Date: Jan 07, 2014 01:37 pm Title: Introduction
Cool story sweetheart. Ooh the suspense.. Lol
Author's Response: hahah thanks happy you're enjoying it:]
Date: Jan 07, 2014 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 43: Fun
Wow!! Man oh man, what is he gonna do?? If he was really crazy and smart, he'd kill all 3 of them. Lol they're all his victims and have potential to put his ass underneath the jail. This is madness and I love it!! Please update soon. I hope Michael doesn't get himself caught.
Author's Response: haha lets see what michael is up to hah thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jan 07, 2014 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 43: Fun
Now what's his crazy ass going to do? I fear for all three of them.
Author's Response: and you should. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2013 07:20 am Title: Chapter 42: Mr. Smith
put. him. in. jail. now.
now.
before i jump in the story and do it myself.
Author's Response: Hahahahahah I adore you. That really had me laughing :] thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2013 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 42: Mr. Smith
omg michael killed mr.smith :o i wonder whats gonna happen next , i have a feeling his wife sam gonna eventually find out O_O dont know how but soon , thats not gonna be good , cant wait for more x-x
Author's Response: I know poor Sammy, here she is thinking her husband is so great and she has no idea what he does in his spare time. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2013 10:18 am Title: Chapter 42: Mr. Smith
YAAS My original guess of Mr Smith was right :D
XD
Lol but omg Michael is off his head, wouldnt Mr Smith being murdered be too much of a coincidence with Ashley's rape being investigated? 0_0 We will see lol... Michael really does need help and I feel crazy to admit I can't help but feel quite sorry for him. D;
Excellent chapter, you did well in writing a murder scene, bravo! :))
Much LOVE , <33
Author's Response: Hahaha gotta love captain eo. haha you'll just have to keep reading to find out;] thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 26, 2013 09:48 am Title: Chapter 42: Mr. Smith
Welp, Michael might as well kiss his ass goodbye. He's going to jail for rape AND murder. Geesh.
Author's Response: hahah def not a smart move on Michaels part. thanks so much for reading and revieiwng
Date: Dec 26, 2013 09:36 am Title: Chapter 42: Mr. Smith
Powerful powerful stuff! Michael is on a rampage! While I don't agree with him for murdering Mr. Smith, he is definitely unwell. Hell that bullet should've had Ashley's name on it. I wonder what he's gonna do now. Funny how he can readily admit that he's crazy as hell. I hope he can plead insanity if/when he goes to jail and get a lesser charge. Lol
Author's Response: hahah Mr.Smith really didn't deserve it but Michaels taking no prisoners. He knows hes unwell, the thing is he has always tried to prove to his boss that he was such a good person and since he was going to kill him he revealed his true self. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 25, 2013 09:37 am Title: Introduction
I think it's mr. Smith. It's gotta be!!!
Author's Response: you'll have to wait and see thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2013 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 41: Interrogation
OMG I wonder who Michael going after I got a feelin it's Ashley. Great chapter I'm anxious to see what happens next.
Author's Response: haha I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter:] thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 19, 2013 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 41: Interrogation
Update !!!!! OMGG
Author's Response: haha About to get hit with an update :] stay tooned! thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Dec 19, 2013 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 41: Interrogation
Damn.. That detective is definitely after him. I don't wanna see him go to jail, but man this is crazy. Now he's got this gun and I have a feeling he's really gonna hurt somebody.
Author's Response: Crazy people and guns just aren't a good mix. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2013 12:00 pm Title: Introduction
P.S; I'm not keen on him in this but I hope Michael's not thinking about killing himself! D; Well I don't know if he would because he's a psycho and selfish but he likes to have control, and when it spirals out there sometimes no other option
But yeah I hope his crazy ass doesnt shoot himself! lol now I'm too eager for the next update. :P
Author's Response: Its not really in Michaels nature, he thinks too highly of himself to end his own life lol. thanks so much for reading and reviewing@
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2013 11:50 am Title: Chapter 41: Interrogation
I bet he's going after ashley......
Author's Response: haha I'm sure he will too. Michael's crazy, hes out for blood. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2013 11:41 am Title: Chapter 41: Interrogation
I've got to give it to Michael, he's very strong and composed I'll tell you that but he's a dick and lol Sam is just so gullible smh
Is Michael going after Mr Smith....? Thats the only person I can think of.. I may be completely off the mark lol
Great long update. Amazing as always. XD Can't wait for more Lovey , <33
Author's Response: haha yeah michael is something else. Poor Sam, she has no idea. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!