




Date: Mar 30, 2017 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 8- Confessions Pt. 1
Ahhhhhhhhh yessssss Michael's stubbornness is wearing off





Date: Mar 29, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 7- Love Don't Live Here
Why is this so juicy 🙄





Date: Mar 29, 2017 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes
YAAASSS I LOVE THIS SO FAR
Date: Mar 29, 2017 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes
About to dive into this story head first and I know I won't have any regrets 😬





Date: Nov 26, 2016 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 3- Askin' For Trouble
I really like the foreshadowing at the beginning of the chapter with officer Willow





Date: Nov 26, 2016 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 2- Saving Grace
I like how even though Michael is like a real OG, he's still nice to Simone and doesn't act all stuck up, thinkin he's too good for kids.





Date: Nov 26, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes
Ooh, I love this story so far!





Date: Oct 25, 2016 09:16 am Title: Chapter 57- Gangsta Lovin'
I'm so glad that you didn't let Semaj die. That would be so sad and break my heart :'(.
When I found out 'Gangsta Lovin', I kept reading it non stop till the end. And I love both Michael and Semaj characters you created. You've done a really great job! I like that Semaj is a girly, gentle girl with classic, who knows how to apologize when she did something wrong. I really really don't like the girl character who is so stubborn and has to much pride to say sorry even though she knows she is wrong. And Michael, he is a great guy to me, who is such a normal young man that made mistakes because of unfortunately circumstances and tried to get his life back. A bad boy but not bad at all (if you know what I mean ;)) .
Thank you very much for sharing with us this amazing story of yours. It's really great and well written. You're such a talented author :).
Author's Response:
Aww thanks so much! You're amazing for this review. I hope you're reading the sequel and enjoying that one too!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 57- Gangsta Lovin'
LOL the amount of times I've re read this 😂 One of my faves, I love the concept!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks girl!
Date: Sep 17, 2016 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 57- Gangsta Lovin'
Rereading because it's just so great!!!. I know it's been awhile but this story has potential to go on. But overall, this is the best story I've read on here.☺ï¸. (A sequel would really make me happy ðŸ˜ðŸ˜˜)
Author's Response:
I thought about a sequel, but I don't really know, lmao. Thank you!
Date: Aug 25, 2016 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3- Askin' For Trouble
Re-reading as his birthday has me feeling nostalgic <3
Author's Response:
Yes, I love going back and reading it too.





Date: Aug 09, 2016 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 48- Shit Don't Stop Here
I'm so glad that Michael and Semaj's father worked things out! Great job! This was a great chapter.
Author's Response:
I really appreciate you reading this and reviewing. It means a lot!





Date: Aug 04, 2016 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 47- Generic Juice and Swimsuits
Another good chapter. I loved it!





Date: Aug 04, 2016 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 46- Shots Fired
I'm so eager to find out what happens in the next chapter! Great job!





Date: Aug 04, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
This was such a sweet chapter! I loved it a lot!