Date: Aug 14, 2014 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 21: Downward Spiral
Man, poor Erin. Harry just doesn't feel the love and it's understandable, but still she's his mother. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Finally,someone who feels some sympathy for Erin! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2014 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 21: Downward Spiral
I knew that was going to happen Erin needs to stop thinking about herself and focus more on her son not Jack.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2014 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 20: Confessions
Damn Michael for throwing Erin under the bus. Although I suppose Brooke deserves the truth. Too bad it's fifteen fucking years too late! At this point I almost think why even bother?
Now Brooke is going to be mad at Erin. I actually don't think she has much right to be, it happened before they were married and you would have thought all those years ago she would have talked to Erin before getting with Michael seeing as he was Erin's best friend. You can't tell me Brooke was that oblivious to her sister's feelings? Although maybe, she doesn't strike me as the sharpest knife in the drawer. She seems fairly self-involed tbh I can se why Michael got sick of her. I didn't read the first story though so I'm probably missing something.
It's still really all Michael's fault. He is the one who caused the whole mess.
I hope that Erin lets Jake hit it soon, and that Michael hears them.
Author's Response: If Michael didn't even bother there'd be no drama. Lol! Michael and Brooke dated privately for a year so Erin had no clue untill they were finally engaged. Well, let's just say Brooke has book sense but not a lot of common sense. She lives in her own world. Lol!! Now that would be funny! Things will get heated between Erin and Jake really soon. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2014 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 20: Confessions
I really hope things get better for him as well as for Brook and Erin I got a feeling these two are about to have a serious fallout.
Author's Response: You just might be right! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Jul 30, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 20: Confessions
Well, I mean it was bound to happen sooner or later. Still... #TEAMJACOB all the way. :)
Now. I shall be patient for more.
Author's Response: It sure was! I'm glad that at least somebody is TeamJacob! Thanks for being patient and thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2014 11:14 am Title: Chapter 19: A Day In The Life
Does Harry need to have a heart to heart with his mom? Yes.
Would Harry feel this way it regardless of who she dated? Probably. He has never had to share her before.
Is any of this Michael's business? HELL TO THE NO.
Michael needs to fuck off and stop being such a selfish dick. Grow the fuck up, get over himself and let Erin be happy, divorce his wife for real instead of just talking about it, and hope that in another number of years that life circumstances will align so that Erin will give him a chance. But not before has plenty of good sex and possibly another baby (if she isn't too old) with Jake.
Author's Response: ROTFL!!!! You are a trip!! I love how you are 100% honest about everything! Yeah, I think Erin and Harry both have things to consider here. Harry needs to understand that it's been a very long time since his mom has had man in her life so she might be way head over hills and devote more time to her boyfriend. Erin needs to understand how hard it is for Harry to adjust to having to share his mom with someone else and try to spend time with Jake and Harry at the same time(although she did try before Michael took him away). It's certainly not the person she's dating that's the root of Harry's problems. I mean just imagine if she were dating Michael? Imagine how weird it would be for Harry to get used to the fact that him Mom and his Uncle or ex-uncle are dating? Or get used to the fact that his Uncle is now his stepdad? Yep, Michael certainly should keep it moving and hope and pray very hard that one day something will happen and make Erin reconsider. Hmm... I thought about another baby this time for Erin and Jake but I'd have to do the math. Although anything is possible. I love your reviews! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: Jul 27, 2014 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 19: A Day In The Life
I feel bad for Harry. It must be strange not having his mother's complete attention anymore. He should tell her how he feels.
Great chapter and thank you for the update. Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: I think we all feel bad for Harry. You're very welcome! And thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2014 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 19: A Day In The Life
I had a feeling Harry didn't feel to comfortable with his mom's relationship I don't blame him Erin is moving a little to fast I understand she's trying to get over Michael or teach him a lesson but at the end of the day she'll never really be truly over him.
Author's Response: It's always natural for kids to feel this way when their parents begin dating again. Erin may be moving a bit too fast. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2014 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 18: Onto You
Ummm I wonder what he's up to as well?
Author's Response: We'll have to find out! Thanks for reading!
Date: Jul 22, 2014 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 18: Onto You
In the wise words of the late and great Tupac Shakur "[Mike] you better back the f@ck up before you get smacked the f@ck up"... Hit Em up! Lol.
Cant wait for more! 😜
Author's Response: Lol!! You have me dying laughing!!! Yep, that's just what Michael needs to do! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jul 22, 2014 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 17: Whisper Words Of Wisdom
Finally was able to catch up. I'm so happy to read that things are going good with Erin and Jacob. She deserves a happy ending with a guy like him.
And a silent moment for Michael for being put in the friendzone. Lol.
In all honesty I think Michael is just being a selfish motard. He just needs to let Erin have her happy moment and butt the eff out.
Cant wait for more girl! :)
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!! Another reader who sees the light!!! We can build up our TeamJacob army!!! Well I was just about to post another chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 09:41 am Title: Chapter 17: Whisper Words Of Wisdom
Just caught up. I'm still 100% TeamJacob. He seems sweet, caring and crazy about Erin. Exactly what she needs, not Michael who is selfish. manipulative and still sleeping with his alledgedly soon-to-be ex-wife. I don't believe a word that comes out of that man's mouth and his POV pisses me off everytime. Marrying her sister so he can be closer to Erin? What the fuck kind of logic is that? Just excuses excuses excuses. I'm surprised her mother was so nice to him, if that was my mom she would have kicked his ass. And let's not mention the fact that Michael KNEW how Erin felt for him before the wedding. She DID tell him, right? God he's so full of shit.......I agree with AppleheadJax, he needs to just eff off.
I hope Erin isn't stupid enough to ditch a good man, Jacob, for Michael's sorry undeserving ass.
Erin should tell Brooke what Michael's been trying to do, that's her sister after all and if Brooke is still sleeping with him I'm sure she'll be PISSED when she finds out.
Author's Response: OMG!!! Your reviews never fail to crack me up!! Trust me, I've been 100 percent TeamJacob since he got in the picture and I'm not changing my mind! You wouldn't believe the pressure i'm under to get Michael and Erin together I really think that if all the people who are TeamMichael were screwed around like Erin was they wouldn't want Michael. Lol! I just didn't think Brooke and Erin's mom would it in her to kick his but so i just decided she'd calmly react. You make a very good point, Erin did tell Michael how she felt before he got married. It's not like she told him right when he was at the alter. Well, we shall see how this story unfolds but I doubt it will turn out in Michael's favor. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2014 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 17: Whisper Words Of Wisdom
New reader, boo! Okay let me be completely honest here. Michael should just eff off. I feel so sorry for Erin. I do NOT want Michael to end up with Erin because I don't like him! He's being ANNOYING.
That new guy is sweet! He's great. Perfect for 'Rin. Please please make her end up with him and not Michael so Michael can feel that same pain she's felt all this time.
Otherwise, I love this story. <3 Please continue!
Author's Response: Welcome!!!Lol!! You think like me! Honestly, if Michael acted like that in real life I would not want to be with him and I would not like him. Of course in the eyes of many readers, Michael can do no wrong but he's certainly done wrong to Erin too many times. If it we're them they wouldn't want to be involved with Mike either. I really want Erin to end up with Jake too. Michael's certainly not my favorite guy in this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2014 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 16: Crazy Little Thing Called Love
I honestly feel that Erin is just trying to get over Michael but deep down she still loves him she's just.trying to teach him a lesson or get back at him so that he could know how it felt. Harry seems to not really care to much for Jake it seems and even though I was upset with Michael for awhile I hope he gets his act together and proves to Erin that he's not playing games with her.
Author's Response: I think everyone hopes he gets his act together! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 14: Baby I Loved You First
I think Michael is getting a taste of his own medicine now now he knows how Erin feels when she had to sit back and watch him with Brooke.
Author's Response: He sure is! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!