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Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2014 07:29 am Title: Finally Together

awh!!! that was so cute!!!:D



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: BlueGangsta Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2014 09:34 pm Title: Finally Together

They're so cute. :)



Author's Response: i know

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2014 05:44 pm Title: Finally Together

awesome chapter!!:) 



Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2014 05:42 pm Title: Finally Together

awh!! their so adorable together and yay!! sequel!!:D



Author's Response: more to come so stay tuned!

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2014 02:08 pm Title: More Than This

Wow, everything happened so fast but it was still a pretty nice story! Just a suggestion for the sequel, try not to rush all the events into a few chapters. Give the story sometime to develop. Try developing the characters a bit more because I'd love to know more about Faithlyn. But to say that this is probably your first story this is pretty good! Thanks for the shout-out and I wonder if the sequel will be based off of another 1D song?

Author's Response: I have no idea yet what I have planned but the 1st chapter is up

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2014 11:15 pm Title: More Than This

omg!! I loved it!!:) and thanks for the shoutout!!:) looking forward to the sequel!!:D



Author's Response: you are welcome! Trust me the sequel is going to be great!<3 thanks for reading the story!

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2014 06:53 pm Title: More Than This

awh!! yay their getting together!!



Author's Response: soon I will update now!!!

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2014 04:18 pm Title: More Than This

o..m..g that was so freaking interesting 



Author's Response: thank you it will get better from there but I will not give any spoilers!=)

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:50 pm Title: More Than This

poor michael

i liked it 



Author's Response: thank you more to come!

Reviewer: sirenscalling_16 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:47 pm Title: More Than This

omg this story is good i wish it would longer though 



Author's Response: thank you so much! More to come! It will get good I promise you that!!!!

Reviewer: MichaelManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2014 01:22 pm Title: More Than This

I love that this is based off of "More Than This" by 1D! It's one of my favorite fetus songs! I believe this story might me interesting!

Author's Response: stay tuned it's gonna get good I promise

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