Date: Aug 21, 2013 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 27: Conversation
Sam is too good for him! But I do like that she's being more firm now. She's not a doormat so she needs to put her foot down. Michael thinks he's in control but he actually isn't. If Sam were to permanently leave him, he will lose everything. If that's not control, idk what is. Furthermore, Sam is goin to be working and making her own money. Again, she will be able to call her own shots. I really hope she's being smarter this time around about everything. Michael needs a big slice of humble pie and a firm kick in the ass. This Vanessa woman is gonna be the one to provide it and Sam just may be the one to finish it off. Ashley is still irritating but that's a given.
Author's Response: Hahah I agree, I didn't like Sam being totally dependent on Michael. She is a smart, beautiful, young woman, she needs to be able to find her own way and doing things for herself is the first step in that process. Lets hope Vanessa pulls off Michaels rose petal glasses and really shows him what life is about. Thank so much for reading and reviewing love:)
Date: Aug 21, 2013 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 27: Conversation
Boy Ashley is nuts as well. I don't know who's more crazy, her or Michael. Smh. Making up for lost time huh? Interesting and sexy. :D But who knows what Michael has in store for Vanessa. She has no clue at all.
Author's Response: Hahaha I got to admit Michael has a few more screws loose then Ashley. Hanging around him is whats really messing her up haha. I'm sure the next chapter will be an interesting one ;) Poor Vanessa, another woman who has caught Michaels eye. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Aug 17, 2013 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 26: Familiar
I hope he goes after Vanessa soon! It's time he struck again lol. Great chapter girl! I hope you update again soon. :)
Author's Response: Hey Annie! thanks so much for the review hun I'm happy you're enjoying this story!
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2013 05:31 am Title: Chapter 26: Familiar
Shit. That was a close one for Michael, his cover was almost blown!
Michael is such a creep lol. An unbelievably sexy creep, but nonetheless a creep ahah ok I'm making no sense so I'll shut up. :x
I really can't wait for more, this is still one of my favourite stories. :)) Update when you can Honey. :D
, <33
Author's Response: haha a sexy creep haha I love your reviews, you're hilariousssssssssssss. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2013 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 26: Familiar
"A lot is going on in life right now so my attention is divided. Once I get things figured out I promise the following chapters will be better. :)"
can I give you a suggestion? You don't have to force yourself to update if you don't feel like to. I have a experience updating my story when I got mad, because I hadn't updated in like. Years, so I updated. And that chapter turned out like a crap (I'm not saying this chapter is a crap, NO!). But when we got distracted, a story would never turn to its best. We, at least me, understand. Keep it up doll :)
Author's Response: haha you're soo right! I just feel bad not updating when I feel like I should. Things are better now so I'll be okay :] thanks for the suggestion, I appreciate you!
Date: Aug 11, 2013 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 26: Familiar
Boy what a crazy chapter! Vanessa might not know it yet, but she looking at her future rapist! Scary. And a close call.
Author's Response: I know, close call indeed. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Aug 05, 2013 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 25: Manipulator
well lawd have mercy...what the freakin heck is his main problem?? lol i loved it!....CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...I was at the edge of my seat on this one..strangely...i like that feeling lol...omg im so twisted
Author's Response: Hahaha I'm sure you're not twisted just deeply involved in the story haha. Thanks so much for the review, im happy you enjoyed this chapter:)
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2013 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 25: Manipulator
That was sweet. But Michael, please erase that psycho thoughts from your damned mind.
Author's Response: Hahah I honestly lovee your reviews. You're hilarious haha thanks for the review!
Date: Aug 01, 2013 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 25: Manipulator
I knew he'd try some manipulative bullshit. I knew it!! He ain't shit I swear!! I wish Sam woulda called his bluff. He's too egotistical to kill himself so he wouldn't have done shit. He saw she meant business and wasn't taking his shit so be pulled the last pathetic card he could think of. Fucking worthless is what he is. She should've called his bluff and said fine, kill yourself then. He would've been completely stuck. Smh. I just can't. I wish Sam was having an affair. When she goes home, she shouldn't even sleep in the same room or bed as him. Just being there but no interaction with him at all. Sorry ass.
Author's Response: Haha whoa, I got you upset with this chapter haha. I love the raw emotion! Sam's a really emotional woman and Michael played her with that. He knew exactly what to say and Sam fell into it. You're right, he is wayyy to self-absorbed and egoistical to off himself. Its the last thing he would ever do hah. Thanks so much for the review hun! You're the best:)
Date: Aug 01, 2013 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 25: Manipulator
Wow. This chapter was crazy! Poor Sam really doesn't know what her husband is capable of. *Sighs* Oh well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Poor Sam, shes really in the dark about everything. Thanks so much for the review love:)
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2013 08:53 am Title: Chapter 24: Deep End
Lmao I love @ SmellyApplehead's comments, always XD
But omg the chapter; Michael is losing it... Well, ya know he was losing it before but now he's just like LOST it. YGM? ahah
I can't believe he yelled down the phone at Sam like that. She was willing to be understanding, to talk it out then he's becoming too much of a control freak. He has no right to treat his wife like that, I hope she teaches him a lesson and doesnt come back just because she's afraid. Someone needs to put him in place.
I love how you portray the characters and I love everything about this story. Its so well written, and I'm always entertained. XD I imagine it like a movie. :))
Can't wait for more.
Much love :) , <33
Author's Response: Michaels really off his rocker lol. You're just soo sweet! Thank so much for your kind words! i'm happy you're enjoying this:)!
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2013 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 24: Deep End
MICHAEL JACKSON, YOU NEED TO DAVID GUETTA WAY FROM ME.
Author's Response: Lmaooooo one of the best reviews I've ever recieved haha thanks for the good laugh! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jul 26, 2013 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 24: Deep End
Wtf is wrong with him? He's supposed to be mr bad ass but too much of a fuckin coward to listen to Sam's message!! And he had no business talking to her like that! Smh wtf. I'm done with Michael. I don't even feel sorry for him at this point. He's lost his damn mind completely. I hope Vanessa notices that he's at her house all the time being a damn creep. I hope she kicks his ass. Hell I actually hope Sam will first. This is outta hand.
Author's Response: Lmaoo damnnn I really got you with this chapter huh? Haha i love how passionate you are! Michaels really screwing up, lets hope he comes to his senses soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jul 26, 2013 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 24: Deep End
Ooh wee it got crazier by the minute. Michael keeps showing his true colors. He need to stop or Ashley will ruin him.
Author's Response: Mhm Michael is really pushing it. He needs something to calm him down or he'll only get worst. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing:)!
Date: Jul 23, 2013 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 23: Compromise
i think mike doesnt like sam anymore... oh well
Author's Response: Haha he does! He's just an angry guy so he doesn't have a good way in showing he still cares. Thanks fir reading and reviewing!