[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2013 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 32: Fighter
O.O Ooooh shoot!! Best friend to the rescue!
Author's Response: You already know hahaha thanks for the review love <3
Date: Oct 07, 2013 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 32: Fighter
Oh boy.. I hope for Michael's sake there is no DNA left on or in Vanessa. Luckily his crazy ass used a condom but this is crazy.. Seems like Michael is about to finally get everything he wants but I have a feeling it will all come crashing down. And that comment from Sam still seemed.. A bit ominous to me. What if she really was planning to divorce Michael? Lol that would be the icing on the cake of his downfall. Man I am loving this. I just can't wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review love:) Trust me i appreciate your lovely reviews I don't want to respond because I don't want to ruin anything haha stay tuned for more:)
Date: Oct 07, 2013 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 32: Fighter
So Mr. Smith has decided to promote one of them. I wonder who. Poor Vanessa, I feel so bad for her. Poor girl. I know Leslie is going to help.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review love bug:)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2013 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 30: Bossy
He gave her the Ike slap!!
Author's Response: oh lord thats funny haha thanks for the review love<3
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2013 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 31: Release pt.2
Whoa!! Too much for me to take it in.
This was actually very difficult to read, omg. It was difficult because of the content of what happened, and how you detailed the events, what was said etc. Everything was so on point and I was consumed by the craziness. It was intense and scary, and for that I've got to say very well done!
Vanessa sure held her own! I admired her determination but it's sad she didnt get away. :( She seems so strong, I don't think she'll block this out and let it lie like the Jennifer... However you never know. The rape could change her. :x
But Michael... Wow I'm fearful of him now lol. He's heartless except for when it comes to Sam, and even then he's possessive, even if she can't see it. He's very good at manipulating. A very dark character indeed.
About iam_music's comment; I actually never thought of Sam finding out that way! Very good point raised. :)
I can't wait for more. XD Amazing as always. :3
, <33
Author's Response: wow thanks so much! i try to go into good detail so you feel like you're in the story you know? so thanks Im happy you enjoyed it. I know Vanessa really fought but Michael was running on fumes, he needed his fix and was determine to get it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing<33
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2013 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 30: Bossy
Damn! Michael's still as mean as ever with Ashley, but I can understand his point of view. He hates losing and he really wants the job. I bet if he did lose the position of CEO to her, he'd be out for blood.
I don't know if I want him to have the job or not tbh because he's such an ass! Lol I also doubt that if he does get the job that he'll stop with the attacks. It looks like a craving which he can't control. :x
Ah I'm loving this. :)
Author's Response: haha I love how balanced you are, traditionally people are either team michael or anti-michael and you seem to have that perfect balance of right and wrong haha thanks so much for the review love<3
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2013 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 29: Married
Awe ^_^ The married couple are cute, in a weird way, but Sam deserves better than Michael imo. You got it all going on Mike, yet you still can't help but think about Vanessa? You're wrong in the head, understatement. lol
Great chapter, you don't know how happy I was to see you've updated with 3 chapters!
It was like Christmas! Except I don't celebrate Christmas... You get what I mean hehe.
Gonna read the next one now. :3
Author's Response: hahah I loveee that gif:] you put a huge smile on my face haha thanks so much for the love and support
Date: Sep 24, 2013 09:47 am Title: Chapter 31: Release pt.2
Very brutal indeed! Ooh wee these chapters were crazy! XD but the last one was just nuts! Jennifer didn't know she ran into her rapist, I was hoping Vanessa would get away, but that didn't happen.
Author's Response: haha I try! I know poor jen she didn't have the slightest idea. I know everyone was rooting for Vanessa but there was no way mike would've let her get away. Thanks so much for you review
Date: Sep 24, 2013 09:28 am Title: Chapter 31: Release pt.2
Wow!!!!!! Vanessa was definitely a fighter. But for some reason, I have the strangest feeling that Sam will somehow find out.. Sam is about to be a counselor now right? What if Vanessa goes and receives counseling services and she talks about her brutal rape and describes her ordeal.. And slowly but surely she starts putting the pieces together that it is none other than her husband Michael who's this brutal rapist?! What kind of epic??? Man, this is completely crazy and I love it.
Author's Response: hahah you're so smart, that definitely would've been something I could introduce to the plot but I have things planned a bit different haha. i'm happy you enjoyed this chapter thank you for your sweet reviews:]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 09:11 am Title: Chapter 31: Release pt.2
If i read this i would just cry instantly, sorry i think i'll just pass this chapter. Be back in the next chapter ^^ update asap, please? Hehe
Author's Response: I can dig that, its not for everyone love bug.
Date: Sep 02, 2013 07:17 am Title: Chapter 28: Passion
Wow what an update I loved it! That chapter was SO hot! I'm curious to see how Michael acts after that night he and Sam spent together. Please update again soon? This is still my fav story by far. :)
Author's Response: Haha thanks :) I promise I'll update soon! Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!
Date: Aug 29, 2013 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 28: Passion
Damn Sam put it on him real good! This was actually a good chapter. We've never seen them with this type of intimacy. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thank you, I felt the story was lacking a bit of intimacy between them so I felt it was necessary to throw a bit in the mix :) thanks for reading & reviewing
Date: Aug 29, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 28: Passion
Now that was sexy! Nice to see them in the swing of things. I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thankss:) I tried my best lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2013 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 27: Conversation
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Author's Response: Hey love:) happy you enjoyed this :)!
Date: Aug 21, 2013 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 27: Conversation
Sam is too good for him! But I do like that she's being more firm now. She's not a doormat so she needs to put her foot down. Michael thinks he's in control but he actually isn't. If Sam were to permanently leave him, he will lose everything. If that's not control, idk what is. Furthermore, Sam is goin to be working and making her own money. Again, she will be able to call her own shots. I really hope she's being smarter this time around about everything. Michael needs a big slice of humble pie and a firm kick in the ass. This Vanessa woman is gonna be the one to provide it and Sam just may be the one to finish it off. Ashley is still irritating but that's a given.
Author's Response: Hahah I agree, I didn't like Sam being totally dependent on Michael. She is a smart, beautiful, young woman, she needs to be able to find her own way and doing things for herself is the first step in that process. Lets hope Vanessa pulls off Michaels rose petal glasses and really shows him what life is about. Thank so much for reading and reviewing love:)