[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2013 03:51 am Title: Chapter 8
What the HELL Jackson?! This is how you try to keep a woman? By holding her hostage?! Enya does NOT deserve this treatment. If he treated her like he treats Bria, she'd fall in love. God, men can be so STUPID sometimes!!! He's pissing me off SOOOO bad right now!
Sunni: Come here Mike, let me holla at you for a second...
Mike: HELL NO!
Sunni: WHAT?! Muthafucka, I said COME HERE!! *speeds up steam roller*
Mike: AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
My girl Enya betta fight back somehow... He can't tame the pussy if she won't let him!
GET BACK YOU BEAST!!!
Okay... I'm done now.
lmfao!!
ANNIE!! Keep up the good work!!
Sunni*
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAH! Those gif made my day! Indeed Michael is a real douche and there is no way Enya will fall in love with him now! I love your review girl, they are so funny! Love ya Sunn! New chapter online ;)
Date: Apr 09, 2013 03:18 am Title: Chapter 8
Continue please
Author's Response:
I will :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2013 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh. My. God. This story is addicting! I hope you will continue soon :) oh and I wonder, would be there a flashback about Bria's mother? I would love to know who she really was. I have this imagination myself, Michael got Bria's mother with the same thing he sis with Enya? Yeesh, Just my imagination...
Author's Response:
Thank youuuu :) I'll try to update soon, promise. I was thinking about a way to talk about Bria's mother and I found one! Thanks ;-)
Date: Apr 07, 2013 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
gosh why girl he can be good for you
they has to talk about their lifes maybe she will change what she thinks about him at he has to be nicer for her
Author's Response:
Yes, Enya needs to talk about her past and Michael too :/
Date: Apr 07, 2013 09:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Rly Mike rly? Haha u said he mad cuz she didn't resist more. Update very soon plz!
Author's Response:
HAHAH! Bipolar much Mickey? I'll try tu update soon :)
Date: Apr 07, 2013 04:51 am Title: Chapter 8
More story
Author's Response:
I'll be back soon :)
Date: Apr 06, 2013 03:48 am Title: Chapter 7
Update NOW plz, lol.
Author's Response:
Oh my, my new readers are demanding LOL. I'll try to update ASAP but I'm writing a chapter for my other story now. Stay tuned :)
Date: Apr 06, 2013 12:56 am Title: Chapter 7
oh shit,continue
Author's Response:
I will ;)
Date: Apr 05, 2013 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
Dear Michael Jackson, father of Bria, and harasser of Enya:
Love,
Rhythm Child.
Dear Enya, teacher to bria and victim of Michael's madnes slash sexiness:
At some point, you gott be like,
Love,
RhythmCHild.
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAAAH! I laughed so hard LMAOO! Yup, Enya better ruuuun like Forrest Gump.
Oh my, I love you RhythmChild <33
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2013 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
This story is really good & im enjoying this & loving how bad Michael is to. Lol i just hope he don't hurt Enya. But he gotta be careful since he does have a daughter. Bria is so cute! Lol can't wait 4 more girly!
Author's Response:
Than you 😰!! Yup he has to act like a regular guy when Bria is around. We don't want her to have doubts. I'll try to update soon!
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2013 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aawww!! Bria is such a cutie!! LOL! I love this story...
Author's Response:
Yes she issss! Thank you
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2013 10:02 am Title: Prologue
I F&×$ ing LOVE THIS STORY! Bad boy michael is my favorite to read.
Author's Response:
Thank youuu ;)
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2013 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Another story for me to get hooked on... Really?!
Author's Response:
Oops...
:D (love the picture dadjnslferzt)
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2013 05:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Michael...
I thinkk you are.
I think he is, Annie. And I think I'm about to whoop his ass for what he's doing to Enya. I'm about to seriously take off my shoes and put on some boxing gloves and have him duke it out with me in the ring. THis mothafucka's crazy! I can't even....like this is some Fatal Attraction shit right here, and he didn't even get the nookie yet!!!
SMDH lmfaoooo can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
THIS GIF...
This comment....
I dies so many times... HAHAHA! That's why I love you. I'll try to update soon ;)
Date: Apr 04, 2013 03:52 am Title: Chapter 6
oh my maybe she has to tell him her past
Author's Response:
At some point she will have to :S. Thank you for the constant review Karoll! It means a lot for me
