[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2013 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 65 Fly Away.
This fool Aashard has lost his damn mind talking to Michael like that and he got nerves to step to him too, hell no. Michael needs to show him who the Boss and kick his ass.
Author's Response:
We all know Mike can whup some ass!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2013 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 65 Fly Away.
A whole chapter dedicated to lil ol' me? I'm touched!
Looks like Aadarsh is bringing the cray cray. I knew it! I knew he was too good to be true. Switching to team Michael NOW.
Michael better get ready to kick this fool's ass:
Author's Response:
You're very welcome dear!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2013 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 65 Fly Away.
No the HELL he didn't!!!!
I hope Mike WHOOPS DAT ASS!!!!
I had a feeling he was really a jackass!!
Hey Aadarsh...
Author's Response:
Aggressive much? lol you got me giggling
Date: Jun 25, 2013 11:24 am Title: Chapter 65 Fly Away.
Damn,now why did he have to go there with the weirdo and freak language? Bless his little heart,this child may be about to lose is dome piece all because of his stupidity. Girl will u stop leaving us hanging and get to Aadarsh's strangulation **Smile**
Author's Response:
I am not too sure about a strangulation
Date: Jun 25, 2013 10:49 am Title: Chapter 65 Fly Away.
Oh hell to the FUCK no!!! Aadarsh you son of bitch! How dare you say that to Mike knowing that sensitive topic?! You need to take yo ass licking, shit talking, sliver back gorilla looking ass on somewhere before i go straight hood on yo bitch ass!
*smiles* continue sweetheart
Author's Response:
hahahahaha well I am assuming you're team Michael?
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2013 07:28 am Title: Chapter explain to me...
This converstation Aashard wants to have with Michael is sure to be interesting. I hope if he speaks out of line again Michael checks him this time.
Author's Response:
oh Mike will kick some ass if he has too
Date: Jun 25, 2013 07:08 am Title: Chapter explain to me...
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Hot damn! I'm anxious to see what's gonna happen
Date: Jun 25, 2013 05:08 am Title: Chapter explain to me...
Aashard keeps hollen bout he's an indian man. Atianna better do a little research on indian culture cause I smell trouble. Girl no he ain't gone offer to buy Atianna from Michael or call the man a weirdo to his face, If he does he's gonna get killed. Bring on the man to man chat ;)
Michael may have seen the error of his ways but Atianna needs some time away from both men. As I said before she needs to find her own way.
Author's Response:
I will put that in my thinking cap
Date: Jun 24, 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter explain to me...
Lmao chile this is crazy! What does Aadarsh want with Michael? And he's a lil too passionate. Geez. He can chill out a lil bit if he really wants to win her over. He's not going about it correctly.
Date: Jun 24, 2013 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 63 talk
Yassss for the competition!!!! Make Michael's ass WORK for it chile. Aadarsh is in it to win it.
Author's Response:
Yes he is!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2013 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
Glad that Michael has seen the error of his ways. Now he has to prove that he means what he says. I don't blame Atianna for not trusting him anymore. Good on her for gaining some self respect and making him work for it. She never should have agreed to the crazy conditions of his "arrangment" in the first place. If she had been thinking clearly at the time I doubt she would have. He took advantage of her when she had nowhere to turn and for that he should be ashamed.
As for Michael I do believe he loves her but he lost sight of that amidst his own selfishness, issues and insecurities. It's obvious that he didn't intentionally mean to hurt her. He started out trying to help and then became WAY too controlling the more attached he got. As for the sleeping with Lisa part, he has no excuse. That ho is used and abused and he has no business sticking his penis in her. Atianna should make him get a full panel of STD tests before letting him back into her vagina. Part of me wants her to sleep with Aadarsh just to spite him. Even though she agreed not to get jealous, the whole arrangement was bullshit in the first place so she has every right to be hurt and mad. Time for a revenge fuck.
Aadarsh seems like a real sweetheart BUT he is coming on strong for someone she just met. Either he's crazy about her or just crazy. I have a sneaking suspicion he may not turn out to be as nice as he seems. I hope not because Atianna doesn't deserve to go through any more BS. Either way, time to give Michael a run for his money. And if Aadarsh truly is a nice guy, at this point I think she would be better off with him than Michael.
Great story! I have to admit that the first few chapters didn't really catch my interest but now it sucked me in completely and won't let go! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I am loving this analysis of the story!!! You are a smart one I can tell and I am glad you are enjoying my story
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2013 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 63 talk
Aashard just said he loves Atianna but I swear he's only known her for three days that's really fast. He judged Michael really harshly for asking Atianna to be his mistress when she agreed to do it. Michael didn't force her into it and now she's all confused about what she wants, I can't. Girlfriend need to figure something out but I jump in the story and shake her like a British nanny.
Author's Response:
hahaha I love political incorrect comments!!!
Date: Jun 24, 2013 10:31 am Title: Chapter 63 talk
Aw now don't I feel special. Thank u dear. Lol!!!
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Can't wait for this talk. But in the mean time we can be rest assured that Aashard's gonna be working whatever magic he can to pull her over to his side. Mike's got his work cut out for him on this one. My...my how the tables have turned.
Author's Response:
Shit's about to get real
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2013 09:58 am Title: Chapter 63 talk
Man... my emotions are ALL over the place... these two... sheeesh!!! LOL!! Let the battle between the males begin!
Author's Response:
Testosterone at it's finest
Date: Jun 24, 2013 05:39 am Title: Chapter 62 decisions decisions
Oh......................................Shit!
That's all I gotta say
Author's Response:
I must've done a good job