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Reviewer: MrsSmoothCriminal92 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2014 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 46: Samantha

Wow such a compelling chapter! I literally squealed when I saw you updated lol. God what is going to happen now? is this the end? I need to know! :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm happy you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: MJsHomeSkilletBiscuit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2014 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 46: Samantha

Daaaaammnn!! That ending though. I love how she goes a little crazy and just shoots herself with her wedding dress on and lays next to Michael. Fucking brilliant! Props for a well written chapter. <3 <3



Author's Response: Hahha i actually really liked that too. I thought it was kinda cute, thank you so miuch for your praise! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2014 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 46: Samantha

Whoa!!!! So she killed Michael then killed herself?! I am just gagging right now! This so so good, that it's crazy. Man you have to continue this. I am speechless. I'm quite sad too because Michael needed help and never got it. And Sam killed herself because she loved his psychotic ass. So crazy and insanely good. What could possibly happen now? Everybody is dead. Lol smh. 



Author's Response: Haha thanks so much! I know, but then again did he even want help you know? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kingofpoplover4ever10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2014 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 46: Samantha

Why? Why? Why? Did they have to die???!?! Great story by the way! Can't wait to see what happens next! :-) ♥



Author's Response: I know :( thanks! Happy you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl25135 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2014 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 46: Samantha

OMGOMGOMG!!!!! DAMN I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING!! I STARTED CRYING AT THE END!!!! OH MY GOODNESS! Come with chapter I'm ready!!



Author's Response: Aww dangg I brought you to tears? Im sorry! Happy you enjoyed it tho! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2014 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 46: Samantha

Wow. I can honestly say I saw this coming. Poor Sam. I feel so bad for her. I feel bad for Mr. Smith, Vanessa, Jennifer, and even Ashley (and THAT'S saying something). Just wow.



Author's Response: I know :/ i felt most bad for Sam tho :,((

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2014 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

omg the way it ends!! update please lmao every chapter im praying somebody kills michael! oh gosh he is pure concentrated evil! interesting story *_* and sam...she has to get out of this some how right? RIGHT?? 



Author's Response: Haha had you on the edge of your seat huh? Hah i hope ahe does too!

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: Lost Cause

I am liking this a lot so far.  You show a very passionate side of Mike's character.  he's got a lot bottled up, lost of emotional stuff that seeps through into how he percieves people and handles life.  

 

I completely understand someone like him wanting a sexual challenge or at least something minorly creative. Sam sounds like a sweet person but she would have been a better personal assistant for him than wife maybe?  

 

Loving' it!  



Author's Response: Haha thanks! I'm happy you're liking it so far. Hah he loves Sam but since hes all crazy hes considering her to be rather lackluster. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Missbabyblue333 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

I'm suprised & glad he told her the truth...........



Author's Response: Yeah he felt the need to because she would've found out. Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

Oh... Poor sam <3 Not her too.. she's too sweet ;_;

Publish again soon <3



Author's Response: I know! I honestly loveee Sam. :( thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

Neat so far. I like it. And I hope that the next chapter will be a really good one, too. ;)



Author's Response: Hah thanks! Happy you're enjoying!

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

stories/2611/images/aahhh.gif   Holy CRAP! I'm so nervous for Sam right now... Michael done lost his everlovin' mind, and he won't stop until he's either locked up or killed. A true psychopath!! YIKES!!! 



Author's Response: Hey sunni! Yeah he's crazy lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 11:46 am Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

So he told Sam. Not like it would do much for her. She'll probably be dead in the next chapter after he's done with her.



Author's Response: At least she knows the truth. Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 11:23 am Title: Chapter 45: Betrayal

Wow!!!!! Damn I hate you stopped there. I can't wait til the next update, this is complete madness! I can understand why Sam woulda wanna turn him in but I think Michael needs to be in a mental complex. He needs rehabilitation services, not prison. He is crazy as hell but I love every minute of this! Lol. Sam better get with the program or she's next. 



Author's Response: I agree with you, he needs help. Haha yeah she needs to get with the program haha thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: Appleheadedbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2014 05:25 pm Title: Introduction

Michael is freakin crazy!!!!!  Love it! :D



Author's Response: ahha thanks! happy you're enjoying this!

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