




Date: Jun 03, 2013 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 14 Why do you care?
She is un-fucking-believable
Author's Response:
I fit that review in the story
Date: Jun 03, 2013 07:40 am Title: Chapter 13 Out tonight
i think Michael wiil be angry
Author's Response:
oooo girl you have no idea!!!
Date: Jun 02, 2013 06:33 am Title: Chapter 12 the mask is gone
This girl is too much and Michael what are you getting yourself into?
Author's Response:
We will sure found out!!!
Date: Jun 02, 2013 03:45 am Title: Chapter 12 the mask is gone
ooops he i think this won't be a good surprise for her and for him
Author's Response:
Keep reading and you will find out
Date: Jun 01, 2013 09:39 am Title: Chapter 11 Live Fast and Die Young
awww i love this story realy
Author's Response:
Thanks honey! That means a lot to me





Date: Jun 01, 2013 02:02 am Title: Chapter 10 Beauty
She really does need to slow down but i can see exactly why she's living in the fast lane. Hell i woul too if i went through what she went through
Author's Response:
Really girl!! Thanks for the rating and her craziness has just started



Date: May 31, 2013 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
Totally love it, please continue.
Author's Response:
Oh no worried baby, this story is just flowing out if me lol





Date: May 31, 2013 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think they had a heartfelt conversation, that's just me. great chapter; my new favorite story.
Author's Response:
awww thanks love...I wanted to make things steamy, but I don't think Michael's ready for her like that
Date: May 31, 2013 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 6 a past forgotten
this chapter is so sweet
and she has a similiar figure to mine
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it sweetheart!





Date: May 31, 2013 11:22 am Title: Chapter 5 She opened the door...
I'm a new reader and i am in love with this story she is such a bad ass i love it..it's about time somebody made a story about a chick who wasn't stick thin and nice as hell. Thank you
Author's Response:
My thoughts exactly, I got tired of waiting so I did it myself haha thanks





Date: May 31, 2013 09:30 am Title: Chapter 2 Not what I expected...
I love how Atianna's personality is. Great chapter <3
Author's Response:
Thanks sweet pea
Date: May 31, 2013 06:41 am Title: Chapter 5 She opened the door...
o wow i realy like this sotry
I think they could play some game and they could have sex but then Michael will fight for her and marry her and the end after some big drama
Author's Response:
ok doll, I will take that under consideration
Date: May 30, 2013 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
I say a mixture of both. And did you change her name? I thought it was something else at first.
Author's Response:
yeah I did, Atianna sounded more melodic I guess





Date: May 30, 2013 05:23 am Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
love the first chapter so far :)
Author's Response:
Thanks doll face!!!!
Date: May 30, 2013 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1 who is she?
Interesting.. Keep going! She's pretty and seems like Michael wouldn't mind gettin a piece of that lol. Continue girl. :)
Author's Response:
thanks darling..I am determined to write a fanfic that shows a real woman, with a real body and not make this a fairy tale