[Report This]Date: May 15, 2013 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! The slap scared me! I love this already!
Author's Response:
hehehe...slap thing...epic...thanks for liking this story...ill be updating soon...please continue to read and review as much as you can...thanks again.
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 07:09 am Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhh no! O.o ummm Jelly is on for it!
Author's Response:
Thanks april. Looks like Jelly is gonna be within Michaels radar again...lol
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2013 06:52 am Title: Chapter 16
Thank god for nonfunctional pen! Although the freedom was short lived atleast Jelly will still be able to demand that the relationship will have work on her terms. But it seems that she went from working with jealous bitchy Amanda to working with jealous ex-girlfriend Rachel. But atleast she'll be away from John's rape ploting ass. Can't wait to see what other crazy plots Michael plans to get Jelly in bed. And I want to know how Joseph feels about Michael and Jelly.
Author's Response:
Hahahaha-non functioning pen...it did saved her day!. Correct time for her to hold her ground and tell her terms. Rachel indeed will complicate things. Now with John i might write-him a chance to rape her-- crazy me! Now Joseph learned his lesson in the past. He liked Jelly from the start so I'm betting Jelly won't have a hard time when it comes to him.
Date: May 14, 2013 03:39 am Title: Chapter 16
DA HELL ?? How u juss gne say she coming to New York. Wat happened to asking like a normal person! ... sigh ... I can't work like this. Haha update very soon!
Author's Response:
lmao!...there is what we call proper transition period!...just as Jelly said Michael is the Boss, and the Boss is always right, no matter how stupid it is sometimes...lol! thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 10:10 am Title: Chapter 15
I love Anita Baker! I'm actually listening to Sweet Love right now, lol!
Michael, Michael, Michael smh. How he gonna sing that song to her and then do a complete 360 and blackmail her? Here's a clue Michael: most women don't want to be the mistress they wanna be the wife. How about asking Jelly on date, sending her some flowers, buying her jewelry, taking her on a trips, having an actually conversation with about her interest, you know getting to know her instead of thinking with your dick? If what he calls offering her a no strings attached relationship being nice then all the money and good looks is not gonna help him win her heart. Seriously if I was Jelly I would stab him with that pen. He's not thinking about her feelings at all or her office image and he's not even trying to either.
But I know that he's falling for her he just doesn't know yet. It's that strange feeling he has and doesn't quit understand yet. I'm just hope that when does realize that he's in love with that it won't be the destructive type of love.
Author's Response:
I love her too...since the time my mom told me she names me after her - Anita - that's my first name...lmao...her song 'Sweet love' is one of my favorites though i was not born in her decade...the moment I heard of her song...i fell in love with her voice...no offence her and michaels music are the best for me...that's why I made the michael character her sing Ms. Anita Bakers song...in real life i wouls have had love to hear Michael sing that song for real...lol!
Yes 360 degrees and a bit of blackmail....hope michael take your clues (seriously the guy has relationship issues!)...lmao! hmmm Jelly stabbing him with the pen...i would have done the same...lmao! Yes he is such an Ass-ole! he will destroy her office image...lmao!
No guy would sing Anita Baker's song 'Sweet Love' to a woman not unless there is somefeelings involve...let me see if I could later do-write something about that in the future chapters...i guess michael is confused inside.
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 07:23 am Title: Chapter 15
When I read the plot of the story it interested me...
I know both sides of the coin. I've been thin and after my pregnancy and depression I gained weight.
I know what it is to suffer for being fat. I know all the humiliations and deprivations and also know what's being in love with a guy and he is ashamed of you because you are chubby. I liked a guy long years ago. He liked me but he was ashamed to admit. In the presence of friends he didnt talk to me but when he was alone with me he was caring and gentle. I didnt want to date someone who was ashamed of me. I never saw him anymore ...
Currently I'm married and have a daughter and she's 21 years old. My husband is loving,adorable and I know he loves me very much but I also know that being fat it bothers him. My husband would ever say that to me but I just know ... A woman knows her man.
I thought this story would be about this subject ... It would be interesting but I'm loving your story!I really do like your story!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for being interested in my story...thanks for sharing your experience...there are many guys out there that likes someone but is afraid to do something about it because of peer pressure of societies definition of what is attractive and is beautiful...i'd say "if a girl is 'fat' or has weight issues she is still beautiful it is society which is ugly"...it is that guys lost not yours...i wouldnt also date someone who would be ahamed to be seen with me... I admit I was supposed to write this story with that kind of plot but I know in my heart that if the real Michael ever loves a woman he sees and loves that person beyond beyond skin or physical attributes beyond what his eyes could see...that's why he reminds me of the story the little prince...That's also the reason why wrote the michael character here this way...i wrote it the opposite way to what usually happens in real life but I believe somewhere out there there are those who are very lucky to find a guy that is like michael who loves a person beyond what he sees...i still believe it is possible for a guy to love a girl beyond physical attributes...(i still have hope in men in general..crossing my fingers..lmao!)...God Bless you and your family...say hi to your daughter and to your husband...you are a very lucky woman to have married a man like that...loving adorable...true there are husbands that wouldnt say hurtful words to their wife but like what you said ...A woman knows her man...wish you and your family all the best!
Date: May 13, 2013 04:19 am Title: Chapter 15
I very much enjoyed this, its one of my favorites of urz, plz update VERY soon lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for enjoying this...i will update pretty soon...thanks!
Date: May 13, 2013 04:19 am Title: Chapter 15
omg ad you tell me that he is a mob boss too
Author's Response:
mob boss? (elevator looks- jk!)...i think he is as well...jelly is one lucky girl!...lmao!
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2013 03:57 am Title: Chapter 15
Okay I laughed at the last part.... That is so random lol. Serious moment gone funny lol.
Author's Response: Nice to know I made you laugh...trying to mix 'drama n humor' in one chapter...lol...thanks
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2013 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
I started reading your story today. Read the first and second chapter ... It's good! Very good!
Please continue! It's going very well ...
But I would like to see more about this conflict of a chubby woman and a handsome man who has beautiful women under his feet. Would Mike resist?Just some drama...
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for aprreaciating the chapters...trying to wheel back the chapters to the story plot and conflict of the 'chubby woman' - 'handsome man' who has beautiful women under his fett....lmao!...will try to do more of that on the next chapters...nice idea for the drama---thanks appreciate it!
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[Report This]Date: May 12, 2013 09:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Somethings gonna happen i can feel it in my bones
Author's Response: hehehe...me too!...thanks for the review and all the reads!
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2013 08:19 am Title: Chapter 14
Okay I'd he takes the V he is going to fall in love lol. Seriously....
Author's Response:
(eyes rolling...looking ledt and right- lmao! jk!) him taking the V...geezus we are just in chapter (?)...maybe in chapter (?)...lmao! him falling in love!...nah! doubting it more of a case of lust in first sight!...lmao...thanks for the review!
Date: May 12, 2013 06:28 am Title: Chapter 14
I think Jelly should tell him that if they do this she'll catch feelings, I mean look at Mikey already dne bought her cars n ish. Seems like he caught feelings already!
Author's Response:
hehehe...I believe Jelly already has feelings...she's just afraid to openly admit it...Michael and his cars wow! if i were jelly i would take a car pick..lmao...thanks for reviewing...i think michael does have some feelings...lust or love cant tell yet...hehehe
Date: May 12, 2013 04:05 am Title: Chapter 14
omg i want her to say yes
Author's Response:
me too....but then....lmao! will see still writing the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2013 09:44 am Title: Chapter 13
The attraction between Michael and Jelly is hot! But he's such an asshole that I will be so disappointed if she gives into his terms just because of their attraction. I strongly believe that she should get him on her terms. Either he commits to a relationship with her and give the love she wants or he should take his no strings attached ass some where else.
Now I know that Amanda doesn't like Jelly but she knows that John is going to try and rape Jelly and that shit ain't right. Between John and Amanda they have no morals. One is a jealous bitch and the other is an obsessed rapist. There's a special place in hell for these two.
I love your stories but I wish Michael wasn't a complete selfish horny jackass in all of them. It's like he's in capable of truely loving a woman.
Sorry for the rant! Keep writing, posting and I'll keep reading!
Author's Response:
True the attraction between Michael and Jelly is there and thank you for thinking that it was HOT...lmao! TRUE as well - he's such an asshole.
I think Jelly is not gonna easily give into his terms as well just because of uncontrolled lust. I strongly agree that she should get him on her terms but Michaels character in this story is not really into commitment or long term relationships. On one of the chapters he told Jelly that his relationships are short. I hope in the futre chapters I would be able to explain why he is like that.
I'm a bit afraid of John's plans about raping Jelly. Amanda should have warned her even if she is not certain about it. If I heard something like that in real life. Friend or no friend I will not keep silent about it.
I reviewed my Michael characters and the way I wrote and portrayed them. OMG! the pattern is true on all my stories - the Michael characters I create are all selfish horny jackass almost not capable of truely loving a woman. - I only realized the pattern when you pointed it out. Geez! Thanks for that!
I love the rant! I get more creative because of that.. thank you for STILL READING and posting your reviews!