Date: Jul 01, 2024 10:58 am Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
I’m glad I started getting back into reading MJ stories.
Date: Nov 05, 2021 07:08 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Interesting
Date: Aug 13, 2015 07:50 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Sorry, I was having word finding issues. The hyperlinks. You hadn't had any warnings in those, which is where warnings ideally go, so I moved the in-summary warnings there.
Author's Response: The, "in Summary"? Huh? The wornings are the drop down menu thingys?
Date: Aug 12, 2015 08:06 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
moved your warning to the clickable warnings. Those help sort your story ;)
Author's Response: What's clickable worning mean?
Date: Oct 20, 2014 04:31 pm Title: He's Out of Our Lives( His Children Remember)
Can't wait for more. Hope the next chapter is longer
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not that good with misteries. To be honest, I don't know what the plan is going to be; but maybe I could just use that. I mean think about it, there only kids, how good can a plan can be?
Date: Oct 19, 2014 09:32 am Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Interesting
Author's Response: So, what do you think she could be afrade of?
Date: Sep 25, 2014 10:08 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
I admire your bravery for randomness. I understand the feeling of having so many ideas that you have no idea how to apply them all so you just jot them down. I too can relate to having homeless thoughts seeking a good story to call home. You're the opposite of cliché and that's why I like you. But be patient for others to understand this about you :)
Author's Response: Thanks, but please explain? Cleashay?
Date: Sep 25, 2014 10:00 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Aww, this was cute. Be honest, were u shy when writing this intimate moment? I'm asking because I was the first time I wrote one. I'm looking forward to reading more fantasies :D
Author's Response: Mmmmm, kind of, but not really.
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2014 08:02 pm Title: He's Out of Our Lives( His Children Remember)
Wow...this is so vivid. Well done. It makes me recall the heartbreak I felt when I first heard the news. But writing fan fiction about him & constantly listening to his music makes me miss him less because it is my way of engaging with him. Unfortunately, I know it isn't that easy for his children. God Bless them. Nice ending to this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, please read the others. You will most likely love them just as much as the first chapter. And, I know completely what you mean about reading fanfiction and listening to his music. I do it all the time, well I listen to his music all the time. I have times where I just don't feel like reading fanfics. It has nothing to do with Michael, but I just have those momants, you know?
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2014 09:17 pm Title: He's Out of Our Lives( His Children Remember)
Oh my!
Author's Response: Is that a good oh my, or a bad, oh my?
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2014 12:53 pm Title: He's Out of Our Lives( His Children Remember)
This was so very sad. If only he had known that he would never wake up.
Author's Response: Thanks soooooo much for reviewing my story!!! Go and read the first chapter. There's more to come, though this story is not going to be that much longer.
Date: Sep 13, 2014 07:50 am Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
You could make a story out of this like the girl in the story and Michael somehow know each other and he finds out about what is happening to her and saves her
Its just an idea
Author's Response: Thanks for the idea. I don't know if I'll do that, but I do have plans for chapters that will be very much like that. I have now put up the newest chapter and I hope you will like it. It was written with you in mind, seeing as you like to have things spaced a good ways a part for your reading pleasures. I hope you will continue to read my stories.
Date: Sep 13, 2014 12:11 am Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Wow that's real sad
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. So, yu like the way I left it as like kind of away to let readers make there own ending?
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2014 06:30 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Of course I did! I just reviewed on the wrong chapter. :3
And actually nevermind. You don't have to :) The story's great either way <3
Author's Response: Okay, but what made you change your mind?
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2014 03:21 pm Title: The Memoirs of Fantasies
Heyyyy, this is nice! I love it! :D
Michael's so sweet when it came to touching her. Such a gentleman :)
Buuut, I have to give a small ounce of respectful criticism if you don't mind :3
I had a small bit of trouble when it came to reading the chapter, 'cause I kinda had accidently read the same sentence over and over again because of how close the sentences are.
Could you be able to separate the sentences like this?
From hereI <-
To here I <-
So that I can read them better. I have a slight eye problem when it comes to reading words close together (it gives me a tiny headache sometimes), that's why I'm telling ya this :3
I'm really sorry about that, but I still loved this chapter :D
Author's Response: Huh? I'm not understanding how you want the sentinces to look. Did you read the other chapter yet?