[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 9: Release
Wow shit! It really went there! 0.0 he put it on here alright! Dayummmmmmmmm! Atleast she was getting raped by a sexy guy. LMAO I knw I sound crazy 4 saying that but sick & crazed mike can sometimes be a turn on. XD but all jokes aside I bet that girl is tramatised now....... so he wishes to tortore his wife like that to? 0.0 wow he is really wacked out. Well I hope he uses his wackyness skills on Ashely & those others who screwed him over. I still love him tho even tho he did what he did. Please continue girly im loving this a lot! & can you check out my story called His Regretful secret? It will mean a lot 2 me cause u one of my favorite authors up here to! I'm sure u will like it. Much Love <3
Author's Response: At least shes getting raped by someone sexy oh wow couldn't help but laugh at that. He doesn't want to hurt his wife, shes his little light in a dark tunnel. He truly loves her, I'm so grateful that you are enjoying this:) & I'll be sure to!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 01:04 pm Title: Introduction
Wow! Simply....wow!
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much:) I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Apr 13, 2013 11:34 am Title: Chapter 9: Release
Yeah I have no words to describe this chapter. And that says something. It was just mind blowing. And crazy.
Author's Response: Hah rendered you speechless? I'm happy you enjoyed it, if thats possible hah thanks for reading and reviewing<33
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 11:23 am Title: Chapter 4: Michelle
I just read this and i love it already :-) keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww thank you:) I see you got some catching up to do haha thanks for reading and reviewing<33
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2013 11:06 am Title: Chapter 9: Release
I haven't even read it yet and I know It's gonna be good! :D
Author's Response: Hahah your review honestly scared the crap out of me! I was like theres no way someone already read the chapter when I just put it up haha thanks for the review<3 I hope you enjoyed it!
Date: Apr 08, 2013 07:36 am Title: Chapter 8: Motives
omg can't wait for the next part but i think he has to do something to Ashley
Author's Response: I'm happy you're enjoying this:) hah lets hope he gets back at Ashley thanks for reading and reviewing :))
Date: Apr 08, 2013 04:38 am Title: Chapter 8: Motives
Awn.... Im loving it. You are a very good writer. :-)
Author's Response: Hey there:) thanks so much for the feedback! That means a lot to me:) I'm happy you're enjoying this!
Date: Apr 07, 2013 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 8: Motives
You see, its been 9 chapters and you have given a glimpse of what is to come. If you have taken this long, I am slightly getting an idea of how things are going to turn out. Although a question has been haunting me for too long; Will Michael ever get caught in the act? By cops or even Sam? please update soon. <3 <3
Author's Response: Yeah I wanted to give some time so it wouldn't be so sudden you know? well we'll have to see. Thanks for reading and reviewing:)
Date: Apr 07, 2013 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 8: Motives
*sounds of emotional pain* whhhhhhhhyyyyy... *sigh* As usual Ashley's a douche smh but Michael really? I don't want him to do this... MYSTI POWERS MAKE HIS CAR BREAK DOWN!! Michael got serious senioritis right there like you can't be doing that and be top 5 that's just not cool. Awww this is all so sad *pout* I hope that girl is out with her friends or something.. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah its just uh Michaels a bit off so yeah. I know its a sad story. Well I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing<33 I appreciate the support:)
Date: Apr 07, 2013 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 8: Motives
:D finally time to execute his plan! Wonder who his victim will be and how different she is compared to sam
Author's Response: Haha you'll have to wait and see:) I'll be sure to give some background on her, thanks for reading and reviewing!<33
Date: Apr 07, 2013 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 8: Motives
I have a feeling what's coming in the next chapter, so I'm prepared. I hope there's proof of Ashley stealing his presentation soon, because that bitch don't deserve her praise.
Author's Response: Haha yes be prepared, it won't be pretty. Lets hope Michael's able to get back at Ashley, she deserves it. Thanks for reading and reviewing<333
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2013 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 8: Motives
When I seen you updated I had to get me some Toaster Strudels and read girl. Lol I cant wait for the next chapter. Poor Michael. I really feel bad for the man. AND Your writing makes me scared. Shit somebody might be watching me lol. haha. jk. But yes please continue
Author's Response: Hahaha a toaster strduel that had me dying laughingXD I know hes a sad man :/ haha I'm happy I'm evoking raw emotion! Hah thanks for reading
Date: Apr 07, 2013 11:45 am Title: Chapter 8: Motives
Omg girl I am beside myself right now! The moment we've all been waiting for when he finally attacks is coming and I'm literally dieing over here. I really thought it would be in this chapter. The scary thing is? I understand why he's doing this which makes me think my best friend is right. I really am crazy lol. Great chapter as always! I am begging here please PLEASE don't make me wait too long for the next chapter?? Thanks girl!
Author's Response: Haha I know its always here, hahaha I'm sure you're not crazy haha I swear the wait won't be too long. Thanks for reading snd reviewing!
Date: Apr 05, 2013 07:02 am Title: Chapter 7: Acting Out
Omg my feels xD I am so freaking mad right now geez! Pretty glad nothing happened between Michael and Ashley SIMPLY AND ONLY because that woulda made everything worse. Smh this stupid booty bag... Like how is someone going to do that?! How does someone do that!? Like there should be some sort of competition thing to show who's more capable of being CEO aka a Ashely is incompetent test and Michael will surely win. Mr Smith sure is a butt hole too but it's nice to know Scott's got his back. It's also nice to know that Michael didnt do anything to cause danger at home, I mean besides from drinking too much. Like its good that Sams gone but she'll come back and be worried ya know? Well that's next chapter I suppose lol GREAT CHAPTER!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much for reading and reviewing:) your review was super sweet. Haha I couldn't let Michael get too far because it would complicate the story a little more than I would like. Hahah ashley is incompetent test, now that was funny hahaha. Yeah Scott is a good friend to Michael, he would never lead a astray. Luckily sam wasn't home so she wouldn't have to deal with Michaels rage, it was better that she was out. Thanks again for the great review<333
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2013 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 7: Acting Out
GAAAAAAAAH. I just hate Ashley like what she did totallly grinds my gears! And then it makes Michael out like a liar and like he cant do anything right. UGH I hate cheaters. UGH I cannot wait until he hurts her stupid ass. Michael works hard and this bitch just fucks her way to the top. Ugh I dunno why Im so mad. lol. Anyways good chapter lol update soon
Author's Response: Hahah thanks for the awesome review:) I'm happy you're enjoying this! Michael does work hard and its sad that people did him dirty, i'm happy you're getting mad haha you're getting involved in the story and I'm happy its evoking real emtion:) thanks for reading!!!