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Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2014 11:13 pm Title: Planting the Seed

"You're late." She said picking up another magazine off the top of the stack and opening it. I snatched that one from her too and she sighed loudly pressing her fingers to the side of her head.

"Hopefully after today your period will be to." She shook her head at my comment and I swore I saw a ghost of a smile on her face.

 

^^^^ not even gonna lie, that made me laugh out loud. This story is so great.

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2014 09:58 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures

I'm so mad at myself for all the times I've looked at this story and said "I'm gonna read that one day, but I'm too lazy to today" because it's so great. Just finished the first chapter and I'm impressed. LOVE the way you write, like you've been writing for years. I love Nina and her tough personality. I'm so staying up for the rest of the night to read this!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2014 04:36 am Title: The Arrival

haha they definitely have their hands full with twin girls  love this story cant wait to read more of this great story

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2014 07:57 pm Title: The Arrival

Awww...how cute! Lol at Mike and his gutter mind watching the doctor sew Nina up down there, lol. He might as well quit, because nothing will go on there for more than six weeks, since she had a tear too.

Maddox don't know what to do with these new noisemakers! Michael is so cute in his actions as a first time dad, and as expected, he has his hands full! Diva Paris is already demanding and laying down her little laws. Daddy will be WHIPPED, x3! ;)

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2014 12:16 am Title: The Arrival

How exciting! 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2014 10:56 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures

Interesting concept..not to worry you're doing fine so far. :) Will do catching up when I can..Nina sounded like when Ronnie Dunn had told Kix to take off the shades at the award show, haha!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2014 09:44 pm Title: The Arrival

Haha oh mike, twin girls, damn... 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2014 09:17 pm Title: The Arrival

Yay. The babies are all fine (and they inherited plastic surgery lol).  They sound adorable...and loud. I can't wait to see how Michael handles parenthood.

Favorite line in this chapter: Put an extra few stiches in there, doc, if you know what I mean...i think that was a yes She's had three babies. I'd hope for both their sakes, the doc does  just that.

Another great chapter! And..omg we are at 27. Sequel. Sequel. Sequel. :D



Author's Response:

Lmao we're just going to pretend the chin dimple is natural because until today I did not know it was plastic surgery >.<

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2014 06:33 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures

SEQUEL!? Yasssssss!!!! *claps and stumps* lol. Yep, those girls are about to give it to him, lol. He thinks Nina has him whipped...he will be jumping through all kinds of hoops with these little two princesses now! ;) Lord, if they look like their momma-help Michael.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2014 09:57 pm Title: Getting Real

Yes! The babies are coming!!! Little Maddox will NEVER be bored now, lol. Mike might need another shot of alcohol once these twins arrive because he's about to be on his toes x2.

Author's Response:

Michael's in for it. He's got a whole sequel's worth of trouble heading his way! ;)

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2014 09:57 pm Title: Getting Real

@LouieLlama - lol

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2014 09:52 pm Title: Getting Real

Serves him right to have that kind of an awakening. Pfft. He has some valuable lessons to learn if he wants to be a parent. What would he have done had Nina kept her distance and not decided to coparent with/marry him?

Awwwawww they are finally communicating! Though, I'll admit MJ made it 2 days, let alone a week and a half in bed with her.

The babies are finally coming!! Okay, now that I let that excitement out, I need to rant at MJ. What the eff is he doing driving back to Neverland. Dude has how many cars and employees?! Go with your wife. smdh. Oh, and destroying the letter just destroys one more example for Nina as to why Marcus is a waste.

Okay, back to being excited about the birth. I hope both babies are okay! Another great chapter <3



Author's Response:

LOL what would Michael do if Nina decided not to stick around? Maybe he'll get a taste of the single dad life in the Sequel... maybe...

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2014 08:04 pm Title: Getting Real

I don't blame Michael one bit for opening that letter. Marcus needs to realize that he lost her and he's not getting her back. If she really loved him, she'd let him call her Nina, like Michael does. Nope. I hope he drops the soap in that prison he's in.

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2014 04:49 am Title: Valentine's Day

"Another few days went by and before I knew it, it was Valentine's Day. I only remembered it because I woke up at 8 AM with a rose tickling my face." I have no idea why I found that part so amusing lmao

Chris needs to piss off, why on Earth did Michael even invite him on Valentines day knowing Nina's dislike for the man? smh not cool Mike.

I wish Nina would have snatched the bottles up and chucked them at the nearest wall lol

Can't wait for more Love!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 26, 2014 04:43 am Title: Dismissals and Proposals

All I can say is good riddance Jenassa :)

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Its just like Michael to be romantic and go all out like that with a hot air balloon :') That was so sweet omg I love these two!

AND A SEQUEL YAS NOW THATS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT

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U da best

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