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Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2015 10:38 pm Title: An Intrusion and an Apology

I want to see Dante getting his ass whooped and everything will be peachy!

Reviewer: fk20 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2015 01:29 pm Title: What Must Be Faced

Oh-shit-moment. Lol.

Reviewer: Yutsu Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2015 06:53 am Title: The Start of Something New

I just started reading this fic and I'm so happy if found this fic! This is such a great story, and your descriptions are good. But the best thing I LOVE is your DIALOGUES. Oh gosh, how do you do it? :3

I don't normally read romantic stories- so WHY ARE YOU TURNING THIS TOMBOY INTO A GUSHING GIRLY HECK? XD

Anyway, I'm happy Ariya isn't a sue. Thank you so much for that, lovely author-chan~ ^w^

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2015 12:57 am Title: What Must Be Faced

Oh boy! I was so afraid that he would find her.
I'm so glad Andrew made her come to her senses about Michael because she was really pissing me off in the beginning of this chapter. Beginning to make me think she didn't deserve Michael at all. She needs to remember how great of a guy he is and make amends with him quickly. More soon, please a86;

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2015 12:10 am Title: What Must Be Faced

Oh shit! Dante????? No, no, this can't be happening!

Reviewer: jkl567 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2015 08:40 pm Title: The Start of Something New

When will you update Let them all materialize?

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2015 12:15 am Title: Fight or Flight

Ugh, Ariya is making me so mad! She know she really wants to be with him. Therefore, she needs to put on her big girl pants and stay by his side. Besides, she needs Michael to protect her from crazy Dante. I feel so sorry for Mike. I hope Ariya comes to her senses soon.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 11:29 pm Title: Facing A Beast

This ending was so epic!!!! More more more as soon as you can, please. I loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 11:00 pm Title: A Secret Revealed

Niiiice! I enjoyed this chapter a lot. It was the moment I'd been waiting for. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 09:51 pm Title: Dante

Very adorable. I'm curious to know more about this Dante character though. He doesn't sound like good news and something tells me that this isn't the last we're going to see of him.

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Date: Apr 27, 2015 09:19 pm Title: An Explanation

I'm glad they made up but I'm ready for him to tell her the entire truth.

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Date: Apr 27, 2015 05:03 pm Title: All's Well That...Ends Well?

Great chapter! I feel bad for Michael. I hope Ariya will be understanding and stick by him whenever he decides to tell her the truth.I'm glad they're finally official though. They have great chemistry.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 03:53 pm Title: A Party For Sylvia

She needs to hurry up and claim him before Brittany tries to snatch him up. I don't trust her at all. Why else would she start trying to befriend Ariya all of a sudden? Ariya needs to be careful.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 03:53 pm Title: A Party For Sylvia

She needs to hurry up and claim him before Brittany tries to snatch him up. I don't trust her at all. Why else would she start trying to befriend Ariya all of a sudden? Ariya needs to be careful.

Reviewer: DareToDream Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2015 01:41 pm Title: Clear Water

Hey, don't doubt yourself. The chapter was pretty good. I'm really glad they kissed.

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