[Report This]Date: May 21, 2013 06:11 am Title: Chapter 20
It certainly is a case of obsession, but of the best obsession you could think of! He LOVES her! He doesn't know it yet, but he does! He also is well aware that Jelly wants him just the same! He merely will make her realize! He doesn't do anything against her will! What he doesn't realize tho is Jelly's insecurity! She doesn't want to be a one-night-stand and she doesn't wanna be his sex toy! She wants all of him, yet she thinks she's not worthy enough, not pretty enough, because she ain't no size zero, while Michael thinks she's the most beautiful woman under the sun! How beautiful! Jelly, open up your eyes! He loves you and you love him! All this nonsense in between is his desperation speaking! He wants to make you his! Please, continue...like NOW! I can't wait to see, what will happen! He will drive her crazy, DIE with desire and pleasure! Yes, he's dangerous, Jelly, but you LOVE it!
Author's Response:
Best obsession i can think of - 100% agree...it is Michael (lmao! super luv ur review). Thank you so much for reading this. I hope he realizes soon that he did love her. I think both of them does like/love/lust one another. Next chapter still in the making! stay tuned.
Date: May 21, 2013 05:47 am Title: Chapter 20
hahhahahaa that was smooth Michael hahahhahaa love it
Author's Response:
hihihi...he was smooth but still his mood swings sucks...thanks luv it too.
Date: May 19, 2013 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 19
I like how smooooth Mikey was wen they was alone 2getha. Plz dnt take a long time to update!
Author's Response:
he is smooth...i think i'm liking my michael character now...he still needs to try more...lmao!...more chapters to come soon!
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2013 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
Hahaha! I LOVED the email lol. Very classy jelly ;). Keep it going AJ!
Author's Response:
thanks for loving the email...girl done that kind of email before at work...i'm telling u that is some serious B! slapping...(lmao!)
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2013 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your Michael character is a deranged, bipolar asshole! I'm glad Jelly hasn't given in. I hope he doesn't decide to rape her. Wouldn't put anything past him at this point!
P.S. I'm still upset at the way that your last story ended. It was brilliant how you tied them together but that was probably the saddest ending I have ever read on this site. I hope this story has a happier ending and that Michael doesn't destroy Jelly like he destroyed Ani.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing this story. True Michael's character is so bipolar. Geez! Michael raping Jelly...I hope not! my got!
Im so sorry....I didn't mean to make you or most of my readers upset or sad with the ending of 'Beauty in a Beast' (cmao!). I do apologize if instead of making you all smile and laugh I added more sadness in latter part of that story.
It was indeed a very sad ending. That story was very personal for me. Like you that story made me laugh, cry, and emotional as I wrote it. It pained me to write the sad ending part. When I wrote the first chapter for this story that's when I got the idea to make this in a way sort of Book II. Thank you for thinking it was brilliant the way I tied this story to that one (i am deeply honored).
BTW: I apologize to you and to all who have read the last few chapters of 'Beauty in a Beast': I had tons of typo, spelling and grammar errors in that story especially on the last few chapters. I also have too much sad narrative moments in the end and less dialogue.
With this story I hope I can better improve my writing and at least make the ending for this story a bit happier than the previous one...lmao!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2013 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 18
Is jelly going to do something!? And I see that Mike is wanting her just that freaking bad lol.
Author's Response:
lmao! not sure yet what to write and what Jelly would do...true Micke wants her freaking bad...he is bad!...lmao!
Date: May 18, 2013 10:53 am Title: Chapter 18
You trapped there for LIFE!
Author's Response:
oh no!...poor jelly...hope she's not gonna be trapped for good!...thanks for the read and review.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2013 01:28 am Title: Chapter 18
Whoa! Once again Michael is doing a complete 360. First he's concerned with people think and now he's not. He's killing me with these hot and cold feelings towards Jelly. Destroying her is not going to make sign that contract he needs to stop already. Her old habits are coming back to hunt her because of him and she's so stressed because of him.
I have a song that I think of when I read this story and think of Michael, The Chokin' Kind by Joss Stone.
Author's Response:
Michael again did a 360. He surprised as well. I thought all along he doesnt want others to know in case they will have a relationship together. When he felt Jelly was going away from him that's when he does and about face and shows his feelings...can't even get my michael- character right....lmao!
Wow! I listened to the music and this lines I think are fitting to this sotry: 'Find what you want boy. Keep it, treat it sweet and kind, oh yeah. Oh, let it breathe. Don't go makin'. It the choking kind'...wow!
Liking the song. To be truthful I haven't listened to any of Joss Stone song. First time to listen to her music and for me it's so surreal. OMG!
Date: May 17, 2013 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
Seems like Michael is doin everything to get rid of her n not keep her! He's doin things wrong wit her, he needs to understand she's not like the rest! Somebody help this man, haha. Update sooner this time plz!
Author's Response:
True he is doing it all wrong. I actually scheduled him a visit to Dr Phil. She is indeed not like the rest. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh course I am still into it girl! Keep it going lol. Michael needs to give up. Jelly is stubborn lol
Author's Response:
lmao!...still writing the next chapter...thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2013 09:21 am Title: Chapter 17
It's nice to know that Joseph approves of the woman that Michael wants this time around. But Michael is still an jackass for denying Jelly a real relationship. He shouldn't care what everyone in they office will think about her weight, fuck them. What he should worry about is that they respect her and keep out their personal business. I can't believe that he would think that if people don't know about them would shit easier for Jelly. Hiding it would only make things worse and fuck with Jelly's feelings and he's already doing that. He's such a selfish jackass and it seems as if he still hasn't learned from all the mistakes he made with Ani. I actually feel sorry for Jelly especially if she has to go through all the heartache, pain, abuse, and humiliation just because Michael refuses to change. Seriously he should just leave her alone like Joseph said if all he wants is a fuck. Just like Jelly I have a bad feeling New York.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. It is highly motivating.
Yes Joseph does approve of Jelly. Michael is indeed a bit jackass. I guess he never learned from the past. I cannot understand why he wants to hide his relationship with Jelly where in fact he is the Boss. Right to the point when you said he shouldnt care less what other people think. You are right he is such a selfish jackass. I hope I could write Jellys New York experience as a mixture of all things including humor...ill update soon. Keep reading.
Date: May 16, 2013 08:23 am Title: Chapter 17
Update soon plz!
Author's Response:
Yes soon. Thanks you for being such a constant reader and for taking time to leave a review. It means a lot - Motivating. THANK YOU.
Date: May 16, 2013 04:29 am Title: Chapter 17
omg poor Jelly i hope she will win at the end
Author's Response:
Jelly winning on her terms would be a triumph but Michael also wanted to win on his own terms. Thanks fro still reading and leaving a review. This means a lot to me.
Date: May 15, 2013 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
Update now plz, :-) .. NNNNOOOOOWWWWWW! Haha.
Author's Response:
Thanks for still reading this. Another chapter is posted.
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2013 06:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Yep, men NEVER change.
Love, continue please. I can relate to Jelly's pain (With not being skinny enough).
Author's Response:
Yes...they neve will change! (lmao!)
Thank you so much for reading this story. I will love to continue with this. I can relate to her as well. That's why I am writing this story. I will posting a new chapter soon!