[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2014 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 35
Neat so far. :) I like it. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too.
Uh-oh! I hope that Jamie will be able to fight back against her captor and find her way back to Michael, and that Michael will be able to win the court case, too...
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Date: Feb 10, 2014 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 35
Continue please
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2014 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 35
*screams* NOOOOOOOO HE HAS JAMIE OMG OMG I hope she lives....
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2014 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 35
*SHRIEKS FOR A SOLID TWO MINUTES*
JAMIE NOOOOOOO!!!!! NONONONONONONONONONONO HE HAS JAMIE!!!!!!!!!
Oh god please... no...
I'm crying so hard right now... Publish again soon!!! DONT LEAVE US ON THIS!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2014 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 34
FORESHADOW MUCH?!!?!?!?!?!?! Omg!!!! God, Michael's family... well, brothers, they're such a pil!! And Jamie nor Michael needs that... >:/
I'm scared now, whats gonna happen??? x.x
Date: Jan 21, 2014 02:58 am Title: Chapter 34
Continue please
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter! It sucks that she just may be viewed as the woman he met in rehab, especially since once that hits the airwaves that's all anyone will be able to focus on. I'm sure they'll be fine; they've been so strong for each other so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Also loved the mentioning of Huck Finn and his battle with morality. Very interesting; happens to him a few times, it was approached wonderfully, I think.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment!
Date: Dec 09, 2013 02:56 am Title: Chapter 33
Wow continue please
Date: Nov 17, 2013 02:44 am Title: Chapter 32
That's cute continue, and will u write a sex scene or no
Author's Response:
A writer never betrays his future ideas...You'll just have to follow the storyline :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 32
That was a really touching chapter...
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2013 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 31
HE-OHMYGOD HE HE HE HE--
He proposed.
Lol well sort of, but thats how MJ and Lisa started... 0_o OMG im so excited, pleease dont leave us hanging too long, we luv ya :)
Author's Response:
Just a little bit of a wait will make the next part more exciting...all stories are updated in a certain order (take order from my life and I'm lost).
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2013 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 31
Jamie needs to say YES! She'd better or I'm going to teleport into the story and slap some sense into her.
I sure hope Michael doesn't pay the Chandlers off.
Author's Response:
We already established that he won't take that course of action. As for the yes part...we'll have to see if Jamie is ready for the whole dish right now...
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2013 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 31
OMG....what will her answer be!? Also, I've been wondering if they used protection the FIRST time they had sex? I think an unplanned pregnancy will shake the story up even more, as well as, more vivid sex scenes. But, that's just me, still enjoying the story either way! :)
Author's Response:
We will all see what happens...
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2013 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 30
I am literally cryin now... :') that was so remarkable beautiful! Oh my gosh, I feel like that was magic. Seriously, you are such and incredible, amazing author. <3 Please never stop writing! :) <3