[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 01:03 pm Title: The First Date
Very nice first date. I just wish Ariya had a little more self confidence, but I'm glad Michael told her she was beautiful. He's so charming, making me wish I was her on the date with him lol.Looks like you've gained another reader. Nice work so far.
Date: Apr 27, 2015 07:37 am Title: The Start of Something New
This has a pretty nice start. So far, I like what you're doing with the story. I want to read more so...moving on to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2015 06:13 am Title: Facing A Beast
I hope she feels pretty stupid now for judging him and not giving him a chance to explain.
Date: Apr 24, 2015 05:25 am Title: Facing A Beast
man this was full of drama..how James and Andrew could be blamed is beyond me..and Michael did tell her to leave but she didn't listen..
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2015 02:00 pm Title: The Start of Something New
Imagine seeing someone you know from time to times chaging into a beast infront of your very eyes. I'm amazed she hasn't fainted yet lol.
Anyway, I''m just curious about what happend to Riya's father? None ever mention it in the story about her father absence.. (or maybe something slip a long the way when I read those chapter?)
And, great chapter.. You can feel the tension when you read it haha. Will be patiently waited for the next chapter :D
Date: Apr 13, 2015 09:04 pm Title: A Secret Revealed
Ah shit! Now I'm nervous as hell
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2015 08:59 pm Title: A Secret Revealed
Girl there was nothing wrong with this chapter you capture it very well I imagined the whole thing in my mind. Great job can't wait for more.
Date: Apr 09, 2015 08:33 pm Title: Dante
AWWWWWWW!!! They are too freakin adorable for me! mhm she was gunna say those magical three words!
Dante is a very suspicous character..... he's probably a warewolf too...hmmm..I dont know but Michael didnt like him. and it takes alot for Michael to not like somebody.
Date: Apr 09, 2015 04:53 am Title: Dante
I wonder if Dante betrayed Michael's trust or something..
Date: Mar 17, 2015 05:46 pm Title: An Explanation
Michael was so damn cute in this chapter! He came with roses and paid for her pizza..a way to get in her house lmaooo..reaaal cute!
Date: Mar 17, 2015 05:18 pm Title: All's Well That...Ends Well?
After I read the broke kiss scene twice...I came to the conclusion that somebody was turning into a wolf ;)
Date: Mar 08, 2015 11:26 am Title: All's Well That...Ends Well?
Ariya is gorgeous..so sweet that she is Michael's girlfriend now though I am as lost as Alice in Wonderland at what happened at the end. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2015 05:00 am Title: All's Well That...Ends Well?
Wow this is really good girl please please continue I can't wait to see where you take this.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2015 05:42 pm Title: A Party For Sylvia
This just friends thing is going to drive me insane but I'm going to wait patiently for something more to happen because I am simply loving these two together!
LOL at Michael trying to be all smooth with the "you look nice" and biting his lip. Boy knows he has a special affect on females. and Brittany... lord please keep her away from Michael... maybe I'm thinking too much into it? Well still... she gives me bad vibes.. should I be worried? Lol.
Update soon!
Date: Feb 23, 2015 04:46 am Title: A Party For Sylvia
Reeeaaaal smooth michael reeeeaal smooth LOL! Still wanna know why Brittany invited her to the party. because they are such good friends to michael..Hmm it's more to that