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Reviewer: aj102503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2013 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 20: Coping

I feel for Michael here.  Oh god. It's breaking my heart.  Sam should get back with him.



Author's Response: It sucks for both of them because theyre stubborn and will stick to their guns. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2013 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 21: Doubts

Michael needs to stop.. I have a feeling that he's gonna get himself in a lot of trouble. I really hope he doesn't though.. I wonder what would happen if Sam showed up. How he would react.. Anyway, he's searching for a new victim at a church? Omg. This just screams trouble. This does not sound like a good idea at all.

 



Author's Response: Lets hope he comes to his senses but with Michael you can never be sure. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2013 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 21: Doubts

Yikes! He wants a church going woman now?! He's going to traumatize this next victim I know it! 



Author's Response: you know it! he wants someone who he can make suffer, lets see how this goes. thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2013 07:10 am Title: Chapter 20: Coping

Wow. Just wow. Michael, that was sad. He is deeply in shit rite na :( anyway, I'm looking for the nest chapter. Great update. Thanks :)

Author's Response: I know Michaels being a little punk because hes upset but its to be expected lol. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SmellyApplehead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2013 07:02 am Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

Okay. Now. This is the saddest chapter I've ever found in other chapter :""""( I was like, NOOOOOOOOOOO

Author's Response: I'm happy this chapter evoked real emotion for you! I try my best to make it conniving and compelling. thanks so much for reading and reviewing:]

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2013 09:13 am Title: Chapter 20: Coping

Gee it does sound like neither Sam  / Michael truly want the divorce, perhaps they merely need time away from each other...

However if Michael carries on with his sadistic side then maybe it's best for Sam to be out the picture. I really don't know because Michael does seem pretty hurt, even if he's cursing and stating he don't need her.

Its complicated lol

Great chapter. :))

I can't wait fo more, I love this story. ^_^ , <33



Author's Response: I know they're both hurt and conflicted. Only time can tell:] thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really love hearing your feedback!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2013 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 20: Coping

Poor Sam.. She obviously loves Michael but she conflicted. I don't think she wants a divorce and Michael's whining, crazy ass doesnt want one either. As much shit as he's talkin, that's just hurt comin out cuz his ass doesn't mean any of it. He knows damn well he wants Sam. I know one thing, he needs to stop drinking. With him already havin a few screws loose, alcohol will only exacerbate his issues. 



Author's Response: hahaha I love how you are constantly giving Michael tough love haha I love it. I happy you brought up the drinking thing, readers seem to overlook that but he clearly has a problem. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing:] I really enjoy your comments!

Reviewer: crazyreader Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2013 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 20: Coping

oh its amazing... i mean, i think michael should get a little bit crazy sometime... but please update soon! 



Author's Response: Haha yeah I'm sure he'll go off the deep end without Sam. thanks so much for reading and reviewing:]

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2013 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 20: Coping

Geesh Ashley is horrible! Smh! Sam don't know what to say about Sam. Poor thing.



Author's Response: I know :[ its a bad situation! thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really love your feedback

Reviewer: Dreamer102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2013 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

Omg what a hot mess full of failure xD that was his chane and he BLEW IT!! After all that Sam said he coulda been like and that's why I need you in my life and blah and Ill (literally) go insane without you girl and blah! BUT HE FREAKING BLEW IT!! *sigh* Holy crap it's going to be so freaking sad omg just leave me as I am *throws self upon bed* 



Author's Response: Hahaha I adore how animated you are. Your reviews seriously put a smile on my face! :) i know michael had his chance but he let his anger get the best of him and only pushed sam farther away, lets hope hes able to do something to make the situation better. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing:)

Reviewer: Alyaka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2013 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

I know I'm probably the only person who feels this way, but I think Sam overreacted and Michael just acted out of pain because he felt his wife had betrayed him by leaving him.  He is taking a lot of crap at work right now and I just feel that Sam should have been more understanding and supportive.  Yeah he lashed out at her, but she did push him over the edge by leaving him to begin with.  I just hope Michael recovers from this before he loses everything else he holds dear in his life.  He needs a more understanding and supportive woman in his life. Maybe it would even help him change his ways if he could get what he needed from her. Sam is way too conservative when it comes to sex and Michael? Well he is a man and men have needs.  Anyway great chapter I look forward to the next one!



Author's Response: You make a good point Annie, I too feel like Michael lashed out because he was already really upset and betrayed by his wife. It makes sense because if someone upsets you and you see them again later on you're much more likly to lash out at them since you already have built up anger. I understand where you are coming from, lets hope michael does something that will better himself and not make the situation worst. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing:)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

Michael is a dumb ass! Point blank period. Poor Sam. She's not perfect but she is the one person in this whole story who genuinely cared about Michael and loved him. She put up with a lot of his shit, and he had the nerve to talk to her like that?! Is he trying to run her off? Because that's exactly what he's done. I hope he's miserable in that house alone every night. He has no one but himself to blame for this. If Sam ever comes back, she needs to make him work his narrow ass off to prove he's deserving of her. I can't believe he spoke to her like that.. Smh. I hope he cries his damn eye sockets out. Sam said some pretty harsh things, but they were warranted. Everything she said was right. She's been a good wife and I feel bad for her. I wonder if they're over for good.. 



Author's Response: First off I adore how passionate you are in this review, thanks for that. I agree, Sam is michaels better half and he ran her off once she became raw and truthful with him. He wasn't going to sit back and take it so he retaliated. Sam's not perfect but shes trying her best. Both of them know they were harsh to one another but when emotions are running high what can you expect? I too am interested to see how Michael copes. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SunniVan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

Wow... I can't believe things just went down like that!!!

The hell?????

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Author's Response: Hey you! Haven't heard from you in a while, good to hear from you:) yeah michael and sam were just both fed up, and didn't hold back when addressing each other. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing:)

Reviewer: aj102503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

Perhaps there's some truth to what Michael said to Sam.  Looks to me she really had it silver spoon easy. If Sam is not the one to pull Michael out of his raping, saddistic, psycho ways I hope he finds someone in the future who will.  He really needs a theraphy! 



Author's Response: True, Sams not one that has had to work really hard for things in life and that somewhat bothers michael because he is the opposite. Yeah he needs some form of help. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: crazyreader Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2013 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mr. vs. Mrs.

omg omg i want more :(



Author's Response: Hahaha soon you will receive more:) thanks for reading and reviewing!

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