Date: Oct 07, 2015 05:35 pm Title: || Chapter Four: Colorful Evening ||
Omg. I'm In Love d84; With This Story. Please Update. And I Know How It Feels To Be Bullied. And How Hard It Is To Stay Clean From Self Harming Although I Never Had Anyone Physically Took A Blade To My Skin And Just Put A New Slit On It.
Until The Next Update Lots Of L.O.V.E.d84;💕💘





Date: Jul 12, 2015 04:05 pm Title: || Chapter Four: Colorful Evening ||
Wow... This chapter is really neat, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. :)
(Thank goodness this is fanfiction and that Michael would've never done something that cruel as a teenager, because from what I know about him, I am sure he was quite nice personality-wise.)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)





Date: Jul 12, 2015 09:36 am Title: || Chapter Four: Colorful Evening ||
Why is Michael so cruel to her? Does he secretly likes her or something? That's the only thing I can think of when a guy torments any girl like that. I feel so bad for her but I really hope she doesn't let those idiots get to her.





Date: Jul 03, 2015 11:26 am Title: || Chapter Three: Tumblr ||
Neat so far... :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too.
(This is how I imagine Hayley to look in the story, of course...)
Keep up your super-neat, very beautiful and phenomenally creative writing... :)





Date: Jul 14, 2014 10:26 am Title: || Chapter Three: Tumblr ||
Wow this was really sad to read just like the previous chapter how can Michael be so cruel and do something like that to her? Then he comments on her post saying something like that? That's really sad. �😔😔😔😔😌😍a86;😒�
Date: Jul 14, 2014 10:18 am Title: || Chapter Three: Tumblr ||
That's fucked up, Michael :(
I'm glad to see you're back to writing this! I hope you're feeling better, sweetie. <3
Date: May 14, 2014 05:45 pm Title: || Prologue: When It Rains ||
Thank you! <33
Date: May 14, 2014 05:42 pm Title: || Prologue: When It Rains ||
I followed you on twitter. You're very pretty, by the way. :)
Author's Response:
Aw thank you , you are too. <3
Date: May 14, 2014 05:23 pm Title: || Prologue: When It Rains ||
LOL....same birthday! I've looked at your bio before and must've missed that. ^_^
Author's Response:
I've changed my entire bio, take a took now lol all my info is there, I deactivated my Facebook btw





Date: Mar 12, 2014 07:19 pm Title: || Prologue: When It Rains ||
actually, butt is an understandment o_O he's downright evil in this XD anyways, again I hope you are continuing the story!
Author's Response:
Thanks :)





Date: Mar 12, 2014 07:18 pm Title: || Chapter Two: A Mouse & Men ||
Oh man.. :/ Michael is such a butt in this! aww, Hayley ;_; I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: Jan 03, 2014 10:36 am Title: || Prologue: When It Rains ||
This is really awesome! Great plot and writing, I love Paramore as well so that makes the story even better. Great job , can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Jan 03, 2014 06:00 am Title: || Chapter Two: A Mouse & Men ||
Michael is fucked up. Poor Hayley, she never did anything wrong.





Date: Jan 02, 2014 08:30 pm Title: || Chapter Two: A Mouse & Men ||
I really like this so far...but I hate Michael in this story, at least so far. That's a very unusual feeling for me. I hope to hell he feels like shit for what he and his friends just did. :(
Date: Dec 31, 2013 01:32 am Title: || Chapter One: Being as An Ocean ||
Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next update.