Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 25

Puh! A lot going on in this chapter!

What these two Princes are planning is just horrible, unbelievable! I'm so sad for Jelly and Michael! :'( I pray they'll get out of the hell waiting for them burned, but strong and unbroken!

Michael loves Jelly and Jelly loves him! Of course, he won't just let her go! His actions have shown the thought to be without his Jelly makes him go crazy!

WOW at the sex the two of them are having! Can I switch places with Jelly? LOL I'd love it! Jelly of course has never read the agreement she signed as it was never her intention lo sign it! She wanted to hurt him to let her go! She didn't read that he likes it rough with a little S & M attached! LOL Didn't seem to bother Jelly much though!

She had noble intentions of leaving him to save them harm, but their connection is undeniable! If Jelly indeed will find out that she's pregnant that senseless attempt to pretend they don't love each other is outta the window anyway!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review.

The two Prince plans is indeed too horrible if they are able to succeed. Michael and Jelly - they do love each other and I doubt if he will ever let go of her.  Now the sex part...clearing my throat ( giving elevator looks - i'm reading the chapter - damn it's not there - which part...jk...lmao!) Of couse you can be Jelly. A lot of us wants to switch places with her in this chapter.  Jelly should have thoroughly read what she have signed.  I think she likes it the same way he likes it- lmao!

Jelly really wanted to leave because she was scared.  But how can she.  Their connection is undeniable...lmao! Michael loves to have a child of his own.  That is his biggest dream.

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 09:07 am Title: Chapter 25

Well the happiness sure didn't last long. Jelly fails to realize that as long as Michael loves her and Prince knows about it then she is in danger. And this nasty plot he has going on with this other Prince is even more horrible than what he planned to do Ani back in the day. That's a lot of hatered he has for Michael to the point of being extreme. 

As for Jelly's coworker Rachel girlfriend is green with envy and jealously. That was some pretty fucked up shit she said to Jelly not to mention way out of line. She just keeps pushing the line with her and its going to back fire on her. I don't think she took Michael's warning seriously enough and when he goes postal on her ass its not going to be pretty.

All the time while I was reading this story I kept thinking poor Jelly but I feel sorry Michael now too. It seems that he cannot be with the woman he loves without acts of violence and other people butting in to ruin everything for him. After all the shit he went through with Ani you would think God was giving him a second chance with Jelly but it seems as he must suffer more before he gets complete happiness. 

How do you plan for Michael and Jelly to come sane in the end of this story with the threatening plot made by Prince and Prince Al bin Latal? 

Author's Response:

Prince is ready to go extremes with his plot for revenge. Horrible - really horrible plans.  Michael's love is indeed 'the choking kind'.  It happened to Ani.  I hope it will not happen again to Jelly. 

Rachel is indeed way out of line because of her jealousy.  I'm wondering why Jelly wouldn't slap her face at least once.  I just hope when the time comes Michael will be able to protect from everyone that would like to hurt her. 

I feel sorry for Michael as well.  Now to be truthful I haven't plan -write anything yet how they or particularly Jelly come out of this story as a sane person in the end. 

Thanks for the review and read. 

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2013 05:44 am Title: Chapter 25

Jelly is horrible at explaining things! I dnt blame Michael, hell I knew wat was goin on n she had me confused , then she signed the document. Lol Jelly u didn't word it good enough baby. Update, update, update.

Author's Response:

Yes indeed her explanation made me confuse.  Can't blame Michael either. Confusion - lmao! ...Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: April Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2013 09:41 am Title: Chapter 24

I like it AJ :)! I like the way you are joining the books. Keep it coming!

Author's Response:

Thanks Leiza...For the read and the review...i missed your story...hope when you get the time you can update.  Thanks for the boost.

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2013 06:01 am Title: Chapter 24

Its gettin better and better!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review...lol i'm betterly glad.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2013 05:05 am Title: Chapter 23

omg omg they are together now oh and i can see Michael beeing crazy protecting his Jelly hehehehhhee

Author's Response:

hehehe...finally they are together...for how long...yes he is crazy in protecting Jelly...how he can really protect her from prince...hehehe

Reviewer: Dri Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2013 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 22

Prince on stage will only make the story more interesting .... If Prince seem more courteous than a sex addict probably he's going to get the attention of Jelly and Mike will freak out!
I still can not believe that MJ loves Jelly to the point of to get married ... Looks like Jelly is a trophy .... looks like she is an object that he wants to win.
If Jelly make love to MJ now I bet he will lose interest and will look for another FISH!


Thank you!

Author's Response:

Prince can do a lot as a character.  I agree if he is more courteous than Michael.  He would definitely be a competition and perhaps get the attention of Jelly. About  Jelly as a trophy...seems like it...hmm...that's really interesting...perhaps yes, perhaps not...it all depends on Mike.  He seems to have really honourable intentions for now with her.

Thanks for the review and keep reading.