Date: Jan 18, 2014 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 42: Mr. Smith
I never thought Michael was so far gone as to take another person life, he is seriously at the point of no return. Things are going to end well with my smooth criminal :( but great chapter!! :)
Author's Response: haha you can say that again, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jan 18, 2014 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 38: Fired
I can't believe I am saying this, but this is one of my favorite chapters, I know I sound twisted but it is, I think it is because of the fact that for once Michael went on instinct and did not think any of it through, I think that's what I like about it, in the past he planned and strategized, but with this it was pure animalistic anger! Ashley should have seen this coming after their first and second encounter, but she had too much pride. You are a great writer!
Author's Response: Honestly, thats something I really liked about this chapter too. because it was just pure angry and rage you know? I dig that. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jan 18, 2014 07:29 am Title: Chapter 28: Passion
I'm not even going to lie, every time it said Sam in this chapter, I pictured my name ;) great chapter!
Author's Response: hahah I sometimes do that too but with my name of course haha thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jan 17, 2014 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
Dayummmm
Author's Response: haha thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 07:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Lost Cause
I'm only on the second chapter and i'm already hooked!!!! love it!!!
Author's Response: haha yay! Im happy you're liking it so far!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
oh my lawd he kill all of them O_O! its official he going to jail XD cant wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: hahah yeah he went crazy. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 09:06 am Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
OK My last review wasnt my actual review but omg I've had a lil breather to compose myself and I still don't know what to say LOL
OK to start off with... SHIT I CAN'T BELIEVE HE KILLED THEM! Well I can but... *cries* I can't deal
Damn girl how do you even write this so graphically? Seriously crazy and vividly written, alas I could imagine the brutal scenes like a movie. D;
As nutty as it sounds, this story is what keeps me on this site tbh haha
Whenever you update it makes me the most eager to read than any other story. :3 I hope it's not gonna end soon but if Michael's "hey-ho lets leave a trail of evidence because I've lost it" ass gets to jail it'd end there. ;O Therefore I hope this psycho escapes lmao look at me what am I saying? I'm a wreck lol
Fucking amazing yet horrifying chapter, well done. :)) Can't wait for more! , <33
Author's Response: I really don't know how I write so graphically lol. Its like once I start to write and I'm really into it I can honestly write anything. haha I like the everyone thinks they are crazy for being team michael hahah thanks so much for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 08:57 am Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
WHOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Author's Response: hahah I know, crazy chapter
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! T_T :(((
Author's Response: Yeah michael decided to eliminate all his victims. thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
Michael has plan lost his mind. Can't wait see what happens next
Author's Response: haha you can say that again, thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
Dayummmmmm!
Oh sh***t like wtf?!?!!!
Idk what to say right now LOL
Omg.... why Michael why???
Wooo he's gonna end up in slammer
Just like those famous serial killer rapists did...
He gone make headlines alright daily news & everything! Unless he has some kind of miraculous plan to get of all of this... wow just wow I can't even XD
Woah hard pill to swallow girl
The man had it all & now damn near lost it all!
Great chapter can't wait for more soon! Xx
Author's Response: haaha I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter:] thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
Jennifer and Vanessa! God Michael, whyyyyy??!?!! *cries* and Ashley...I don't wanna say oh well..but..damn
Guuuuurrrrrlll! This story is just...lawd! The fact that my middle name is Vanessa and my mom's name is Jennifer..it's crazy lol. Please continue
Author's Response: Oh wow thats crazy, sometimes I want to use names more creative but its a hassle lol thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Jan 14, 2014 11:51 am Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
Man I feel crazy but I loved this chapter!!! Like an action film or something! Man, what is he gonna do now? Even though all his victims are dead, he can still get caught. He should've used gloves and condoms. All those women have traces of his DNA. Does he not even care anymore? Man Michael.. I hate to see it happen to ya, but your ass is going to jail.
Author's Response: Yeah Hes not in his right mind anymore. he should've been more careful but hes just like screw it. thanks for reading and reviewing@
Date: Jan 14, 2014 11:02 am Title: Chapter 44: Three Whores
Wow. In too much shock to say anything.
Author's Response: Yeah that was a pretty crazy chapter lol probably the craziest of the whole story haha thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2014 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 43: Fun
He's insane now. It's getting gooooood!!!!!! Love this story XD
Author's Response: hhahah thanks! im happy you're enjoying this!