Date: Jan 02, 2014 08:57 pm Title: Keeping It A Secret
Astral projection
Demon transformation
Levitation
Advanced Telekinesis
Telekinetic blasts
Telekinetic bursts
Telekinetic bolts
Telekinetic waves
Telekinetic shields/barriers
Long-distance Teleportation
Above-average physical condition
Experienced hand-to-hand combatant
Multilingualism
Empathic healing
Telepathy
Time Control
Empathic Creation & Projection
Ability-granting
Ability Augmentation & Enhancement
Ability Control
this is all what the teen titans raven can do some ideas for her some of trinity's powerssh should controls her powers through meditation
Author's Response:
oh wow, these are some awesome ability suggestions! :D I'll take all of them into consideration. Thanks for reading! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2013 04:57 pm Title: Astoria
I've finaly had time to sit down and catch up without being disturbed!!
No I made that doppleganger assumption before because I had just finished watching the Vampire Diaries and Misfits lol
Author's Response:
Both very good shows, one of which is almost like some parts of the story (even though I don't watch it lol). Thanks for reading! Hope you're enjoying it so far ^_^
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2013 11:49 pm Title: Keeping It A Secret
Trinity is so cute talking about Maestro and what not. She in love chile *_* As for the boys, I feel like they might end up being the ones to reveal Maestro to the town but Imma be quiet and wait to see what actually happens. As for Trin and Maestro...I looooove their relationship. They're so perfect. I'm interested to find out what this new power is gonna be. Heck she barely has the first power down so hopefully this won't be as hard to adjust to/learn how to use.
Author's Response:
She seriously loves him. Like, she's deeply IN LOVE with that dude lol. And I really don't blame her. Sprung off dat supernatural dik lmao. But yeah anyway, I think the new power is coming along perhaps because of stress lmao. And welp... you'll find out a lot of things later on in the story ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 08:47 am Title: Keeping It A Secret
I wonder what her new ability is.......
Author's Response:
We shall see! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 06:40 am Title: Keeping It A Secret
Hmm, I wonder what her new ability is. Teleportation? Mind reading? Oh, the possibilities! ;p
Author's Response:
the possibilities are endless ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 06:39 am Title: Keeping It A Secret
Lol poor Trinity, she hasn't even mastered her flying ability yet and then she gets another one xD
And what do you think is so wrong with this chapter? Sure, it was a little slow, but it had to cool down after trinity went through all that shit.
Author's Response:
lmfao ikr? the poor girl is already stressed. And I don't know, I just...thought it was shitty. But I think I wrote it when I wasn't that inspired. And yeah sometimes we all need a cool down chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2013 09:20 pm Title: And So It Begins
I don't think I'll ever get enough of this story like I seriously fangirl so hard when I see an update and it just does things to my heart. Lmao. That last chapter was so good and your plot twists are like insane! In a good way of course! Lol. I kind of want to see more of the doppelgänger because he's so interesting! I kind of feel something going on with Sid, I don't know why. Lol. She's just never around anymore. But I love this story and can't wait for another update!
Author's Response:
Awwwwwwwwwwwww I'm glad you love the story so much! It's good to know that you love reading it ^__^ and as far as Sid... Well interesting things will unfold with everyone in the chapters to come ;) thanks for reading! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2013 09:59 pm Title: And So It Begins
whoaa dude so much happened in this chapter. Finally, things are starting to heat up (not complaining about the long exposition; your writing is awesome no matter what).
Also, the Latin was really cool. Can you put like translations in the end notes though xD I'm really curious as to what they're saying.
Great chapter!! :D
Author's Response:
Yessssss and things will only progress further from here! And yes lol, I will put Latin translations in from here on out :D I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And yeah, it takes me forever to get to the juicy parts of a story lol. But nonetheless, if you like it then I'm happy! Thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2013 09:18 pm Title: And So It Begins
My reaction to this whole chapter was just...
Talk about a plot twist! looool I wasn't ready! I can't can't even fathom! This is just crazy! I don't even know what to say right now loll. And why is starting to remind me of that Disney movie Twitches?! I love it! This is starting to get too good lol. I'm ready to see what happens next. I need another update like tonight. lol I'm jk. But for real though update soon.
P.S. Imma need for you to start translating this Latin dialogue because ain't nobody got time to be going on google to look that ish up lol.
Author's Response:
Girl you better use google translate! Lol and well if you want I will lmfao. But looool I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! I was trying to throw some plots twists in there lol. I really needed to hurry up with the whole main plot thing. There will be plenty more where this came from, trust me! And you say crazy with this review. *sucks teeth* it wasn't alluh dat lol. Thanks for reading!
Date: Dec 04, 2013 09:20 pm Title: Astoria
Just saw your new banner, holy hell that is awesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Man it was definitely time for a banner change lol. This new one is a lot more relevant to the story lol. Thanks for noticing! ^__^ <3
Date: Dec 04, 2013 12:18 pm Title: Friend?
Update soon please :)
Author's Response:
I will! Thanks for reading! ^__^
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2013 12:05 am Title: Friend?
From the moment Melody said that she was getting weird vibes from Kyle, I just knew something strange was gonna happen with him. Why do I feel like the doppelgänger is in Kyle though? Like his sinister spirit or something. I mean the brother freaking transported lol Either he has a special power like Trinity, Maestro and the Doppelgänger or the doppelgänger is in him. lol maybe I'm just thinking about this too hard lol and being sleepy isn't making it better. I'll just stop this review now because I'm rambling lol UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response:
Loooool you'll get your answer next chapter. And yeah I debated about whether or not to add Melody's little suspicion in there but welp... Lol thanks for reading!
Date: Nov 28, 2013 11:30 pm Title: Friend?
Uuuuhhh...what the hell is Kyle? Some werewolf or what?
Author's Response:
The next chapter will reveal all my child. Lol! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2013 10:05 pm Title: Friend?
Damn you and your cliffhangers T.T Now I gotta think about what the hell Kyle is, and how did Melody get the weird vibes yet Trinity didn't? (these are the questions that plague my mind)
Author's Response:
Lol I adore cliffhangers and add them in whenever I can lmfao. You'll get your questions answered soon. Thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2013 09:44 pm Title: Friend?
OMG!!! Can't wait to read the next part!!
Author's Response:
Lmfao it'll come soon. Thanks for reading! ^__^