[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2013 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 23: Compromise
And back to him, Samantha? Michael? Well, hello. My name is Vicky, and YOU MUST BE KIDDING ME.
Samantha, girl, don't be pathetic.
Author's Response: Hahaha I love how straight you are. Lets see how things turn out ;) thanks so much for the feedback
Date: Jul 20, 2013 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 23: Compromise
Hmm Sam is having conflicting emotions huh? I'll see how this will play out. Poor Jennifer too. Now as for Ashley, she thought she had an advantage, what a laugh. XD
Author's Response: Hahahaha that phrase "what a laugh" had me laughing haha. Sams really emotional so shes the one who alwaysss feels bad first lol whereas Michael isn't as emotional so he just gets angry and stays that way haha. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: Jul 20, 2013 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 23: Compromise
Michael and Ashely are a hot ass mess. I hope she leaves his ass alone until their boss comes back. She's still trifling, and I still don't like her or trust her. Michael needs to make sure he takes his things with him, but I don't think she will try anything because if one messes up, BOTH their asses are on the line. I feel so bad for Sam. She's clearly still in love with that fool. Smh. How does Michael feel about her? Does he even care? He's too busy getting ready to stalk Vanessa and potentially get his ass beat. I think Vanessa is not gonna be a victim. She seems like she's not gonna take his mess.
Author's Response: Hahahah ashley is not to be trust, shes something else. Thats the only thing that makes it a bit tricky this time around because if Michael or her screw up technically both their asses are grass. Oh Samantha! She loves him and its hard for her to stop loving him. Michael clears but as we know hes borderline psychopath, hes not to good with expressing himself with an emotion that isn't anger lol. I'm cheering for Vanessa too. I'm sure she won't be an easy target.
Date: Jul 13, 2013 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
dying for the scene brb
Author's Response: haha I'm happy you're enjoying this:] thanks so much for reading and reviewing
Date: Jul 13, 2013 06:15 am Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
good pick although I wish Michael wasnt rude to Sam. He loves/claims to love her! How i could punch him!!!!!!!! ;) jk! good chapter!
Author's Response: Haha thanks, I know he lets his anger get the best of him. thanks so much for reading and reviewing
Date: Jul 12, 2013 02:55 pm Title: Introduction
please update tomorrow please i like vanessa
Author's Response: haha I intend to update tomorrow I promise!
Date: Jul 12, 2013 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
excellent "choice"... Love to read your story, always speechless about what is on his mind...
Author's Response: Thanksssss I'm really happy you're enjoying this:] I try to capture his thoughts exactly like I imagine them and usually it works out well haha
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
I'm so glad Sam left Michael i don't feel sorry for him cause he deserved it and now he's gone pay for it. Instead of his ass being psycho rapist he should of been spending more time with his wife and not cheating on her behind her back cause what he did to Jeniffer was still cheating on his wife no matter how you look at it. He raped that women but still it was considered cheating on his wife. He is no good for her anyway. Same could better and i hope she does find someone else so it will be a smack in Michael's face on what good he's missed out on. Great now he wants to rape another girl i hope this shit backfires on his ass!
Author's Response: Haha I love all the tough love I see for Michael. He is making mistakes and people should recognize that. He did cheat on his wife, regardless of the circumstances of it all. Lets hope he gets his act together soon. thanks so much for reading and reviewing:] I love your feedback!
Date: Jul 12, 2013 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
Oh lawd.. Smh! I feel bad for Sam. Everything happened so fast with them. Has she really already dropped his last name? Damn. She's not playin. Michael is such a coward. He was in the wrong which is why she left! That was his doing. He makes me sick. I hope Vanessa won't be his victim. I hope she fights back and whoops his ass. He's gon mess around and find himself in trouble with this one. He's gonna lose everything.. I have a feeling. He's about to make a very COSTLY mistake with this girl.
Author's Response: With Sam she hasn't legally dropped his last name but she would like too. Shes just not claiming to be Mrs. Jackson anymore. You have a right to be worried. Michael has no idea what hes getting himself into. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
I can't believe Micheal out of all places went to church to find his victim omg! Are you kidding me he is really nuts for this.
Well he's been nuts for awhile already lol
Author's Response: haha I know! hes been off his rocker for a bit and is just passing the boundaries now. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jul 12, 2013 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 22: Vanessa
Poor Vanessa. She has no idea what's going to befall her later. I find it ironic Vanessa is Gabrielle Union. In real life Gabrielle was a rape vicitim herself at age 19. But it won't sway me away from reading your story. :)
Author's Response: Are you serious?! I honestly didn't even know that! I feel kinda bad know :[ but this is simply fiction so that makes me feel a bit better. Thanks so much for the constant love and support.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2013 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 21: Doubts
And....you left me with the hanger again.
Author's Response: hahaha I swear I'll leave you hanging less haa thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jul 07, 2013 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 21: Doubts
omg omg please update soon like lol
Author's Response: haha I will :] thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2013 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 21: Doubts
Naughty Michael!!! He's going to the Church to get his victim? Oooooh... he's being XTRA naughty!!
Good chapter sweetie! LOL!
Luv ya!
Author's Response: Ahha thanks for the little animations theyre very cute. thanks so much for reading and reviewing I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2013 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 21: Doubts
OMG...he is gonna rape again...very angry at him now.
Author's Response: He can't control himself, he thinks hes doing himself a favor. lets see how things turn out. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!