Date: Jan 25, 2014 09:14 pm Title: A Stroke of Bad Luck
NO YOU CANT END IT HERE WHATS GOING ON WHY WAS HER DAY SO SHITTY I HAAAVE TO KNOWWWWWW UGGHHHH this will be the most painful wait for an update omg
Author's Response:
LOL I'm sorry x( well things will start to look up, alright? Hehe but thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:14 pm Title: Unexpected Assistance
Very good chapter can't wait for the next one
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for reading! ^__^
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 06:00 am Title: Unexpected Assistance
See i knew her ass couldn't listen. The girl is hard headed lol
You and these damn clifhangers. whyyyyyyyyyy. I need a new update like now.
Author's Response:
She is so stubborn it's sad lol. Poor thing never listens *deep sigh*. But she'll learn!
thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Jan 20, 2014 05:30 am Title: Unexpected Assistance
I think that storm is from her new power, or from another guy who wants to kill her. Wonderful story
Author's Response:
Great guesses! And thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 01:22 am Title: Unexpected Assistance
Ohh damn! I knew something bad was gonna happen :(
Author's Response:
*sobs* it'll get better :,(
Thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Jan 19, 2014 09:39 pm Title: Unexpected Assistance
*cries* MAESTROOOO
DOPPLEGÄNGER
TRIN
I CNAT WITH THESE EMOTIONS RN
Author's Response:
*hugs you* it'll all be over soon, my dear! Calm your feels! Lol and thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2014 08:24 pm Title: Unexpected Assistance
:O OMG......
Author's Response:
lol right?? It's a lot to take in lmfao. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2014 08:15 pm Title: Unexpected Assistance
You know, the thing I like most about your stories (or story, given that this is the one only I've read so far :P) is that there's a lot of dialogue, and the dialogue isn't staticky or bland. I prefer letting the dialogue tell the story, rather than a bunch of description.
And Maestro's dialogue is just flawless IMO. That elegant, older way of speaking (kinda like Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen. I used that because I forgot what that time period was called), yet still modern and not overly pretentious. Lol, I don't know how else to explain it, but you nailed it perfectly.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
This is probablyone of the best reviews I've read so far on my story :D I really appreciate it lol. I HATE writing long descriptions in a fic (and anyway I'm not good at it), so it's better for me to let the dialogue tell everything. And much easier lol. I thought hard about how I wanted Maestro to speak lol. I've seen a lot of movies and since he's from around the 16 or early 1700s, I knew he had to speak in a manner that was from that time, while still putting a modern twist on it since he is living in our time as an immortal in the story. But yeah, thanks so much for reading! His dialogue is flawless lmao. I love him too mcuh :P <3
Date: Jan 19, 2014 02:50 pm Title: A Flash of Fun
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
you'll have that and more chapters to come :) Thanks for reading!
Date: Jan 17, 2014 06:07 am Title: A Flash of Fun
GURL THIS STORY HAS GOT ME FLAILING AND NEEDING TO KNOW ALL THATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT OMG i've resorted to telling a non mj fan about this because i cant keep quiet about this amazing story lol. I NEED THE NEXT UPDATE I NEED IT LIKE I NEED AIR lol
Author's Response:
Your wish has been granted, my child. lol, thanks for reading! glad you love the story ^_^
Date: Jan 16, 2014 06:24 am Title: A Flash of Fun
No no no no no no!!! I was having fun reading it all in one shot cause I started from the beginning. I hope Maestro/Michael gets rid of his doubleganger!
Love the story btw! It's amazing!
Author's Response:
lmfao you'll have to see how he'll deal with the situation in the next few chapters! Thanks for reading! And I'm glad you love the story! :D
Date: Jan 15, 2014 03:10 pm Title: A Flash of Fun
Oh no. He's back...
Author's Response:
yup, sure is lol. He just loves showing up, trying to ruin Trinity's night. Or well, Maestro's night lol. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 11:48 pm Title: A Flash of Fun
Ha! I knew he'd be back sooner rather than later! I wonder what he wants now?
Author's Response:
we shall see! thanks for reading! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 09:37 pm Title: A Flash of Fun
Oh not him again....
Author's Response:
yup lmfao. He loves to just show up out of the blue, ready to mess with Maestro's night
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 09:31 pm Title: A Flash of Fun
Just as I was thinking "aww this was such a cute chapter" those thoughts quickly changed when I thought about what/who that gush of wind was and it was confirmed in the end which resulted in a grin on my face lol. I need help. Lowkey I was waiting for him to come back tsk tsk. I can't wait to see how this goes lol.
Author's Response:
I know you were lmfaooooo. I really like the doppleganger lmfao. I get a kick out of him tbh, which is why I plan on bringing him back. He always likes to come out of nowhere. Thanks for reading, shawty! <3