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Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2015 09:24 am Title: Chapter 7: Doesn't Really Matter At All

Yes!!! I love it!!!

Reviewer: ilovemichaeljackson34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 10:26 am Title: Chapter 6: Windows of OF My Eyes

Oh my gooood :O Please write more!!! I love this! :D

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2015 07:26 am Title: Chapter 5: Fools Gold?

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue😍😍😍😍😍😍😀😀😀😀

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2015 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Fools Gold?

Damn!!! Michael deserves it though. He really just needs to tell her he loves her. It would make everything better. Please continue soon!!!

Reviewer: MJ_1234Eva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2015 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sorry You're Not My Kind Of Girl

Awwww.....he should give it a try though

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2015 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sorry You're Not My Kind Of Girl

Aww c'mon. Michael don't know shit. They need to try it out before he starts assuming.

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2015 06:18 am Title: Chapter 3: The Boy Next Door

plzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2015 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 2: It's Just The Little Game We Play

I think Kira will be okay. It's not like Kai did anything wrong anyways. I really like Trey. He reminds me of my friend Troy who is also gay and is constantly making me laugh with his outrageous personality. You did a great job on developing this character. So far, he's my favorite one. Your story has potential, so my advice to you is to keep writing it. I would like to see how you progress with it 😊

Author's Response:

Thank you :) yeah I know right Trey is a very blunt and funny haha

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2015 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is

So far, this sounds pretty interesting. Something tells me that Kira isn't going to like Kai getting close to Michael.

Author's Response:

Not A Chance, she's not feeling it at all 

Reviewer: tatyanalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2015 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is

PLEASE CONTINUE. What era is this? :D



Author's Response:

Mj's teen years :') .. And I will . Thanks for reading !

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2015 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Well Look Who It Is

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!! mj a babd boy...YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! I can't believe he's movivng in. Hope all the best for him and Kai :):):):):):)

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