Date: May 11, 2013 06:06 am Title: Chapter 13
I dnt think i cud do it, like Mikey is so special to me that I wud catch feelings real quick! Lol, Good Luck Jelly! Plz update again ..I'm kinda hooked on dis story!
Author's Response:
Me as well - I don't think I could just sign a CSACA agreement like that. I mean it's Michael!... just like you and Jelly I would feel something more than lust for him- love perhaps...lmao....thanks for being hooked on this story! I hope you keep reading and reviewing throughtout all my good and not so good typo error filled future chapters...lmao!
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 05:49 am Title: Chapter 13
Michael wants to fuck her badly...like really bad and she wants it too but i know she doesn't want to be another fuck to him...she must want to be his one and only fuck
Author's Response:
lol...too many f---! words...lmao!...yes Michael dows want to fuck her badly and yes she wants to be his one and only f---!...lmao...thanks for the read and review.
Date: May 11, 2013 04:14 am Title: Chapter 13
wow she's lucky but is she? naybe she want a relatioship with him hmmm....
Author's Response:
Hell yeah! she is one lucky girl if she is anything like AMANDA. Getting an offer like that from Michael. WOW! but nope I think she wants him on her own terms....thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2013 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
Lol! Okay I like this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks you...like your review...still waiting for your story update...i missed Battered Roses!
Date: May 10, 2013 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 12
Update soon, I wud love to c how long jelly can hold.
Author's Response: lol...me too...I wanted to read what Michael will do since Jelly seems to be unmoved by his looks....lmao!
Date: May 09, 2013 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
Update soon plz!
Author's Response:
writing like right now!...thanks for reading and putting a review...that gives me an encouragement to continue!...lol
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2013 10:40 am Title: Chapter 11
This is different and interesting lol continue please :) I like where this is going
Author's Response:
Thanks April!...thanks for the read and always reviewing...means a lot..ill try to stick to the plot and make it as interesting as I can...lmao!
Date: May 09, 2013 08:16 am Title: Chapter 11
aawwww heheehehe i wonder if she say yes to him
Author's Response:
hehehe...me too...lmao! (lets see according to Jelly --- jk)...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: May 08, 2013 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
Update soon ...like now, haha!
Author's Response: lmao...(there you go! just kidding)
Date: May 08, 2013 04:18 am Title: Chapter 9
hahahahaaomg this is so funny
Author's Response:
hehehehe...thanks!...lmao
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2013 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
I read every chapter & enjoyed everyone of them! So entertaing & hilarious! I like Michael & Jelly together! #Team Michael & Jelly! Yay! :D & he likes her 4 herself & not about her weight. It's about the real beauty within & I'm glad you wrote this story & your Laundry girl & juice boy I love that couple to she maybe geeky but Mike sure loves her 4 her. That's what I like about your stories u bring out the inner beauty in the girl it's about victoria secret models or anything like that ur using normal & nateral beauty girl's with brains! Thanks 4 putting up here like this. This proves that it's not all just for the looks sexy can be in many forms to it's just the way how u carry yourself. & it shows that men can like females 4 there inner beauty! & btw thanks for mentioning Bad Cop! I'm glad you really enjoy that story it means so much to me! Your one of my favorite authors on here & I'm just so happy that you apprecaite my stories & accepts any errors i make in my chapters your awesome! <3 & what the heck Mike's gonna do about Jelly being virgin? LOOL surprise surprise! To him. Continue soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and enjoying each chapter...that means a lot to me...i almost gave up writing this story but i cant seem to let it go. Glad to make you smile and laff. True Michael's attraction to Jelly in this story is beyond surface beauty and I also like he does not mind about her weight or what she eats. I wrote this story in such a way that the hero character of Michael is physically perfect and the heroine was not. Same goes with the Ani character. What makes the heroine attractive to the hero of the story are her normal smart imperfections. Agree being sexy and attractive for me personally does not mean you have to be in a certain look, form or weight it can be in many forms. I find it sexy and attractive that the hero prefers someone beyond the physical beauty. Thanks for liking that in my stories...lmao!...and for sharing your thoughts and submitting REVIEWS!...that means a lot to me.
I will write this because this comes from my heart: Your story 'The Bad Cop' and 'Stuck' will allways be special to me. Geezus! months ago I never envision myself writing an mjfiction until I stumbled on this page and read your story 'STUCK' (it's actually you're fault -just kidding- im now addicted to this site)!
Now Jelly being Virgin - lmao!...i have no idea yet what to WRITE about that and the worst part is Michael is also stuck with me for the meantime. Holy craft what am I gonna do about this! (truthfully im now 'STUCK' and laughing so hard right now...cray crazy me!)
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2013 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Someone had to deflower the virgin why not you Michael? Talk about tightness lol Now you don't have to worry about fucking a chich that ain't got no walls
Author's Response:
lol...deflower the virgin (thumbs up!)...lmao....i love your review (Now you don't have to worry about fucking a chich that ain't got no walls)- this made me laugh!- crazy me!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2013 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Uh huh! I don't like that at all...Michael jealousy don't look good on you honey
Author's Response:
yes..Michael was jealous but he was a bit harsh to Jelly ...the fact that he gave her specific instructions...yeah it dont look good...thanks for the review as always!
Date: May 07, 2013 03:52 am Title: Chapter 8
awww poor girl
Author's Response: agree....Michael made her cry..cmao
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2013 05:08 am Title: Chapter 7
LMAO! He denied that bitch and Jelly you should've known what you were getting yourself into when you sat on his lap
Author's Response: Thanks....yes Michael denied Amanda...lol...yeah Jelly should have known better...agree!
Author's Response: Thanks....yes Michael denied Amanda...lol...yeah Jelly should have known better...agree!