hahaha Michael loves the kids, he know damn well Kai ain't givin' him no 10 children haha and thank you! I appreciate it :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2015 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 17: Hard Times
That Michael Jackson experience reference made me laugh. I'm glad she didn't give it up to him although the temptation was pretty hard core. Make him work for it girl! Love this chapter 😊
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 17: Hard Times
Bruh, you scared me there for a minute. I thought Michael and Kai was gonna break up. I was on edge over here reading each word carefully. I refused to see them break up over some petty ass shit. If Michael could just stop running away and faced his problems and communicate, a word he seem to.not understand to do, then things would be all peachy keen. I understand he was mad at Kai for making him go to sleep but damn, it was a total accident. But I'm so happy they worked everything out and are back in good hands.
Now although this shouldn't be funny but it was, the part where Michael and Ma I made up and Kira got.a little too excited to the point she threw up. That was funny to me. I could just visualize it that's what made it even funnier.
More soon. :)
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah I wouldn't want them to break up that fast, especially over that. Michael was just deep into his feelings girl haha. He and Kai are a great pair, she's holding on to him until the wheels fall off.
LMAO XD Kira throwing off was highly unexpected, but Trey wasn't having that at all! haha stay tuned , theres moreeee <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 16: Woah
I hate seeing Michael ho through that with his mom being all strung out on those terrible drugs. It hurts to see him like that. He's trying his best as a son who still loves her so to help her get her help and better.
But what Pat was talking about to them was some reeeaaalll stuff. They are all they got and will make it out of that hell hole they call home. People struggle but they will make it through it together as a fam.
And oh god. Michael's mom is nowhere to be found. She left like she said she was. Kai don't blame this on yourself.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 15: You're worth The Trouble
Michael showed up....with a broken ass phone. No wonder why he didnt answer her call. But Paris d that he is finally getting out of that street life for good and planning.on becoming better. It's time for him to grow up and make something positive of himself. I'm proud of you Mikey.
And Kira finally told Pat about the baby. I can understand the mix emotions at the news but I knew deep down inside that Pat wasn't gonna leave her man. What one man won't do, another one will. Pat you da real MVP!!!
And it ain't surprising that Mike smashed that woman. He smashed pretty much everyone who Kai doesn't know of. Smh, lol.
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 14: Just To Make You Happy
I laughed so hard when that dude at Target tried to holla at Kai. Bruh she went too far as to lie about michael beating so that he could get off her case. Kml. He better be glad Michael wasn't really there to kick his ass about his girl. He should thank God and the heavenly angels above.
So Mike is really not gonna be there all because he is caught up doing work for Ghost. Well, at least he told her the truth cause he could have easily lied and said he was gonna do something else.
And not only Kai, I wanna know what Mike really do too. I know he work in the streets but pulling out $3,000 in cash???? You gotta be curious.