[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2015 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow. Michael is really upset. Can't blame him though...
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2015 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 31
Such a sweet exchange these two chapters. I feel like it's the calm before the storm.
more soon <333
Date: Mar 31, 2015 03:47 am Title: Chapter 31
This interaction between Michael and Malania's parents went better than I expected. I'm looking forward to more of this.
Date: Mar 30, 2015 08:30 am Title: Chapter 29
I'm getting misty reading this. Michael has such a big heart,
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2015 08:44 am Title: Chapter 29
The confusion they both feel is so palpable. I'm glad Michael expressed his feelings. I'm sure Lanz will be able to commit to her own fully soon. At least they can begin to mend each other but it's going to take a lot.
I hope the investigation is hard hitting cause Larry needs to be looked into asap. No wonder it was so easy for him to just walk away. He's the only one Case was left alone with as far as you mentioned.
Riveted as usual. More soon! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2015 10:27 am Title: Chapter 29
I loved how you "went there" in this chapter. You brought the hurt alive and made it palpable in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2015 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 29
This chapter was so emotional and I loved reading every single word. You have quite the talent of putting together such a raw and real story. Can't wait for the next update!! :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2015 02:46 am Title: Chapter 26
I'm hoping that her parents are doing the right thing for her
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 28
Fabulous chapter as always! Their little date to the music store and In-N-Out was the cutest thing ever. And the ending was so sweet. :) Can't wait for more! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 28
Sigh...Just sigh... *dreamy heart eyes as my chin rests on my palm. I'm glad Michael is being so expressive. It will be interesting to see what Lanz actually means by her saying they don't have to talk abou feelings. My guess is it's more like she doesn't really know how to have a man woman relationship more so than her not wanting one.
More soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 27
While I feel for Diane and her hurt over what happened to Casey I also want to take a page out of Lanz and Bronwyn's book and trip her into oblivion for using Michael as an emotional and financial crutch and giving nothing in return but heartache and a possible stint in jail accompanied by the label of sex offender. She didn't even grant him the chance to explain himself and figure out where and when this could have happened to Casey. She deserves being in the clutches of her mother.
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[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2015 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 26
This was an amazing chapter. I'm glad she worked through the issues with her mom and that she's considering getting the help she needs.
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[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2015 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
This sounds rather interesting. Definitely well written. I'm really busy right now, but maybe I'll read later :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2015 06:40 am Title: Chapter 25
This woman has got to be the most dumbest broad I have ever seen. First off how can Michael be the first person you suspect just because she said his name when you already knew that she calls for him when she's upset second if anything she she be checking that Larry guy out he sseems really suspicious to me instead of going after and attacking an innocent man.